RKG CHAPTER 16 page 117 POSTED Oct 19th - Page 53

loved it, as always a master piece . Suspicions on Radha being only a maid is being raised. How could do jo say yes to surya? Chalo chodo I'm getting hooked to ur story more and more after each chappy. Thanks for the update and the om. And plz update the next chappy asap

Luvd it. After jodha akbar is gone this is the best way to connect with those memories.but felt bad the way everyone treated jodha.though she has come on mission it is agreeable that no woman in this world would like to be treated as 'second woman' or concubine just for the sake of being Luved.i felt bad for jalal as well.if he has to get her he should make firm decision and shud official marry her and give the status of wife

Bhavi wonderful no words eagrly waiting jalal reaction & SPY information about jodha please take small effort to update soon because so many of thems heart touching story dying to read i do know how to express my feelings enjoy your life and please give joy from your writing which our sorrows gone when we reading your storys take care bye

Super chapter di ,it is worth to wait for ur update but don't make me to wait for long next time.then I liked radha's attitude and revenge in starting chapter eventhough I don't know for what she taking revenge on him but I feel pitty for jalal he truly loves her , I can't able to imagine what he will do when he find out about radha (jodha) he is getting suspicious about her and about faisal I think he will find out about radha soon and I liked the way jalal think that's my radha when todar mal described about her intelligence and coming to radha's reply to adham is super and her message to jalal is awesome what an attitude yaar then I get surprised when jalal understand that she vented out hamidha's anger on him, I think he will be frustruated and go to meet radha. Then coming to hamidha and radha's conversation I hate hamidha she doesn't think about radha's state she only think about her son and sultanate, she clearly know that he will not leave radha then also insisting radha to leave but her reply "I am very well aware that you are way much wiser than me but after perceiving the situation I feel you need a direction to tackle the matter correctly... You are opposing towards the wrong target so I would guide you to approach your son who is obsessed with idea of possessing me at any cost... Besides he is the one who possesses the power to release me from his forceful capture..." not only hamidha I too became speechless, paa what a intelligent girl then salima's advice and sarcasm I think her feeling is reasonable ,I want jodha to feel little guilt for playing with jalal's emotion.Then coming to your writing skill is awesome while reading ur chap I feel like iam watching it with my own eye bcoz u amazingly writted all character's emotions , expression I don't have words to explain I hope u understand I becaming ur very big fan chapter by chapter, eagerly waiting for next chap plz ufdate soon .

Most waited chapter is here, sorry for late reply di...

When shahid informed about adham's letter to radha she thought "Finally, the awaited message has arrived"... what does it mean??? She was waiting for it??? Totally confused ...!!!!!!!!!

Leader of the spy agents Faisal Khan- when I read it, I was scared for radha, she was there only and he developed doubt on her...not shocking at all... I think radha asked purposefully in front of faisal about adham's letter so that he will tell jalal about it...I genuinely think so...

Faisal have a doubt on radha, I think he knows jodha, he just need to put the pieces together and I think radha knows that. He even explained that she resemble very close to someone who he is unable to recall...

'Hmm... now it's clear, why so much fuss about an ordinary maid, Radha... Why Shahenshah wants to keep an eye on this beauty, must be personal fondness not political doubt, regardless of that I am certain, I have seen her somewhere... Why cannot I recall??? And the way she carries herself and talks so regally, she cannot be just a mere maid!!! My instinct never fails, something is fishy about this girl... She is too good to be true... I will have to discuss this matter with Shahenshah, besides he has a vast vision and never fails in judging people...'

Poor radha... 1^st jalal and now him... Why is everyone doubting her, I don't think she gave any signals as such knowingly... radha is again on her mission, she is hoping that he will take her to the weapon storage centre... I think that could backfire on her somehow...leader of spy and even jalal is losing trust on her...

