Originally posted by: harshu27
hey bhavi di wonderful update as usual no doubt in dat... 😳 btw 1st of all congo on ur new thread... 👏 ⭐️ i really felt bad for jalal but i feel he has to control on his emotions specifically his anger...coz anger can destroy everything... 😕
but even radha's condition was no less...she is really smart i say jalal was trying to xtract her feelings rather make her confess her love for him but she dint easily blurt out thou indirectly she did confess 😉 so now HB too realized jalal's obsession for radha... 😕 she was right in her own place coz jalal is an emperor too so he has to maintain his dignity that prestige which an emperor should have and now he was loosing it openly in public coz of radha's obsession... 😆 😉
best part of d update was radha and jalal's convo... 😳 he doesn't want her to accept surya's proposal... 😉 and his charms r affecting her just like for a drunker d alcohol has its effects on him... 😆 😉 precap is interesting...yet scary...i mean adham wanting her to meet radha... 😕 😲
about ur qestions...
1. If U were the writer of this story, would U alter anything in this chapter? If so... WHAT? And Why?
nopes i wont change anything as i simply loved this concept... 😉
2. Do U think story moving at the correct pace?
yup only thing is update should b regular...😆
HI RAAM UPDATE TOH ME DETI HU REGULARLY😆
3. Who is UR favorite character in this story? (Jalal... Jodha... Rahim... Ruku... Hamida... Surya) why?
jalal jodha Rahim HB m still not sure about her character... 😆 hope she isn't like d serial HB inconsistent... 😆 ruku who is she...? 😆 Rahim is sweet lil cute pie and i love him😳
671