NEW LIFE: Thread 2 - Page 56

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Thank you dear. 😳

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

hi stuti... how r you dear

I am fine! Now became much fine, after reading this comment. 😆

well m back with my bakwas comment ... oh you know I have to re- read the chapters so many times, because I love to read this ff ...firstly,I loved the story line of new life... so beautifully you explained the grief of akdha .About politics what to say dear..the way you characterised the characters of conspirators is really qabile tareef.. STUTI BEGUM 😆 ( sorry if you feels bad, just joking bout it )

Hey don't dare to say this a bakwaas comment. 😡 Thank you so much dear. 😳

Sorry dear chapter are 29 n m commenting of all 29 chapter in 1 ...
you wrote so beautifully, beg, mahachuchak, Abdul Mali, haider, n others characters too...their evilness is unpredictable .

Thanks dear. You didn't mention Fakhrunissa? 😆

oh our akdha had went through a lot since the death of hassan Hussain . But how he didn't touch any other women since these years... BTW somehow he was guilty of his accusation to JODHA, ... no no no how could he accused her, had he forget that she was also the mother of those kids how could she kill them or murdered them... that what ek did in show.. I hate her for this I hate CVS 😡 .

That was one of the most bogus imagination of cvs. 😡 I had actually expected a separation track after kids' death but this blaming! 🤬

Man wedding and tour to amer. But in amer this closeness with him eating up both, though they love each other but hesitates to be with each other. Such cruel game of fate played with them...
Attack on jalal, jodha's faith back on her god.. finally both find solace in each others arms, the torment, sorrow grief pain they went through, through so many years finally came out in form of tears...
omg the kiss, so tempting n passionate but this dadisa KABAB ME HADDI 😆 now romance started ...waiting for their romance

You will get full dose of romance without any intervention.😆 Wait and watch. 😉

sorry stuti. I shortly comment on conspirators the reason is that I dont like conspirators in any love story...

Oh you don't like? 😆 Actually without the conspiracy the story would become monotonous na? 😛

please give one sensual n passionate chapter of akdha

I will write one definitely...

love the chemistry of akdha .:-) :-) thanks for pm sorry for late comment really very very sorry
love you to entertain us with your lovely stories

No problem dear... Thank you for your comment. 😳
now update soon😉

Originally posted by: sho123

loved chappi
so finally maha cuchak dead
and glad to know jodha again started her worshipping
and her lines of explaining about existence of god beautiful

Originally posted by: sho123

thanks for stuti

Originally posted by: sho123

loved chappi
so finally maha cuchak dead
and glad to know jodha again started her worshipping
and her lines of explaining about existence of god beautiful

Originally posted by: durgeshnandini

Hello Stuti di!

Adwi!!🤗

As I promised I am here with my comment. But read it at your own risk!! Kono guarantee dite parbo naa, tomar ghum peye jete pare 🥱, So shabdhan!! 😆😆

I really did not expect you to read all the 29 chapters so fast! 😲 And don't say these😡 Your beautiful comments are more than treasure for me. I can't tell how much this is important for me!!😭😃

This story has come a long way.. certainly, it will travel longer still... So what I do is that a brief description of the journey of three main axes of the story... the grieving couple, the conspiracy and the authoress!!

O Wow!!⭐️

The Grieving Couple

A lot of pain, love and affection... and you have imaged these two lovable soul mates. In sorrow and joy, all pains and turmoil, they sail along together. Sometimes the tide of Time pulls them apart. Sometimes, it's the same tide that unites them.

It was a tugging description that you have etched with your words. You do maintain your usual flair but this genre, brings out a slightly different you... and not a single description sounded unnatural, not an emotion out of place. The feeling of guilt and regret sweeping over these star crossed lovers, theses series of events, that leads them to the conclusion that, come what may, they are meant to be together as a soul are very well presented.

Jodha appears emotionally more strengthened at times, where Jalal breaks to pieces... is it just to convey that when one falls the other becomes the pillar of strength?

All in all, their emotions, blaming and grievances, and above all, the way they find strength in each other's company to fight this helplessness, was all so realistic. Take a bow!!

Such a detailed synopsis of my protagonists dear! I am elated!! Thank dear!

You felt Jodha is stronger? Thank God! 😆 My one dear Di had complaint me for making Jodha weak and weeping marshmallow 🤣

Maybe Jodha is strengthen as she is woman, and women are believed to be more composed emotionally to cope up with emotional turmoils than men. So Jalal seems more vulnerable from inside in spite of his engagement and superiority in outer world.

Love you dear!❤️

The Conspiracy

Ok, this part was too good I think... and your portrayal of realistic fervour is at its level best.

Take a bow, again!!

It isn't just the ruthless faces that you have etched, with ruthless sincerity, but the entire plot and ploy, the tactics, the messages, code language , the Amir Khasrau decoding method... By George!! Do I see that as another Lashy di in the making or what?😆

OMG!! Such a compliment! 😎 Plotting these conspiracies and writing about them is fun. 😆

Seriously, Stuti di, you've taken me by complete surprise with this hunar of yours. Kudos 👏👏

Trust me your version of Mahachuchak, Mali, Faisal Beg and the master player of all... Fakhr-un-nissa, were much more convincing than the screeching banshee and hairless Harry of Ekta!! Why even Jallu and Birbal were Chanakya reincarnated at your hands! 😆

This was much needed to saaf Ekta Madam's kachras from those villeins. 😆 How I wanted to see some intelligent villeins and more intelligent Akbar fighting against them! 😭 But those morons were much interested in vamp Ruqu ruining spices of MUZ!! 🤣 🤣

You have all the calibre to become a diplomat, ditch, Computer science 😉. It's very difficult to come up with something like this and still sound convincing... but kiss to combat to tears to blood bath, you're comfortable with anything and everything . Wow👏

So beautiful! I am dancing in joy.

The Authoress!

Ab inki kya kehna!!

Whatever she writes, our Shinning_Stuti never fails to shine.

As I went through the chapters, a novice writer, who's unsure of the reader's reactions, gradually transformed into a sharp, and strong author, who can grip her readers with the story and yet is brazen enough to continue as she plans.

Lots of hug for you for especially this section of your review!☺️ 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗it was my first trial of writing something so seriously, and I know how much I have improved as a writer day by day. When I started writing this story this was a mere fun and craziness, but with days passed on this has become a important part of my life. 😳 Thank you so much for such beautiful words dear. 😃

Why are you so hard working, dear? Same dialogues in a double version 😆. Anyways, thanks for the English version though, amar Hindi tomar thekeo beshi sanghatik kina 😉😆😆.

Hindi tai holo sobcheye boro somossa. Now as these Jodha-Jalal are from the show itself, it is tougher to imagine them talkingin English! 🤣 Kno je amader WB board e Hindita sekhay na! 😆

All that said, and all hence done, I hope you bear with this piece of write up. I suppose I have covered all the points...

I have no words to thank you darling!🤗

Update soon.. eagerly waiting 😳 and thanks for the patience you have with me 😉

Be with my always like this with your wonderful reviews. These are the best motivation a novice writer expects to get! 😃