Jodha's and radha's mind conflict was interesting to read...I loved it, nicely written and justifying both character ...jodha's princesses attitude with mind and radha's loved for jalal...

A deafening noise rebounded from inside, 'No... He loves me... I love him...'

OMG at last she realize that she loves him... My heartfelt at peace...

Ruq condition have been described perfectly...

"Change Reva's duty from special begum's maid to dungeon cleaning from five in the evening to five morning..."- first I was confused is it a typing mistake that instead of radha you wrote reva but then adham was mentioned and I was shocked, is she planning to send adham at the servant quarters to get radha at night???

Adham's and ruq description was convincing, ruq's character is discussing...I don't blame her and I genuinely felt bad for adham for once. Radha's letter for adham was brave , I think she knows the consequences from her move( that maybe reva warned her about adham). Adham's reaction after reading the letter was expected. Poor maid...

Okay I need to write it here, the transaction between the situation is crap...di you are making the story progress but it don't add up...reading your previous chapter the transaction between the situations was smooth and linked while in this chapter it is genuinely crap...

Now jala's decrees is missing and my mind flew that radha took it...when she saw faisal she even thought that he will know what she did and maybe she took the decrees from his chamber that day . jalal trust her but not that much...He is even allowing faisal to nullify his doubt by his means...is jalal loosing trust?? What will happen when he will know her true identity??

Faisal told jalal that adham called radha for the night but his expression was content, I think he knows that his radha would give a good answer to it...but the consequences will not be good..Did jalal forget the look on adham's face when he saw radha??

Radha and hamida convo was interesting ...hamida indirectly scolded her for her behavior with shahensha that morning...hamida's behavior is changing from motherly loving person to sultanat oriented queen from last many chapter, maybe after jalal's behavior with her that morning hamida got that only if radha leaves the palace then only the situation can be handled . radha's reply to hamida was shocking, she was protecting her self-respect but yet I feel her arrogance and anger is taking over her...even hamida was silent after hearing her reply and understood why jalal have gone crazy for her...hamida is taking decision as a queen and order radha to leave, would definitely have bad outcome..radha even spoke out that once she showed motherly love and stopped her from going and now she is asking her to leave...

"Respectable Mariam Makani, I am very well aware that you are way much wiser than me but after perceiving the situation I feel you need a direction to tackle the matter correctly... You are opposing towards the wrong target so I would guide you to approach your son who is obsessed with idea of possessing me at any cost... Besides he is the one who possesses the power to release me from his forceful capture"- her arrogance is taking over...She is frustrated I understand but I feel in this chapter the emotions are not justified...

"Remember your confines little lady... Your arrogance is way bigger than your pity size... So listen carefully if you love your life... Once again, I am repeating this for your betterment, and yes you can definitely consider this as a threat or a warning... You are and you will always be a black tainted shadow on Mughal Sultanate... It doesn't matter you choose King Surya Vadan or not... You better leave Agra by tomorrow night or be ready for the consequences..."- I never thought that hamida would say such words...I read it twice just to be sure...her character is taking a political turn...her dialogue are well written and her point well described...

Jalal and todarmal financial conversation was nice and that including radha as well...the thing that I don't understand why to doubt radha now?? Even when todarmal appreciated radha , jalal showed some resentment . 'That's my Radha...'- this line made me smile but then again he should some trust issues ...

Radha's letter for jalal was a frustration due to hamida...but yet again I felt jalal lacked some emotion...unexpected letter from her that too telling that hamida order her to get married to surya and she have decided to accept it and yet he seems quite calm , maybe because of abdul but after he left also he handle it coolly...she blamed him not having heart many times, told that he affect her,etc...does she want him to stand up for her??

Feeble memory dies down quickly... - this line is a winner for me...my heart ache for them both.. I am in shock at myself how quickly my heart turned into iron and my tears dried up... Maybe now I can claim like you always do... I don't own a heart...- I so feel bad for her..she is pouring her heard at it..telling him that she have become like him...

