NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ THREAD 1 - CHAPTERS 1 & 2

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1171

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399
Sunday ... Update kidhr r dii ?

New thread mein...😆😆😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1172

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

New thread mein...😆😆😆

New thread kidhr h ?

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Ashvneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1173

Oopssii ! Abi abi pm dekha maine

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1174

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

New thread kidhr h ?

Mere pencil box mein...🤣

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1175

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399
Oopssii ! Abi abi pm dekha maine

Mujhe nhi mila PM... 😲

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1176

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Mujhe nhi mila PM... 😲

Dubaara chk kr ...

Ya dii se beech mein re gya hoga

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Raksha Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1177

wow di awesome update...
D way princess talk to d person nd solved d matter was good...
Princess durga nd her prince talk was so nice...
Nd 2 sister r worried of each other. ...
Nd d what is this at d durga is no more. ...
Thanks for pm di...
Will read next part soon... nd comment. ...

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Sandhya.A

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1178

Beautiful beginnings...

Lashy,

First of all let me tell you that you are a very very gifted writer.

There is such a blend of realism, fancy, subtlety and speed to the story that makes it a very interesting read. The characters are etched out so well. By now, each of us would have a face for Durga and Heera and surely all our imaginations would coincide as the direct descriptions and subtle references are so telling.

There is a definitive and pleasing grace and determination about Heera, that I am already loving her

The framework is also absorbing. Within such a small space, you have set the background for enough plots and schemes and numerous possibilities that kindles interest.

Why do I feel suspicious of Kunwar Mahendar???? Am I over-imagining or is he this story's Suryabaan?🤓

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1179

Originally posted by: lashy
Chapter 1 - Teaser
Having said that; just because she was a brazen warrior-woman with a taste for all things dangerous, did not mean she couldn't be exquisite. Those same khol-filled rivetingly raven eyes that admired the angular legs of a well-bred race horse knew how to spot the finest of embroidery and the rarest of silks too.
No doubt then that where there lay such beauty and power, there were men vying to own it. About a dozen alliances had arrived with recommendations from their Guardian-cum-matchmaker, Maharaj Chitranjan of Bansi. Only to be flummoxed by her answer.
On approaching Parnagarh, these suitors were presented with two terms - terms that they'd have to accept, before Durga Bai would agree to such an alliance.
'I'm bound forever by two precious aspects of my life that a marriage cannot change...
Chapter 1 below
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