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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

tu Jal Jal ke than di ho chuki hai. Yeh to koi aata ki awaz lag rahi hai.😆

Really??🤔🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
First of all thank you so much for update
such a big update so its worth to wait but doesn't mean you update so late Di
gap between updates is just so annoying you know but I understand you are busy with your personal commitment
now update is just fabulous you know
really you put great effort in this chapter
I really appreciate your hard work
but after reading this update I am so confuse and feeling helpless you know
I am just thinking to whose side I take
feeling really bad for both of them, both are deeply and madly in love but look that is main reason both are helpless now
why you write such a complicated love story but yes its really interesting to read but difficult to wait
jalal he is true in his nature
he is not betraying her , he do so much for her , he is doing something he is never done for anyone before, secretly protecting her
no matter what but its true that jodha betraying him, he trust her so much when his most trusted spy suspecting her but he denied his word because he is thinking from heart now
Di you write so beautifully jalal dilemma
I really feel for him after reading that part
he is the man who bring world in his feet but now he is feeling so helpless
when he know about her betrayal I don't know how he react
I am so scare to imagine that you know
love really powerful word na it's make people so helpless
God jalal wanted each and every single details about jodha and simultaneously want to protect her but who protect her from his angry
uff really jodha playing with fire she is definitely going to hurt herself
but Di jalal don't say anything about adham
I thought he is going to give adham good lesson to mess with his girl
Abdul and jalal bonding is so good and strong
both understand so well each other
oh so Abdul love Reva since five years and jalal don't have any idea about this
he is hurt to know that but Abdul was right jalal use force in this delicate matter so he don't tell him anything
really like the way jalal teasing him
poor Reva she is suffering just because of jodha
Abdul is so worried for her
now jodha feeling guilty because of her letter
poor girl waiting for jalal so eagerly but surya message come not jalal
lovely description of jodha attair
why always surya forget she is radha here not jodha
now Sufi definitely suspect her but now he is not sure but in future this is going to be big problem for jodha
conversation between surya and jodha is so emotional
my God jodha is deeply in love with jalal
now surya also know that
surya point of view is right about acharya I quess
why he chose jodha for this mission
she is princess after all her modesty is in trouble because of this mission
I don't know why I feel acharya hiding something
let's see he is positive or negative
jodha is who stole jalal decree
I never imagine that she is all the time in mission
hmm now one more thing added in her betrayal
poor jalal how painful for him to see jodha and surya together
how perfectly this particular scene is describe
nobody happy there
three of them is in pain
everybody has their own set of problem
Di why you giving them so much pain
plz Di do something good for them
jalal due to jealousy, frustration, he don't know what he is doing
I don't able to describe his painful situation
in tansen scene what he is doing is beyond his nature
in front of everyone he is romancing with pinaz
its really disgusting act in front of everyone
out of jealousy he indirectly point out finger in jodha character
this is something I don't like in him
I agree he is in painful situation , he is jealous over surya and jodha bonding but he is no right to do that
if he loves her how can he put question mark in her character
this is so painful for jodha
both bit carried out in front of everyone
both can't see each other in pain but both are sole reason for their pain
tansen scene is so emotional
and that gahzal is so smoothing and beautifully describe both jodha and jalal state of mind
tansen answer to jodha question is superb
last scene pinaz and jalal
I really feel pity for pinaz
women in that era they all do anything to grab the attention of their husband
only their body and beauty help them to survive
women condition in that era is so pitiful
after all pinaz is jalal wife but here she is begging for his attention
at last jodha come to meet him
I don't think she is coming because of mission
she just wanted to smoothen jalal pain
now its really interesting to read that part
and jalal never let her go
and about Chandra nandini
rajat tokas name is enough for me to watch anything
at last Di everything perfectly describe in this chapter
waiting eagerly for next chapter
but I quess you give next chapter of its hate or love story so we must wait for some more time
and all the very best of luck for your husband business
thanks for pm
Edited by binduprasad41 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
i will comment tomorrow di
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Posted: 8 years ago
why did you make the reply better than the comment ?
Okay . So replying to the reply 😆 ( I'm going to debate 🥱) . Yes , I understand the story is based on revenge and complicated stuff . But I also think one just can't betray someone they love , and yes jodha is feeling miserable for betraying him . And then there's this thing about him being king and her a maid . She's a bit too brave for her own good acting as she is , now that you pointed at it and yeah , you're right , he should not even bend down as much as he does . Guess my brain is totally full of fairy tales , like cindrella thing where the prince doesn't really care 😆but I know you're going to make it awesome ! Waiting for 17 th chappy 😆 update soon or I'll start filling the thread 😈😆 Love you too ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago


Thank you for making my comment appear plain before your reply 😆 And yep update soon . Love you 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
oooh amazing amazing amazing update diii its aweasome and too long thank you sooo much diii iam loving it very much love you sooo much thanks for pm diii plzzz continue soon and sorry for late..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi dear Shabivini,
Awesome chapter and very well written. But I have only one complaint that you update very late .keep us hungry, starving for months.

