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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anu012

Superb update
jajo scene awsome ... loved it
cont soon

thnks for pm

Thank you so much dear. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri



ha open air wala...m waiting for it...ab jalal ko jaldi prepare karo...bechara bed me baith ke sad gaya hai...uski body ko v to or protine ki avashakta hai...😆

🤣 🤣 Wait wait pahele open air me jane to do. Abhi to he has a lot of 'kachal' around him to sort out first. 😆


ha i love hindi dialogues...tu agar whatsapp me hoti to i can guide u on that...cz ifeel in hindi indian stories ki asli rang bahaar aa jata hai...

Yeah in this particular story Hindi dialogues are important. (for show wali feelings. 😆 )...I prefer the use of regional languages and dialects much to express the characters realistically.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: swetiii

amazing
abul maali killed them all
cheater
Hehe

wow
JJ having cute cute romance
they r opening up
loved it
update asap

Happy to see that you liked it so much dear. 😳 Thank you so much.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Amazing update stuti...

Mahachuchak was killed... nd i wave read to that mali only killed her in history to...
when will jalal get to knw about what is going on here nd what will he do next...
what will be next step of mali wife..???
ahh how cute nd lovely it read about jodha jalal...
jalal was searching for jodha to start a new life ...
i like d way jodha told about god nd what we have to do understanding what is going in jalal heart ...
lovely update dear...
thanks for pm...
precap is interesting...
update soon...

While plotting the story I took only two references from History I suppose, 1st is Abul Mali's wife's name, and 2nd one is the fact that Abul killed Mah-Chuchak. There is another one too though... I just hope it will be a good natakiya rupantar. 😆
Thank you so much for the feedback dear. 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: .AkDhian.

Loved the update,Stuti😃


Finally,the end to Mahachuchak and her and her over-ambitious dreams.Abul Mali thimks he killed all the contenders of Kabul's throne,but the biggest and most dangerous one,mastermind behind all this is still alive.He gets the biggest shock of his life once Fakr's intentions are known to him😆

Jo and Jalal convo was too good.Loved reading it.

Thanks for the PM😊


Abul Mali will get a zor ka jhatka very soon. 😆 Thank you for reading and loving the update Di. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
^^Really??I'm excited!! 😆

Your DP is
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow its nice up buddy ty for pm up soon buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Hm1608

wow its nice up buddy ty for pm up soon buddy

Thank you dear. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti


OMG! Thank you so much for this rain of praise on me. 😃 Thanks for giving your time behind my story and loving it.😳 I will be waiting for your further comments. 😳

haha rain ... u deserve to be praised 😉 will comment tomorrow a long one of all chapters...thanks for replying on comment...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome...just awesome...i have no words to describe ur talent.u have filled my heart with bliss.akdha moment always turned me..so sooo thanks for pm...

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