To be honest di, I would have loved to read jalal's state of mind while abdul read the letter...I could give thousand rupees to know what was going on in his mind, what he thought about each line that she wrote. At what point he blamed hamida for interfering , and at what radha for loosing up hope, how he felt when she wrote that he affect her and then that it will pass away??and when she described what type of husband she desire??when she decided that surya is the only choice ?? and when she wrote if he officially propose her that she may say yes?? So many questions di...

Does she really want me to let her go??- I thought that NOOO she wants you to fight for her... Radha, why are you playing with our emotions...- our, that made me smile...

Salima's reaction to radha was not expected..."The way you have affronted Shahenshah and the Mughal guest today in front all the royal's, I thought you had forgotten your status in the palace..."- never thought she would say that..."Yes... I do think Shahenshah was wrong to forward a hand towards a maid with a statement Walk with me... Yes... Shahenshah was wrong to Rukaiya begum, instead of supporting her publically he chose you and not only that, but he announced you the winner of the Meena Bazar... Yes... Shahenshah was wrong to show concern towards you in front of so many people when you fainted and I don't even want to talk about how he erroneously behaved this morning..." After a brief pause, she continued in a soft tone "I do not think you are at fault Radha but do not play with his emotions... He is a lonely broken soul if you can't accept him, then for god sake, LEAVE!!!" - LEAVE seriously did she say that...never thought that she would say that out loud...salima and hamida both care for jalal but I felt it was quite rude for them to tell her to leave after knowing what jalal thought about her and that no matter what he is determined to make her stay in agra...but to be honest after reading the chapter I am not sure about it myself...will he fight for her??/or let her go???

"As far as my perceptive, he will not force you directly to consent his proposal but he won't tolerate, you accept someone else and if you do, I can assure the outcome will be brutal... The best alternative for you and King Surya Vadan, you deny King Surya Vadan's proposal and leave Agra... Shahenshah might allow you to leave"- okay now this is brutal, I am feeling all the emotions here...i hate salima for saying that, I feel sorry for radha, I think radha's arrogance brought this on her, that salima and hamida have turned this way, I also feel salima is right on this...I am so confused with my own emotions at this point...

"Before consenting King Surya Vadan's proposal, I will make him aware of the situation... Let's see how brave and keen he is to accept me after hearing the truth..." - wise decision maybe...that reminds me, he wanted to go out some were and take radha with him...what happened to that di???surya even wanted to meet radha once??I thought I would see that but it was not even mentioned...maybe next chapter...

I loved the chapter as always but I feel it was in pieces...it was not a roller coaster ride of emotions di... I love the emotional content of your writing the way you develop the characters slowly and tastefully is what I look forward in reading...as you change the situation and emotions as a reader my emotions also change with it...the story is moving forward fast but di don't lose the essence in transaction between the situation which I felt in this chapter...and for jalal, I thought you expressed him less here ...I know you are busy..take your time to write next chapter...I am eagerly waiting to read what will happen next di??? I am sorry if you didn't like anything that I wrote...I know I never wrote this bad but I thought to give an honest reply...

Love you di❤️...waiting to read more ...loved your writing...

one more amazing chappy, Bhavini...the war btw Jalal and Radha is becoming very dangerous, still very interesting...just feel sympathy (not pity) towards both...though not for their love , but the fight they have to face due to circumstances...

