Akdha OS: Come back Jo!! updated (23/4/2016) - Page 16

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Firstly sorry for being late payal 😳

That was the best shot written by you to till date .. you have written flawlessly👏⭐️
Brilliant starting with Jalal in pain drinking heavily then reminiscing fb scenes totally awesome👏
So beautifully expressed relationships btw husband nd wife father nd daughter..⭐️
Jalal's enthu .. to give surprise Jo ... everything had changed in a matter of minutes 😕... omg her accusation... JO crossed the limits 😲.. he slapped her.😭. she too waited for two months.😒..
My heart cried for Lill amaya 😭... that was the biggest nightmare for any child..All this happened coz of Ja hiding the matters from his wife😡... husband nd wife should not hesitate to share all issues related to work or friends 🤔... hiding something means they r not sharing a healthy relation.. oh mei kaha se kaha pauch gayii 😕😆
Surprise of this OS was Ruks .. she was such a cutie .. haha loved her character first time 😆
Waise ruks pe itna pyar q araha hei hahaha 😉
She played a crucial role in clearing Jos MU 😛
Amaya nd her dad's reunion was touching😭😊❤️
Superb ending Happy family reunion ... Finally all is well😃❤️
Shall we get part two payal... JJ milan after brief separation 😉
We got a Super good news today naa payal so is OS ka next part toh banta hi hai plzzz😃
Thanks for pm dearie🤗


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Thanks a lot for reading my stories dear!!😃
It's my plesure 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

Love you Mitali❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Firstly sorry for being late payal 😳
>>> Don't be sorry dear because I am late too😆

That was the best shot written by you to till date .. you have written flawlessly👏⭐️
>>> What the.. Really?? I am amazed to read that😲 Thankyou so so much dearie🤗

Brilliant starting with Jalal in pain drinking heavily then reminiscing fb scenes totally awesome👏
So beautifully expressed relationships btw husband nd wife father nd daughter..⭐️
>>> Thanks dear🤗

Jalal's enthu .. to give surprise Jo ... everything had changed in a matter of minutes 😕... omg her accusation... JO crossed the limits 😲.. he slapped her.😭. she too waited for two months.😒..
>>> yep.. she was waiting for 2 months that he will share his problem or the reason for his behaviour but when she saw him with Ruks then she couldn't control herself!!

My heart cried for Lill amaya 😭... that was the biggest nightmare for any child..All this happened coz of Ja hiding the matters from his wife😡...
>>> Me too felt bad for Amaya😭

husband nd wife should not hesitate to share all issues related to work or friends 🤔... hiding something means they r not sharing a healthy relation.. oh mei kaha se kaha pauch gayii 😕😆
>>> Right but jalal didn't want to stress her with office matters. Husband and wife shouldn't hide anything but my father also, didn't share the matters related to work with mom or me😛


Surprise of this OS was Ruks .. she was such a cutie .. haha loved her character first time 😆
>>> Everyone likes her in this os😆

Waise ruks pe itna pyar q araha hei hahaha 😉
She played a crucial role in clearing Jos MU 😛
>>> Yep!! see I made Ruks to unite them instead of being a reason for their breakup in every other story and serial😛😆

Amaya nd her dad's reunion was touching😭😊❤️
>>> Yes.. I love Amaya❤️

Superb ending Happy family reunion ... Finally all is well😃❤️
>>> Yeah.. All is well 😆

Shall we get part two payal... JJ milan after brief separation 😉
>>> Naah..😆

We got a Super good news today naa payal so is OS ka next part toh banta hi hai plzzz😃
>>> I told u I will write one, but I can't dearie. U know the reasons na😛😉

Thanks for pm dearie🤗
>>> Love you dearie 🤗



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