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It is a very nice OS dear

Originally posted by: lovespari

Congratulation swaru fr frst OS 🤗
WOW swaru ...
awesome its beautyful n funny 😆
i loved it.
a boy n girl in a big old Library with no power 😉 interesting 😆
ohh Love Ja Jo coonvo prt ...oopss i mean actually Ja Flirting n Jo enjoying convrrsation😉🤣
a light hearted ...its cute 😃
waiting fr nxt prt swaru...
update soon
thank u fr pm😊

Originally posted by: swriter

First of all congrats dear for your first os.
And second ya it is very nice story.
And third now i m waiting for next part.
And fourth plz update soon😉

Swarna 👏 Awesome cute and funny os... Just loved it

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Swarna 👏 Awesome cute and funny os... Just loved it

I'm glad that you read it and Overwhelmed that you loved it.

Best line:

Me : "Your eyes! The most beautiful pair I have ever seen. Now, I can see the flickering of the flame in them. Those glittering pearls have the power to make time stand still!"

Superb👏

Thanks a lot dii😳

Please continue soon... I loved Jalal... He is so funny, spontaneous and witty... Loved it⭐️

I agree with you dii.

Yup I'll continue soon. 😃

Congrats for ur first work dear. ..

Witty and cute!! Do continue soon😊

Congratulations for first os. 😊Cute os. Jalal is so funny and spontaneous .their candle light talk were cute and flirty 😉at the end his wish for some more time and jo's silent ans to was lovely. 😛 nicely written and some where feel like suspense love story. 😊 Thanks for pm swarna.

Hi Swarna..I've read exactly the samething on Quora and some other website too.I appreciate your idea of making it an OS on AkDha.

Is it really ur imagination??I'm sorry if I sound rude..but every single word except the names are same..that's the reason I'm asking.

Awesome start...😃
Loved the flirtatious Jalal😉
Waiting for next shot 😊