Originally posted by: melovesja
I like your choice of plot.😛 very well put on how one misunderstanding or a momently mistrust ruin the life of family and how the child go through in that situation. payal you are v good at emotion writing but here you so beautifully written about broken heart man who feel he lost his life and reason to live his love and his princess for ever.
"she is not here to say I am with you jalal..." for a min. I thought she died or what but you very well use those lines to describe his condition. whole scan in front of ruku was one is pour out hurt and anger other was embarrassed and shocked. in her self agony she can't read his facial expression . the man's fault is he want to prevent his family from stress which is not went well with the situation. I like ruku's role and happy ending which is apt as title. their reunion was lovely.
I love the fb part were he was remembered their precious moment.
ruku is like sister 😆
all in all it's superb. you have excellent hold on os writing .👏 keep writing with different plots because you are excellently write description, emotion and your hots are hot favorite😉 so keep rocking deari.😃
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