RKG CHAPTER 16 page 117 POSTED Oct 19th - Page 81

Originally posted by: --a.ishu--

bhavi dii!! 🤗 so so so sorryyy!! I didn't comment on rkg chapters (or on any ff for that matter) for sooo long.. I was kinda stressed.. Now i have joined college.. And will have enough time to regularly comment on all the FFs that i read!! Sorry sorry sorryyy.. I really feel bad that i didn comment on any ff.. 😭 (ohh yeah.. Am a die hard fan of RKG who had once been super active on IF😆)

Originally posted by: harini1482002

It was a nice update and I'm looking forward to reading more of this .

First of all sorry for late reply... I was busy on writing new chapter in my me time😆

But I'm sorry I'm feeling a bit dreadful to even guess what's going to happen .

This story is too dangerous ... way different than Is it hate or love... I would say enjoy the moments of their depth of the love... of course it is even scary to think ... about when... and what .. and why 😆

I want to be honest di , you're one of the best writers in the forum and your plots are always believable and realistic , also quite good . And more importantly , I think it's the way you pour emotions into it and the way you develop the plot gradually and steadily .

Me blushing... Thank U so much for appreciating my work.😳 Me... speechless ... Such a compliment... feels my hard work pays off...

RKG is sort of my personal favourite for fantasies , and I always imagined jodha dramatically making it known that she's a princess ( that won't be , of course ) .

She I don't like my main character to be perfect... They should some weakness... for example... her anger and audacity... and Jalal his ego... Both are not perfect but perfect for each other...

I know even my 11 year daughter wants Jalal to know she is a princess... but this story is not a simple love story, it's based on revenge... and lot more to it... but love is the prime factor with complications.

Not like I want that , but I don't want to think about the drift that will come between them when the truth is known , that jodha was never ' Radha ' and she deliberately betrayed him . I don't like the fact that jodha is going to betray him ,

Well Jodha is on mission... and this mission is not an ordinary mission... His troop on the border of Amer ... her mother land... she has choose between her motherland and him... and unfortunately decision is not on her hand... Guruji takes a big part in it... Also even though she is princess and took such a risk and came all way to Agra palace so obviously she is going to do something which is consider betrayal... but sometimes everything is fair in love and war... And trust me I will give you strong justification for her betrayal in next chapter and U will be shocked may be... lot of them will be shocked I guess...

I guess I want her to confess to Jalal, though I know he won't be able to trust her , but at least then she wouldn't have betrayed him and he would know she trusted him . And di , if you don't make her confess , please soften the blow na .

One of them will confess in next chapter... I can reveal that much😆 She is completely fallen for him but you won't like her soft... U want her to be strong na...

Since I have read both your stories and found all the chapters in both emotionally touching , I know I will cry buckets when you write about the drift ( many would , I guess . ) .

Actually I enjoy to write sad emotions... I don't know why... I guess that is a big problem... Last chapter suppose to be 5000 words but I stretched to almost 13000 words... didn't even spare Tansen... He was senti as well😆

I perfectly understand their mood swings ( and their on and off relationship ) and I surely see from their point of view how they feel for each other's action . But I don't like it that Jalal can be dominating as he pleases and not Jodha .

Hello... Jalal is a king... she is just a maid... and it is obvious he going to show attitude but he loves her more than she loves him.

Sure she is courageous , for her time but I think I like my heroines strong , determined and unbreakable.

I personally believe when you truly falling love nothing helps... other than tears... You become so weak in front of the person you love... you agree to everything... but here Radha dominate him many time.

Jodha is courageous , untame and wild , willfull, stubborn , humble and kindhearted . She's got all that is necessary be a heroine . But I felt she lost all those qualities when she was with Jalal. She never gave him a real chance ;and he didn't treat her well either .

He is treating her better than Rukaiya😆Usse Jyada kya kar sakta hai😆 His hands are tied too... He never proposed to anyone... he bend down and proposed her... almost begged her and some times he gets angry at her just because he loves her...

And I also didn't like it that she was answering quietly and respectingly to hamida ammi and salima Begum ( though I guess I understand that's what any sensible person would do ) .

U Answered..correctly.😆

And lastly , I'm not a big fan when it comes to love triangles but I perfectly understand it is important for the jealousy part and even then I'm not really anticipating reading more about jodha and surya.

Trust me it's not love triangle... Surya knows from beginning she never loved him. So I am not going focus on Surya. Surya is somewhat her support in her mission.

And from the last bit of the chapter , I get it that jodha is going to consider ( but then , who won't ? ) but I'm worried how surya will end up feeling because she will get his hopes high and suddenly it will be Jalal again...

Don't worry Surya will not be heart broken... but he will be too sad for Jodha's pitiful condition.

But anyway di , will be waiting for your next update and sorry if anything I have written above offends you , they weren't meant to .

Are Yaar... I loved your comment... You have not at all offended me... This story is too complicated...many readers has different pov.

