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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rs_fun2

Hi Bhavini,

Great chapter as usual... Loved the varies emotions of Jalal, Jodha and surya...

I felt this chapter was really tough to write... too many emotions blending in one conversation.
Poor Jalal! Could not control his desire and jealousy... Waiting eagerly for the convo between the 2 and how Jalal will try to convince her to reject surya.. Pls don't take too long and there wasn't any need for editing! It was great...
Thank U 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
awsum chappi di
jalal went in his lala land after seeing Jo hehe
he was all aroused

jalal was hell jelous
it was funny to see him like that

jo was not enjoying his pain
rather was feeling even more pain.

surya loves her
hufff
jelousy churning

wow
jalal punished ruku
very good
loved it
update asap dii
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Posted: 9 years ago
Woow didi
Ur awsm di
Jalal jelousy radha expressions its mindblowing di
I enjoy whlie reading emaging three faces and ruks part unexacted di
Devil jalal uff wooow
Its beyonds imng diii
thanku too di LOL DIII
Updateee sooon dii
👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW ! what an amazing chapter bhavni 👏 U never fail to fascinate urs readers with da amazing skill of story telling nd writing, no exception this time also 😳 once started to read da story , u make us unable to blink or take a break even for a split of second😊 we also go through da same feelings akdha feel, while reading😳

Really just loved da chapter. I was thinking we could see jalal's defeat over da green eyed monster seeing jo- surya, but u made surya too to become a victim of this monster. I enjoyed trio's words to da core.It was enjoyable to see da silent war btw da two kings over radha😉


more than that I enjoyed jalal's cold revenge on ruk for da humiliation of radha, I never expected this 'll happen.

Now jalal is yearning to see nd talk with radha before surya😆 waiting to see when 'll he puts forth his marriage proposal before her😉

plz plz plz ... update da next chapter soon, waiting to see radha jalal confrontation😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chapter dii. ...
Everyone was shocked to see Radha. ...so elegantly dressed. ...
Surya and Jalal were deeply mesmerised ...
Jalal was hell jealous and angry seeing surya care and love for his Radha. ...
Both love her so much. ...
Surya is confident. ...Radha will accept his proposal...

Rukaiya's punishment was good. ...
The way jalal is behaving. ...is more than sufficient to show his love. ...and longing for her. ...

Thanks for pm dii. ...
Please continue soon. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Plzzz upload the chapter 13 eager to read upload it as soon as possible plzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bhavi 🤗
Really a fabulous update dear and had a great reading. This tug war between Jalal and Surya is so tempting I loved it so much 🤣 Both are so possessive about Jodha. But Poor Rukaiya... The Prey of Jalal. 😆 Actually Surya has to thank Rukaiya for being prey of Jalal otherwise It'll be him for sure 🤣

So it seems Surya too know about secret mission of Jodha. Uff... everything getting into my nervous. and so curious to know about next move. Please update soon dear!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
This was shamazing!!!!! You know, Jodha - she and amazing? It was delighting to see Jalal jealous instead of Jodha jealous all the time. i get bored reading Jodha and jealousy - i mean seriously, why should only women get jealous all the time? Don't men have the feeling of jealousy in them? I totally loved seeing both surya and Jalal jealous over one beautiful woman - our Jodha. Men do go gaga on women. Keep writing shmazing chapters like this!!!!😎
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous update !! 👏 👏
Seriously thats really awesum..

I just love the whole argumnt part alot 😆
Firstly everyone shocked to see radha looking stunning as a princess in the royal attire n then more shocked to know that surya come with the marriage proposal for her...

U just amazingly written every emotions n make the scence so realistic ...with the actions n emotions...

Bt i love the way h describe ja's rage, pain , jealousy , helplessness n audacity ...for his love..

Bt the best part is surya radha convo along ja self talk 😆 ..

Also i like this surya too..he trurly love radha alot n can do anything for her..moreover he understnds her really well.
He somewhere guessed that something is there between ja n her seeing the longings in radha's eyes n also ja's possessiveness n authority ...

While radha also not happy to see the pain in his eyes...
She cant see the anger n pain in his eyes bt remembering past night incidents she composrd herself n play along..
Bt also not able to go against him making him angry ..

Hb too feeling scared to see the situation turning into n ja action really making her angry n feared also...

Oops...ja turned into pure n devil n humilate ruks infront of everyone...
Ruks numb with his behaviour just becoz of an ordinary maid he insult her infront of all ..
Ja felt content to see her feeling the same what radha beared becoz of her...

wooo...ja n surya convo is too gudd..
😉
Both taunting n aiming each other with scrasm nd confindent to get radha ...
Letsee whose going to win bt before that its interesting what this jealousy make ja do things which he himself never expect


Waiting for another amazing part...
Update soon di...
Edited by deepa_chauhan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was a fantabulous chapter di👏
I enjoyed it so much⭐️and yes U have written this chapter fantastically. 👍🏼👍🏼 I really loved ur writing in this chapter.❤️
About the chapter.. This was the best chapter for me of this story as I always wanted to see jealous jalal.😆
For now a warm hug 🤗 for your stupendous writing in this chapter and wondrous imagination of this story!!
I"ll get back to you soon with detailed comment of this chapter😉

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