RKG CHAPTER 16 page 117 POSTED Oct 19th - Page 55

hey bhavini di🤗 how are you doing? I will read the update in 2-3 days, have to submit my assignments for all five subjects so not getting enough time to read till then you can reply on my last update's comment😉

Originally posted by: mamtasingla

hey bhavini di🤗 how are you doing? I will read the update in 2-3 days, have to submit my assignments for all five subjects so not getting enough time to read till then you can reply on my last update's comment😉

OOPS I completely missed out... I will reply today😃🤗

Lovely chapter di love u ur work always make me speechless u r most talented woman love u

Di each chapter you are just shining more and more. Your writing is so enchanting that when I saw my email notification I smiled like a duffer. I love all the character the way you have described. Adham, hey Bhagavan while reading I cursed him with all bad words I knew. I cried reading about 16 year old concubine you know the worst part, she is serving him for last three years. So she was only 13 years I cried thinking about it, too sad to read. I read your reply to one of the readers. I was kind of in confusion what purpose of this concubine scene. But it makes sense. Other than Adham Di I love everything about this chapter. He is junglee. Ruku and Adham chi chi di don't do that. Ruku is Jalal's chief queen don't tie up this two together. For the sake of royal morals. I don't care she use him but don't demote her by physical relation. You know when I read about Farman my eyes were rolling with my brain. Definitely Radha. No doubt about it. You wrote Radha thinking, no one knows what I have done. Hmmm. Chalo maan liya Radha ne churaya hai par kyu? Why she stole it? Confuse? Maybe Rukaiya then, she can trap Radha? And that make sense because on the meena bazar day she came to see Jalal in his room. Plus she was angry and maham told her to take revenge. That it, it is Rukaiya. She has motive and Radha doesn't. Yeh Rukaiya ki to aesi ki tesi kar du mein. Reva ke piche kyu padi hai ab. I hate Rukaiya. She deserves Adham. Di I requested last time Rahim scene but no Rahim again. Me too sad.

Di I was so impressed at first by Faizal the way you described him in beginning. Radha was kind of worried and feared after seeing him. But Jalal ke samne uski chutti ho gayi. Bichara do labz bhi bol nahi paya. Ek baat batau, while waiting he could get information but instead he was spending time with a young concubine. Chi chi chi di. Yeh sare pure din lage rehte hai ladkiyo ke sath. I like Jalal's angry and upsetting glare for a second muje laga yeh abhi bathroom jane ki chutti magega Jalal se. haha

But Jalal ke samne acche acche ki lag jati hai to yeh koun hai. Finally he able to focus on his work but I liked how Jalal knows how to deal with his people. It was enjoyable to read detective work.

Hai Raam di kya message bheja hai Radha ne Jalal ko. And Hamdia and Radha's talk. I can't tell you how much I enjoyed. I want to see this fire in Radha par di Jalal ke saath mein thoda Jayada hi ho raha hai. She hurt him so much. I understand pain in Jalal's silence. Sometime you need words to feel other person pain. I just loved how Jalal reacted to the letter. I had tears in my eyes. I feel he is so helpless and Radha is a mean girl. Why she is saying him heartless. He cares for her so much to bhi aese kyu bolti hai. She purposely hurting him. Apni Saas ka gussa pati pe. Hahaha. Radha sach tikhi mirchi hai. Salima is so graceful. She understands Jalal better then Hamida and Rukaiya. I somehow don't like this hamida I know she is Mariam but I was happy Radha ne usko achi tasan di.

Di what will happen. I thought you are going to start with Surya and Radha but bichara Surya ab tak room mein beth ke Radha ke khwab dekh raha hai. Next chapter mein usko thoda kam dedo. Hahaha. Adham ab kuch toh karega. Par jab Jalal hai toh fikar kyu. Ek baat batau di yeh Radha thodi pagal hai kyu pange leti hai. Jara pyar se na bol deti to kya bigdta. Khamkha pange leti hai upar se dhamki Jalal ki. Yeh Bndi ajib hai.

Di again I wrote my bakwas but honestly chapter is mind blowing. I love everything about it. Update soon and thank you for posting on FB you have updated. Vese I got the email. Love you di.