You're without doubt better than many novel writers and I guess what I written is my own personal feelings about the story and they probably don't match what others think of it . Hope you find time to update soon 😊

Me blushing again... Thank U so much for reading and commenting... LOVE U😃

Originally posted by: mohammadnoureen

Superb chapter bhavini... It was a power packed roller coaster filled chapter. A lot has happened in this chapter. I loved my firey jodha/radha. The way she answered back to hamida, it left hamida all quiet and shocked..she was speechless. She thought correct that only this is the girl who can rule this saltanat beside Jalal... &I I am happy the way she rejected adhams orders to entertain him for the night. But he bloody.. 16yr old girl.. 😡 Ek number ka kamina hai yeh adham khan.

Noureen... My sweet Heart... UR comment😃 I bow down😆 I am glad U enjoyed so far

Roller coaster Ride always free...

Kamina Kutta Adham... I want to kill him so badly...

Faisal khan can see way more than what Jalal sees Radha as. He might get to the bottom of this. 😲

Obviously... Love is blind na... Jala is perfect example...hahah

Hmm salimas reaction was a little weird lol, but salima is salima. Is always straight forward!!

Jalal didn't leave jodha a chance to take her decision. Be his concubine or marry tha King and he will destroy them 😆

Stubborn jalalmlike always.

Jodha tho jallu ki hai aur rahegi. So I saw this type of options given to jodha by Jalal haha.

I enjoyed this chapter a lot. It was wonderful seeing many political topics being mentioned here. Jaziya etc.

lovey as 😃

Aree... Thoda filler is necessary... Jalal has others things to work on other than Radha...😆

Ah waiting for next chapter of RKG or hate or love!!

Sorry tu jaanti hai I've been busy with work nowadays. And here daylight savings ke wajhe se talking with you is getting hard for me 😡

Ek Ghanta aage jo ho Gaya.

Lets talk in weekend... Lets plan out...

Anyway time milega tho tum he buzz karti hoon. Love you <3

LOVE U SWEET HEART

Originally posted by: Ishitafan

omg dear it was absolutely fantastic.

I LOVE OMG😳 EXPRESSION😆 I am so happy to read UR comment... and thank U for posting detail comment quickly... U gave peace to my restless aatma😆

i must say this the first chapter that i felt both of them are clear from tgeir heart that they both love each other.

Both are deeply in love with each other... but they both are having their own problem😃

it was beautiful but painful.i had little hope that may be it was not radha who stole that order.

Lot of them guessed it but hoped they wrong... Hello Radha is here on mission... not to fall in love... she has do something otherwise you all will say later... what radha has done so far...😆 I have to answer to many readers na😆

but yarr why radha.jalal will not forgive her .

If he comes to know... I bet he will not😕

he trusts her soo much.he will be heart broken after knowing jalals intentions.and

if radha knows that it was adham who has harmed moti then why the hell she wants to kill jalal.yarr

Let's hold this question till next chapter... will reveal... a huge secret. Radha does have valid reason to hate him.

i cant even imagine how jalal wil react after knowing her betrayal.and jodha crying before surya it is really really beautiful the way you have written it.i can feel her pain clearly.you are true villian here

Me Villian😆

darling why are you making them suffer soo much dear.

I love complication... 😉 Sidha siddha pyar toh koi bhi kar sakta hai😆

i enjoyed suryas character also.i was almost having a heart attack thinking that guard will say about radha and jodhas confusion to shehansha.

That was only to create tension...

may be you are planning something big with that.it was cute and heart touching revelation about abdul and reva.and jalal and abdul convo is also very beautifully done

I am so happy for my new loving duo😃

i dont think radha came for another betrayl.she is tooo emotional right now for another betrayal or may be ready i dont know

UR first guess is right... They need to have heart to heart talk without any fight.

.but please yarr dont make things between them tooo worse than already they are.

From this point onward... their love will get strong every moment and at the same problem will worsen

i dont think shehansha will let radha go beacuse i dont want him to let her go.

She wants him to release her... he loves her for the sake her happiness he agreed.

and i dont want radha to further betray shahenshah.

Hehehe...

thank you very much for the chapter.loved it and enjoyed it thouroughly

Ohh... Thank U so much

.you know actually i cant read too dark or tooo emotional scenes.i always prefer lighter ones .but in your stories even if it is too strong also i can take it.you know it goes in a flow.

Aww... So sweet... that's big compliment...

i am watching chandra nandindi dear but i cant get myself to like lead characters rightnow let us see may be eventually we may like it.

I agree... It is too difficult to see our Jalal with someone else

thank you for the update once again dear.take care.p

LOVE U CUTIE PIE😛

Originally posted by: megala74

bhavi its super i dont know how to command each and every words iovingly and enjoyable please dont take long time to post next chapter eagrly waiting for jalal and jodha talks thank you for your great effort to enjoy us with your great stories

I am so glad U enjoy this story😛

Thank u so much for reading and commenting😃

best wishes for your hubby new buisness dont forget to update early❤️

Thank for the wishes 😊 I will try my best to post soon