abt HB , the only thing I always felt is may be she is kind and all but still she is more selfish and coward...don't get me wrong but even while watching the show, I many times felt these things abt her...here too she claims that all she wants is Jalal's happiness and peace of his mind, but she has come to see Radha and her pride for some time, and she very well knows , how much Radha worships her values ...so can't HB , even for a sec think, if Jalal forcefully takes radha and then she ends her life, Jalal will never forgive himself entire life...if according to her threat, Radha marries Surya, and Jalal kills Surya, then Radha will again end her life, and that will turn Jalal into such a monster , who never can turn into a good soul...he then can be cruel and more cruel further..so Jalal's marriage with Radha is the only option to change Jalal into better, happy , kind and loving person...but for HB her royalty is more imp that her son, and so I m happy Radha put the blame on her...had HB supported Jalal , or encouraged Jalal to marry Radha, she would have got back her son... and Jalal is powerful enough to control any revolt that may happen if he marries Radha...only he needs someone to support him unconditionally...but felt like HB never really understand her own blood...anyway, her decision...

abt Jalal, then loved his shrewd uncanny nature...but felt bad for him...even being the King of Kings, he is so alone...even having so many ppl around him , in his life, there is no one whom he really can call his...all his own ppl r backstabbers...and he knows it very well..all he wants is the love of the person , he loves..and how I wish that spy Faizal, remembers Jo and tell Jalal abt her being a princess...but I know then Jalal will announce her as enemy spy or traitor ...but just a wish, that after knowing that she is a princess, Jalal proposes her to marry him else threats her to kill as a traitor...surely Jo will marry him😉😆...anyway, just a fun...

and abt that farmaan, then I feel stolen by Ruku Darling and kept in Radha's room to frame her...😉...sorry, but can't think anything better for Ruku , ever..😛

one more thing Bhavi, Jo waiting for Adham's msg...is she happy that it was told in front of Jalal's trusted man and so Jalal will be well informed and hence adham's days r now numbered.???

abt Jo , I mean Radha, will post tomorrow...after one more reading...

wow di fabulous chapter , marvelous update finally after long time u update jodha in fierce mode but i think here jalal is also right in his place and jodha is also right in her place first ever hamida scold jodha poor her but jalal is right on his place its very big thing that he hold one maid in front of his all begum and also scold ruqs for her arrogancey jodha need to understand that she is in maid role but jodha is also right she has right to choose lifepartner . no one can force her adham just cheap man now jodha need to face adham , ruqs , hamida , and jalal is also there now faisal is also there. ohhh its soo much interesting plzz update as soon as possible and plz unite joja asap now want to some romance between jo - ja ty for pm

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Originally posted by: ketaki1

Love you di❤️...waiting to read more ...loved your writing...

Ketaki I really appreciate your genuine opinion about this chapter.

I truly loved it...🤗 you have given a chance to defend me😆, Ketaki please do comment like this frequently😛... I love it when readers give me constructive suggestions. No doubt I am going to write my pov on this chapter but I will keep in the mind readers love to read emotional side of Jalal and Radha which you think is missing in this chapter.

I will reply to your comment in detail later.

Your first disappointment you indicated, the chapter was in a bit pieces and not in a flow. Before posting I even felt the same but then again to looked at closely and felt it was ok...

the first event as soon as she comes out of Jalal's chamber happens between spy and Radha... and she received a message from Adham... You feel everything in pieces because too many things happened within few minutes.

Radha just came out of Jalal's chamber, she didn't get a chance to ponder over their meeting and she got a message from a guard that Adham has invited her. She was looking forward to Adham's attentions since she came to the palace, and she noticed the way he was looking at her in the function, she knew anytime he will invite her to spend the night. So instantly she thought... most awaited message.

Before she could leave, Spy saw her and heard the Adham's message... Here I introduced a new character so I gave a brief description of the spy, and their conversation leads to doubt which needed for story progress.

Well, the next scene... Jodha thinks about her conversation with Jalal... and her inner talk... I feel it perfectly chained since she just came out of Jalal's chamber. After meeting a spy, a message from Adham and Jalal's indirect confession and care which clouded her mind.

Also, because of Surya's entry, Radha is charged up a little bit for the mission. (normal reaction) Ipush to act up on her revenge mission. therefore I added Jodha and Radha's inner conflict talk.