Bhavini di,

super duper chappy..i seriously doubt about mental condition of radha...if she does not want a married person in her life...why she is devastated?her turmoil is effecting her mission...i think she deserves a better person who love her unconditionally..no one want to share his husband how painful it would be...mere thought of this make me insane.i feel their pain within me... i was looking forward for more jealousy in this track with suya arrival as u promised. what a contradiction?claiming himself a lover is going to enjoy tonight with pinaj begum,is he so weak to control his carnal cravings? whereas the question of lost decree i doubted maham as well as radha too,because the disappearance of that rajwansi soldier is fishy.honestly these days i am aching for akdha moments which is key factor of ur story.as usual like button does not work.a very very big thanks for pm and update soon can not wait to see his reply to radha'letter.bhavi.. please forgive me if my comments not upto ur expectation..dear i always find myself miserable when i imagine him with others women.i know as a reader i am a jerk and as a writer it is ur right to write according to ur plot.please bear with me.

Originally posted by: mamtasingla

hey di...wassup? how r u ? i know i am superlate but something comes up so i couldnt able to read earlier but now i got time and i am superexcited as you know THIS IS MY FAVOURITEEE STORY😳

First of all I am really sorry for forgetting to reply such lovely comment.. I remember reading it few time.. I enjoyed it and forget to reply...

Awww. UR Fav story😳 Thank U sweet heart🤗

marvellous astounding fantablous update as expected from you di❤️🤗

Thank U so much😃

hamida is tensed seeing his son's obsession for radha but i really dont understand why she is worried now?😕 i mean to say she is happy knowing that her son is attracted to radha...i thought she is ok with jalal-radha's relation

At first she was happy with their relation.. but she realized Radha won't accept his proposal to be his concubine and Jalal might accept as his official begum... that is why her attitude change toward Radha...

hamida-jalal convo is nice...much needed talk😊 hamida wanted to make her son understand that he cant possess radha, that he cant control radha's lyf and she is right in her place thinking about her son and the SULTANATE but this trigerred jalal breaking the last ounce of his patience leading to bursting all his emotions😭

Jalal's emotions were on verge to bust and Hamida's as always putting sultanate above all hurt him further.

''You know Mariam Makhani... Your entire life has been about the sulatnate only... You have never cared even once for your kids and their needs. You are a hopeless, self-centered mother. I was, I am and I will... always be a Shahenshah for you... nothing more. Even after knowing everything, today you are just looking out for the Sultanate... what a selfish mother you are.'' jalal feels hurt talking like this to his mother and leaves the chamber

Jalal was harsh but I wouldn't say wrong... I feel none of them were wrong. as a Mariam Makhani she was right but she chose wrong timing.

On other side, the princess jodha is waiting for her jalal😆 remembering the past incidents... she is getting frustrated as she is not used to such treatment jalal saw radha sitting on bench gracefully like a royal princess unknown to him that she is truly a princess😛

Poor Jo...😕

jodha vent out all her frustration on jalal unknown to her jalal's state...jalal choked her to death but somehow controlled himself😲

😆

jalal is getting distracted seeing radha in that attire😳 hence he asked her ''Why are you wearing this royal dress today???'' to which radha replied very audiciously😉

''If you are asking about my preference then honestly I don't prefer you in this dress. I would rather prefer you in nothing at all...''😳😳😳 aww😛😆

but jodha said that she is comfortable wearing such attires in front of surya annoying jalal...jalal calmly asked her again and she innocently replied that she is wearing this dress to impress a person who came to see her

hehehe... Radha is not less... she is sometime too arrogant...and loves to hurt Jalal with her sharp tongue and sarcasm..

jalal hoping that radha might refuse surya vadan's proposal but radha said ''Why would I reject his proposal?''

But it's true why??? he wants her as his concubine.. and Surya loves her and wants to marry her officially

''He is a classic rakehell, selfish person who cares about nobody but himself. He doesn't want to offer what Surya is offering and on top of it, he is threatening me as if he owns me.''

jalal threatening jodha like he has control on jodha's life, like jodha is his jaagir😛

He seriously thinks that... she belongs to him only

''She is just my childhood friend you idiot... Nothing more nothing less, and she has placed this painting here herself, I don't even look at it anymore.'' kaash yahan rukaiya bhi hoti😛

Rukaiya hoti toh jal ke... mar gayi hoti😆

'This girl is impossible to deal with. God knows what will she do after accepting me, she will definitely make me dance on her tune with her antics.'😆