Please dont do that.
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OK. COMING TO YOUR WRITING , MUST SAY YOU BRING OUT EMOTIONS ESPECIALLY PAIN, LOVE AND ANGER SO WELL THAT YOU FEEL ALL THOSE WITHIN THE INNER RECESSES OF YOUR SOUL.

THE RENDITION AND THE FLOW OF THE STORY IS JUST SO GOOD AND EACH TIME YOU END THE STORY WHERE IT BECOMES MOST INTERESTING AND YOU ARE LEFT PONDERING AS TO WHATS COMING NEXT. aND THEN YOU LEAVE US LINGERING IN THIS POSITION FOR MONTHS TOGETHER. NOT GOOD ... PLEASE UPDATE WITHIN 10 DAYS . TWO MONTHS .. IS A BIT TOO MIUCH...

JALAL'S ANGER AND JEALOUSY JUSTIFIED BUT RADHA'S CHARACTER ASSASSINATION IS NOT . SO SOON JALAL WILL COME TO KNOW ABT RADHA'S REALITY ... OMG .. THIS BETRAYAL WILL PEIRCE JALALS HEART.. .. TOO BAD.. BUT THEN ANYTHING IS FAIR IN LOVE AND WAR. W

JUST CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE.. PLEASE UPDATE SOON... WE ARE STARVING ...


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Posted: 8 years ago
superbbb updates
great job
👏
Jodha has stolen the farman.OMGGG

Jodha a princess yet facing so much
King surya has now understood Jodha is in love with Akbar.
I hope he does not do anything stupid.


Akbar's advice to his friend about reva OMGGG

lets see will he follow his own advice and marry jodha.

waiting eagerly for reading the next chapter.
Wonderful update.
⭐️
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hi didu
It has been long tym since i came to forum
I read last two chappies as usual ur rocking
i really loved the way u carried the whole emotions of both jalal and jodha
the fight between jalal's heart and mind
hope he soon hears what his heart says
incase of jo she is also suffering the same but her betrayal towards jalal was really unexpected since jalal trusts her so much
He must be devasted when he learns the truth but i think he will never let his radha to be away frm him he cannot live without her
Surya's emotion his doubts jelosy were penned down beautifully
and over all its an osomatic update didu
loved it to the core
and the final part whr both were abt to hav convo i'm eagerly waiting fr nxt update didu
Thnks fr this wonderful update and pm
And yes I too watch chandra nandhini...
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Posted: 8 years ago
hey di, howz u ?
its really long i hv read an akdha story ..as i m very less active...
bt really happy to read such a long update...

update is fabulous..no need to say how u wrote every emotion so beautifully after all we all know ..what say frnds😉
well thetre r so many things happen in this update..
firstly how jalal heartbroken after listening radha's letter😭well i dont know whast to say..
both r heartbroken ..nd head overheels in love with each other bt the circumstances not letting thm to get close nd sought their differences n seems like its not going to b easy too.

ja fighting battle between his heart n mind nd he cant able to conclude what he should do or not .becoz one thing is sure that he cant love jo alot nd he is not going to let her go bt after readingthe letter he hving second thoughts..

ja getting every min info about radha nd amused to know her reply to adham..
he surely guessed that adham's intentions to harm whichhe will not going to happen to her...

ja n abdul convo part was really gud nd fun too..
abdul loves reva 😳nd that from past 5 yrs..grt..
although he not confessed his feelings yet he always look after her ..
ja surely hurt that his best buudy not confront with him bt he is happy to know about him..nd give ultimatum to confess his love to reva soon..

surya nd jo convo reveals so many things..
bt i wonder that if jo knowsthat it was adham behind moti's condition then why she hate him so much nd accuse him ..as far as i think his motive to capture rajputana will surely not b the only reason of her hatred..
even i too think that this acharya is also doubt his intentions using jodha for this misssion nd that in that way,,why he hv to choose raha to win ja trust,his heart nd get their secrets info..let see whats the mystery..

ja will surely shattered knowing that jo betrayed his trust when he found about the missing decree nd her motives to know about their weapons hide out nd most importanly her real idntity..

ja felt so much jealous nd furious to see thm so lcose nd seeing surya kissing jo's forehead add fuel to fire..he cant think straight now..

again both put their feelings in arguemnt forgetting their surroundings..
well i hate to admit to say bt i really hate ja pointing on radha's character even if his anger,frustration,hurt or whatever ..
he really not a way to compehend his anger nd heart break in this way..
suryaa realised that both ja ja madly love each other and their pain too bt he cant let jo to put herself in danger as he know ja may b love her bt after revealtion of truth can bring a strom which will ruined everything...


the ghazal was so soo beautiful nd perfectly defining the feelings ...tansen too indirectly tried to point out their feelings which they r hiding bt nevertheless it only upto thm to whther take the hint

pinaz tried to seduce ja bt ja lost in radha's thougts so much that he only think of radha in everything...
he cant able to get close to anyone as his heart n mind only lost i n radha..

bt whyy radha comes to meet him now????
waiting to know..
uppdate soon..


omg..after a long time i hv commented such a long commnt😆
bt i cant stop writing when it comes to ur stories😆..



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