Well... Rukaiya is an important character in this story... How could I just ignore her after this big insult? Sometimes you cannot create a chain of the event so you have to open up a new scene... this particular scene I felt connected just because it was a fresh incident, Jalal insulted Rukaiya just an hour ago... besides I wanted to show her reaction to readers and her relation with Adham. So before introducing Adham I added Rukaiya's scene.

Adham is a new character, so I introduce his background including Jalal... and Rukaiya's relation... here I tried to give detailed about Jalal, Rukaiya and Adham's childhood how it shaped up.

Then the message to Adham from Radha... and his reaction... I feel it's ideally connected to Rukaiya's scene.

Just to show Adham's cruelty I added concubine little scene. Rukaiya and Adham's all scene in the chain.

I agree... I have given too much space to other characters because I have introduced two, three new character in this chapter which was necessary to continue the story. Last chapter, about 10k word, were almost all about Jalal and Radha's... completely emotional. You have to understand this event are happening within a day... I have shown Jalal's emotions so much that looks kind of weird as a king...

Jalal and Faizal conversation was very important part of this chapter... Here the story takes twist... Jalal began to doubt on Radha... and he declares a shocking news, The Farman got stolen... I feel it is chained... I didn't want to divert readers mind toward decree until Adham's part finish... I knew this will grip readers instantly from filler part dullness.

I felt it was enough of Jalal and spy drama, therefore I added Hamida and Radha's scene for a change... Obviously, Hamida who always think about kingdom first then his kids would react like this. It was connected scene but again not forcefully added, Jalal met with Hamida a few hours ago, so it was expected reaction from Hamida. At first, I was thinking to add her emotional and mental state after Jalal's harsh behavior... but I didn't because I wanted to show Hamida as a strong-minded lady.

If you notice in the entire story I have shown only a few places where Jalal worked like a Shahenshah, It was necessary to show him as a king, not just an obsessive lover... What I wanted readers to know, how stressful his life is and on top of the Radha's passion... How tactfully he is managing everything while controlling his weakness. What I was trying to let readers know, no matter what emotional situation he was, he always stayed focus to the task and worked all the time.

I added Qadi Sahib scene after Radha and Hamida just because to give variety of scene to readers, and this scene even connected to the story, if you remember in the beginning when Jalal changed the law he mentioned, it will create a problem, lot of them will be against to his decision to allow Hindu prayer in the palace. So I added this scene in that relate.

Then Raja Todarman... again here I wanted Jalal to know about Radha donated money and financial crisis plus Farman details... I don't get it why are you thinking scenes were not connected and all over the palace. Sometimes to move forward you need small scenes to feed the story.

I am slowly letting readers know that Jalal has begun to doubt on Radha... but still, he is defending her.

Radha's message to Jalal

Here you felt I didn't put many details on Jalal's side. The only reason I felt not to show much emotion because... they have gone through so much... their emotions are on Plato now... Jalal understood her frustration and know very well that she loves him and he loves her. Even though he read she want to accept Surya's proposal... he doesn't react just because he very well know that it's her anger talking... not her... and also they both are completely overwhelmed with too many emotions in a short time. they both are too tired to even feel the emotions. they are drenched and their mind numbed... and can't think further or react and that is why he decided to cancel all his meetings. He is hurt... he is feeling pain but now he is prone to her sarcasm. Also throughout the story he is much more balanced than Radha... I have shown him broken and drained when Radha purposely hurt her feet and he insulted her but the letter didn't bring that many emotions just because he knows it's her anger and tantrum... (That's what he thinks... hehe)

May be next chapter you will see many emotions from both side. If I get to that track...😃

To show the severity I added Salima and Radha's convo... to point out to the readers slowly Radha is getting stronger and stronger because one by one her connections are breaking she built in last few days, Radha has no one in this palace... she has to fight alone with all the obstacle. Yes... Radha is arrogant and strong headed... that is what her character is and further you will see what she has paid in the past for her arrogance.