😆she is immposible

waise jodha ki painting hai kahan??? where jalal has kept it? jodha is talking about rukaiya but jalal wanted to talk about US😳

Aree... last chapter mein he talked with her painting... it's in his personal chamber where no one is allowed.

for the very first time *period* jalal talk about his feelings to anyone...their relation take a step ahead without their knowledge😊 Sometimes i feel bad for jalal that he cant get what he needs the most...a companionship, person who loves him without any selfish reason😭

I feel sorry for him too King has to walk alone sad reality...

jodha is trying her level best to hide her feelings from jalal but jalal can read her emotions so correctly ''How can he read my thoughts so clearly? How can he see through my soul? God, how do I hate this arrogant man?'' jodha failed to hate him, she cant control her feelings

😃

''What the hell... Is it that obvious in my expressions and behaviour that I am madly in love with him and jealous of that bitch? Isn't he the one who is admitting his sentiments and love for me indirectly? I can't take any more of his arrogance, either he admits that he loves me or let me walk away.'' jodha will not let jalal know her actual feelings for him bcoz of her so called mission😡 she is denying her feelings everytime

She has own reasons though😕

but the way jalal claim that she belongs to him make her elated😃...she is liking his possessiveness somewhere but she cant imagine herself with a person who is womanizer and have thousands of women in his harem

She has fallen in love with him... poor girl...

'' My mind constantly warns me but to the opposite my subconscious trusts you blindly which is very rare and unusual. Sometimes, I see an immnese, unfathomable love for me in your eyes and sometimes you look at me like I am a horrible criminal who took away everything from you. I am unable to solve the complicated riddle that you are.'' jalal is suspicious about jodha for the first time...jalal try to find out that what jodha is hiding from him but jodha shrugged it off

Yapp that was very first time he doubted😕

jalal tactfully almost make radha to confessed her feelings for him but our radha composed herself on time, shit...yeh dono itni jaldi nahi confess karne wale😡

Heheh...Don't worry one more chapter😆

jalal kissed on radha's cheeks😳 magical moment and jalal said 'please' like really😳

Man is in love and he knows he has hurt her many time... and he knows how to play with emotions well enough... he knows when to bend down... Now Surya is in competition... and if he behave same she will say yes to Surya... then he don't have choice other then fight for his love..

jalal knows that he is not successful in convincing radha so he vowed that ''I will not hurt you ever again, now my actions will reveal how deeply I care for you and how much I love you...'' really excited to see the brand new romantic hero😃

Yaapp let's see how he will prove his true love

i thoroughly enjoyed the update, this is a treat for me to read your updates👏👏👏...i really loved the update especially the very last part😃 where jalal has small pov's ''But isn't it so that I am the super power and if I feel helpless for my own sake then what good this throne is for me. I need to step up and fight for myself... my own happiness. I have suffered enough and given plenty to my people throughout my lifespan... why can't I fulfill my own desire?''

he almost own entire Hindustan but still so helpless...

Thankew sooo sooo muccchhh for such an amazing updatee...enjoyed every bit of the update, there are many dialogues which amaze me⭐️ well written and each update making me more desperate to read more so please update soonish😃

loved u tons❤️❤️❤️ and alot of hugggiiieeesss to you🤗

LOVE U SWEET HEART... I AM SO THANKFUL TO YOU NOT ONLY FOR COMMENT BUT FOR EVERY UPDATE REQUEST... MEANS A LOT TO ME... THANK U😳

precap is interesting...adham wanted to meet radha in his private chamber😛

seems adham ke acche din khatam ho gaye😆😉

I WONT DENY THAT...

1. If U were the writer of this story, would U alter anything in this chapter? If so... WHAT? And Why?

no di...I don't want any change, i really loved the way it is progressing❤️

I AM SO HAPPY 🤗

2. Do U think story moving at the correct pace?

yeah...i am loving the story but update is not please try to update sooner *PRETTY PLEASE*

HEHEH... I will try

3. Who is UR favorite character in this story? (Jalal... Jodha... Rahim... Ruku... Hamida... Surya) why?

My favourite is Radha..not any particular reason, i really loved her i don't know why but the main reason is her attitude. In serial she is very kind hearted and Mother India types but in your story, she has a upper hand on jalal😉

U GOING TO LOVE RADHA IN NEXT CHAPTER... 😆