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Hi guys this TS is my gratitude towards harshu,muskan,Lola Di
and also to all who always pray for my fast recovery
So here is the TS-I Can't
******
Part-1
Jodha a confident type of girl,a speaking machine for whom keeping mum is a difficult task,has a lot friends but her best friend was moti,never got attracted from any boy ,for jodha love can't happen at first sight more than that she cant let herself fall in love due to a reason but that day in her college seminar she got attracted by a boy or should I say fell in love with him the moment she saw him
And the boy with whom she fell in love at first sight is our jalal who was chilling out in the CLG garden with his friends
Jodhas pov
I am feeling like In whole crowd i could only see him,his Brown eyes, his golden colour skin complexion,his masculine body,his style of walking i was just want drown in his those eyes but thanks chain of thoughts got broken due to her best friend moti who take her out of her lala land but not completely
Moti: where r u lost
Jodha: checking out that brown eyes boy;replied in her dreamy world
Only after this Jodha realise that she blunt out the truth and she looked at moti who was looking at her as she was an alien
On this jodha gave her I didn't do anything look
But instead of questioning her
Moti:Yaaa;cried out a loud results in seeking manys attention
Jodha: why you cried
Moti: bcoz finally u noticed some guy now show me where he is Jodha shyly pointed towards the handsome in white shirt and blue jeans but the moment she pointed towards Jalal, he too was looking towards both the girls or should I say towards our jodha
Seeing his looks at herself jodha turns her back
Moti:What happened why suddenly u turned ur back
Jodha:He was looking towards us
Moti:That's good na go and ask his name
Jodha:What! how can I
what he will think of me
I can't do that
Moti:R u fearing Jo
Jodha:Jodha Singh fears of nothing
its just that
I don't know;said while holding her head between her palms
Moti:Let me think of some plan to know about him
With this both started thinking of some way and after half an hour thinking
Through truth and dare u should go and ask his name and other things; Moti advised
firstly jodha hesitates but after her friends a lot of warnings, pleadings and what's so not she finally agreed but when they see in the garden he was not there after 15 minutes searching they finally find out him ,he was sitting under a tree with his friend calmly
Moti:Phew finally find him now let's start our game
Then moti call all their friends to play the game but didn't blunt the real reason behind the game
Moti:I have change the rules only truth can be choosed in this round
On this all nod
After 3rd spinning finally jodhas turn finally arrive
Moti:K now Jodha its ur turn
So u have to go that boy in white shirt and blue jeans and ask his name and other info
Jodha: what no way
I can't
On this all
All:What r we listening correct the most talkative girl is hesitating to talk with someone
how come that happen;humoured all
Jodha:K fine I am going (how can jodhas rajputani blood ignore the challenge)
But the moment she her eyes fall on Jalal ,her legs start trembling
Jodha:I can't
Paying no attention on her plees Moti pushed jodha towards him but the Moment she started taking steps towards jalal her heart beat started increasing and she stops in her tracks and turned towards friends all were giving her challenging look apart from moti,she wants to move back but seeing her bestis warning look she again started heading towards jalal and stood only Little distance away from him
Jodhas POV
How will i do it ,i even don't have courage to ask him his name I can't do that but I even can't step back forget about others teasing and making fun ,moti will kill me .it is really embarrassing standing here in the center of the garden and staring at a boy
POV ends
Busy in her own thoughts Jodha keep standing there for 10 minutes only after hearing her friends cheers Jodha came out of thought land and finally with little courage she took next step towards Jalal but till that time jalal he get up from his seat
Jodha: may be he too got irritated seeing my stupidity if I am not wrong he too was seeing me from the corner of his eyes;she thought
Seeing her friend lost in her own world moti comes there give her a little push but as a result of sudden push jodha lost her balancein but instead of hitting the ground she felt herself in some strong hands and when she opened her eyes and there he was and his brown eyes The moment her doe shaped eyes met with his eyes she again lost in them but her best friends voice takes her back in reality
Both stands properly on their respective places where Jalal can't take off his eyes from her there jodha could not dare to meet her eyes with his
Jodha starts moving from there but stops in her tracks

Jodha:I think I should say thank u to him it doesn't seems good he helped me otherwise I would fall; she thought
With this turns towards jalal
Jodha:Th..Thank u;saying this Jodha was about to walk from there but a grip on her hand stops her at the same place and when she turned back to see its honour there he was our Jalal holding her wrist
Jalal:Only thank u
On this Jodha gave a confusing look
Jalal:U came here to say thank u only! ;asked with a questioning look plus smirk
On this Jodha starts looking towards moti who not standing very far from them
Moti:Ask na;signaled through lipsing
After collecting some courage
Jodha:Ya I wa..nt to as..k that what's ur name
Jalal:Its Jalal khan and urs
Hearing his name Jo's world collapsed and a long tear escaped from her beautiful eyes
Jalal:Hi I am asking ur name
Without saying anything she leaves the place
Seeing changing expression of jodhas face Moti too got confuse before she could ask she already runs away from there
Moti shouts 'Jodha'
But even her friends voice didn't stop her
Moti:Plz don't mind it was just a dare;said to jalal to change the awkward situation
Saying this Moti too moves towards the direction in which Jodha runned
Leaving the hell confused man behind with a name
Jalal:Jodha!
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At girls washroom
A girl is crying profoundly is none other than our Jodha
Moti:What happen jodha
why u run away from there ;asked the concerned friend immediately after stepping in the washroom
Jodha:N..Nothing
I just don't like that boy he was looking attracting only from far but from near he is not my type
Moti:Don't lie to me
I saw love in ur eyes for him but the moment he told u his name that look changed into a heart broken look
And now u r crying here
Still will u say its nothing
Jodha:Yup I will still say this bcoz there is nothing to say and all I said is truth
Moti:Really
jodha:Yup really now can u stop ur inquiring section;said a liilt louder to make her friend shock with her weird behaviour
Realizing that she just bursts out on her bestie
Jodha:Sorry Moti if my words hurt u
Moti:More than urs words ur condition is hurting me
I have seen pure love in ur eyes then why r u not excepting it
Jodha:I can't ;said in low voice

Done guys
Do tell me hows it
Happy holi to all
love u all
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Me will also have to res 😭
Why everyone is doing the same 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow !!!! Mind Blowing ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Update ...
Loved it...
Continue Soon...
Thanks for the PM... 😳 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb update
waiting for next update
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for first Ts.
Superb update. Jo's past hunting her so,she stop herself to move on.nicely written.
Edited by melovesja - 9 years ago
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Awesome update n thnxx for pm dr n update nxt asap eagerly waiting for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsome update
loved it ... update soon

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow awsome update dear...
Its really awsome... Bt y jodha get shocked after hearing jalal's name?? And ran away...
Excited to know. The reason...
Update soon ..
Nd thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks fr pm..congrats fr new ts..nice story..ja and jo fal fr each otr..is ja name s the reasn fr jo cry,may b his religion..wrng gues..cntinue soon
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Frst of all congo fr ur new TS. well it was too good..m excited to knw the reason behind her tears..amazing plot..update soon nd thnx for the pm 😊

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