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hala

@lolo91

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

what is that sherry ?!!! 😲

seriously?!!😲

this is mind blowing and magnificent ts👏

i cant wait for next chapters...and i said chapters not chapter

update now ...NOW😡

coming to the very well written and magnificent awesome mind blowing and wow chappy

love from the first sight ..a very well descrption of jalal

and god when you wrote blue jeans and white shirt ..i was blushing like a teenager first crush

and brown eyes ..oh dear god😳!!!
i was pushing jodha also with moti😆

than he said jalal khan and the girl teared

i was scared it because he is muslim but it turned out its a broken heart😭

he also was shocked knowing its jodha

what happened sherry ?

update fast plz and pm me

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RamSiyaRam

@RamSiyaRam

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Congrats for the story. Good idea

Why is Jodha fearing her feelings for Jalal? Is there something bad behind it? Or is Jodha shy types..

Hope all ends well😳

Thanks for pm, update soon

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Heyy congo sherry 🤗
update is as usual fantastic..
Fisrt time ever jo was attracted to someone...she was lost in his brown eyes
moti was very happy that at least she admired someone 😆
she helped jo to know his name through truth n dare game but after knowing jalal's name jo became shocked and left from there immediately ..
Jalal was shocked seeing her behaviour..
Moti tried to ask the reason behind jo's weird behaviour but she denied to tell anything..
I think its related to their past.
Thanku for pm
continue soon

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Swarna

@Swarna_99

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Superb update

Beautiful. ..

Loved it. ..

Thanks for pm.

Please continue soon. ..

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diksha

@sweet_diksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

very interesting start... waiting for next part

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AnnSoosan

@AnnSoosan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Amazing sherry

Thanks for pm

Update asap

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Sushma

@SUSHlovesJOJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

What is the mystery behind jodhas weird behavior????

Why she broke down after hearing his name??? I think in her home she is confined to marry or love only with rajput... but after knowing her first love is Muslim n she can't get her love she broke down then n there... poor jodha... 🤢

But please update next chapter soon...😊

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deepa111

@deepa111

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

congrats sherry for ur first ts😊

fabulous update..

nd at the end its quite interesting..

jo just fallen in love for ja at first sight..

moti really happy that finally her bestie showing some interest in a guy..

even ja too attracted by her..

after lots of pushing jo went to talk with ja n landed up in his arms ..

bt dont know what happened to her hearing his name..

did she know him before or there is some bad past of her related to him..

waiting for nxt part...

update soon...

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AngelDara

@AngelDara

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Awesome update sherry
Beautifully written
love it very much
Love ur description about jalal
Jo fell In love at. First sight with jalal and her bestie help her to find about him how sweet
Like the way moti push our Jo to ask his name
Why Jo runaway after hearing his name ?
Why she is heartbroken ?
Want to know the answer pls update soon dear

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harshal

@harshu27

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

beautiful update dear...so jo has fallen fr jallu and she is hurt after hearing his name... 😕 and moti was good helped her out to speak to him... 😉 interesting... do update soon...