Akdha OS: Come back Jo!! updated (23/4/2016) - Page 14

Originally posted by: sau1234mya

loved it 👏

i really got senty while reading😭

👍🏼

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh

Awesome os sis 😃

>>> Thankyou soru🤗

Very emotional also Rula dia rula dia 😭

>>> nahi rulaya.. nahi rulaya😆 ok come here..🤗

He slapped her 😲 Ohoo Khair now everything is fine

>>> Yeah.. everything is fine noe😉😃

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

Wonderful!!
I loved it!
Thanku for pm

Originally posted by: Monucute

Payu di🤗

>>> Neetu 🤗

Incredible OS...👏

>>> Tysm 😃

Their sweet memories were jotted down exceptionally and I enjoyed them thoroughly...

>>> Glad to know that dearie😃

The best part... Ruqs Finally united the lil cute family... Me for the first time liked ruqs...😉

>>> he he Mee too liked her for the first time here😆

The pain... What to say about that part... just mind blowing... Depicting emotions so purely...

>>> Thanks a lot dear😊

Thanks for the pm didu

>>> You're welcome!!😉

love you❤️

>>> Me More❤️

Originally posted by: erning_w

It's superb Payal.

You describe Jalal's pain and their happy memories very well 👏

>>> Thankyou so much Dani🤗

Poor Ruks.. when she get the slap.. I automatically remember Laboni track when Jo slap Ruks and imagine their expressions 😆

>>> he he.. u know when I read later after posting I was too laughing at ruks🤣 like bhalai ka to zamana he nahi.. bewajah he pad gayi😆😆

Continue soon with other story Payal

Thanks for the pm 😃

Originally posted by: dikshu16

Fantastic OS!!
just love it..
Thanx for pm

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Superb update payal. ..

U have written jalal pain very well. ..

>>> Thankyou raksha😃

At 1 point I thought jo was no more. ...

>>> I first thought to write this only but then decided to give a happy ending!!😛

nd it was clear that they r parted becoz of miss understanding. ...

>>> hmm.. poor couple

I like ruks she did god this time like a true sister. ..

>>> Yeah.. jalal's sister😆

I was more than happy that family United again...

Nd very thing cleard in 10 days...

>>> 😃

Thanks for pm payal. ..

Originally posted by: avika444

>>> Avi.. ur emoji.😆. Itna bhi Emotional nahi tha ye OS dear😆

Such an emotional os payal ,i had tears in my eyes while reading it yaar . Jalal was so much in pain .

They were a happy family with their cute little princess amaya until Jalal faced some ups and downs in his business .

>>> oh really??😲 was it that emotional😕

Poor guy didnt want to see his wife disturbed and thus hided everything .

>>> yes, but he was in stress which let him to blurt out his anger on her, sometimes.

A small misunderstanding parted him away feom his beautiful wife and amaya .

Hahaha rukkaiya jalal's sister , sorry i couldnt stop myself from laughing when i read Jalal considers her as his sister .

>>> I was laughing too avi🤣

And in last wow rukkaiya brought them together , so sweet of her yaar.

>>> very strange haina??😆😆

Truly fabulous os payal, u penned jalal's emotions so well that i could feel his pain myself ,hats off to u dearie ,keep writing more .

>>> Thanks a ton for this lovely Comment avi🤗

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: lovespari

Its Beautyful payal🤗
really...loved it .
n the Last prt was jst Best😃
thank u fr pm😊

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Fantastic OS Payal😊