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@Swarna_99

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Posted: 9 years ago

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@wanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

🥳...congrats dear...luuvvv it soo muchh..dont take too long for update next Chapter...pleasssee...

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Swarna

@Swarna_99

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: wanita
🥳...congrats dear...luuvvv it soo muchh..dont take too long for update next Chapter...pleasssee...

Thanks a lot dear for your comment😳

Yup I'll continue very soon. 😃

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Wow ... a night in library ...that tooo when it is pitch dark inside the room with heavy pouring outside , interesting 😃

Liked the convo between jodha and jalal .

Waiting for the next shot

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

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lovespari

@lovespari

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Congratulation swaru fr frst OS 🤗
WOW swaru ...
awesome its beautyful n funny 😆
i loved it.
a boy n girl in a big old Library with no power 😉 interesting 😆
ohh Love Ja Jo coonvo prt ...oopss i mean actually Ja Flirting n Jo enjoying convrrsation😉🤣
a light hearted ...its cute 😃
waiting fr nxt prt swaru...
update soon
thank u fr pm😊

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome chappy dear

Update soon buddy

A beautiful candle light dinner

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SomeoneloveJA

@SomeoneloveJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Congrats first OS..dear..
Awesome update...
First meeting, blackout, heavy downpour outside, covo in the darkness,,...
Love JaJo convo...he's flirting..
She droped the bookmark...the clue for next meeting..
Waiting for the candle light dinner...continue Swarna...
Thanks for pm...

Edited by CindyTruong - 9 years ago

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swriter

@swriter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

First of all congrats dear for your first os.
And second ya it is very nice story.
And third now i m waiting for next part.
And fourth plz update soon😉