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rs_fun2

@rs_fun2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#381

Hi Bhavini,

Great chapter as usual... Loved the varies emotions of Jalal, Jodha and surya... Poor Jalal! Could not control his desire and jealousy... Waiting eagerly for the convo between the 2 and how Jalal will try to convince her to reject surya.. Pls don't take too long and there wasn't any need for editing! It was great...

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#382

Bhavi di the chappy is fabulous..
I really loved it..
By seeing jo beauty everyone is awestruck...
Ja in la la land..
Ja us really jealous..
Jo is feeling hurt when she see ja is hurt.
Omg Ja is insulted Rukiya.. Its good..
Very funny cold war betweens ja n surya..
Pld Update ASAP...
Di pls update also is it hate or love..

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nikki

@natashathakur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#383

Awesome chapter di n thnxx for pm n pls update it is hate or love asap eagerly waiting for update

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Anamika sharma

@anu012

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#384

Fantastic update di 👍🏼
truly loved it ... ❤️
update soon or plzzz update (Is it hate or love) nxt part plz plz plz di

thnks for pm

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Titus

@Akdhalover6

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#385

Awesome chappy
egerly waiting for joja's conversion ...update soon

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Jasmine Grewal

@jasminegrewal98

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#386

Absolutely loved the update, your writing is just amazing Bhavini it just makes me want to keep on reading😆 But wow Jalal is burning like crazy in jealousy he's so possessive no matter what he will not leave "Radha" really like this version of Jalal he's very interesting Jalal and Radha's upcoming convo will b so interesting so excited to c what will happen as no way will Radha bend so easily to accept Jalal and his request I think she will play the jealousy card a bit longer!

Just really love this story and thanks for the pm keep it up dear its awesome❤️ Patiently and eagerly waiting for the next update😛

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#387

Nice chappy

Poor jalal n Surya dying with jealousy

When you gonna reveal that radha is Jodha

Update soon buddy

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Mavaddat

@Mavi_16_2

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#388

awesome update di..
Surya is here for taking her away with him bit that stubborn radha ...ufff.. fi your JODHA is very stubborn
and how she gets shy in jalal's intense gaze ... chaah... I want JODHA aka radha to revenge on JALAL for her insult . And radha should do some like which makes this JALAL jeko...
HAMIDA is worried about JALAL and Surya and ruqqi again jealous ... .that JALAL and Surya two kings fighting over just a mere maid . dDont know what she think of herself hukka begum 😔
I loved the way you describe Surya feelings for JODHA, y he didn't want her to work, because he wants to treat her as his queen and how he said to JALAL that he didn't think her as an ordinary maid but for h she is extraordinary .fab di
JALAL again jealousy overpowered him how he get jealous when Surya was looking at radha with utmost love and longing for her in his eyes . how he carry her with care and love . Make this JALAL more jealous but love jalal's possessiveness the way he said you can not touch MY WOMAN . KEEP HER DOWN IMMEDIATELY .
oh god... but how he pleaded to radha to get her leg treated, sometime so much care and some time insult hate and revenge ...huh... I can't understand him
Ameri meal wow... JALAL was too surprised how his mother did this in a span of time . JALAL did right with hukka begum and no some dare to speak to him in this matter ... I love it when hukka cried in front of whole royal family and JALAL insult her
in front of his all begum guest . JALAL still can't forget the taste of American food cooked by radha .. he called his guard and ask him to get trained by jodha hehe ...
He want to make Surya jealous and Surya also get the clue of JODHA and JALAL feelings which hurts him . But Surya unconsciously uttered about jodha beauty and JALAL became curious to know more but like the way how he make him shut his mouth .
precap: interesting
update soon and thanks for pm di PLEASE DI UPDATE HATE OR LOVE ALSO . I LOVE YOUR THIS FF A LOT PLEASE DI PLEASE
LOVE YOU DI

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Ashvneet

@Ashvneet2399

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Posted: 9 years ago

#389

Bhavini dii 🤗 !

Truly , Amazing , Amazing , A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. chapter it was ! How much m loving this game 😉 !

Jealous Jalal had always been a treat to watch n here it was superr awesome . I was literally dancing reading Jalal's reaction when Surya picked hrr up 😆 . N my my how much I laughed reading Rukaiya's pitiful condition 🤣 . Radha , as always stubborn n yeah , Jalal knows her really well now , she is skilled in defying , be it Surya or Jalal 😛 .

Everytime Surya came close to her , Jalal's fuming jealousy was out on ninth cloud n i was really really enjoying reading 😆 .

Jalal admitted this to himself tht he loves her then what is the problem to say the same thing to her 😡 ? This men's ego , I tell u 🤢 !

Thank u soo soo soo sooo much for this Marvelous chapter dii , Now I just can't wait to read further 😛 .

Please please update sooon se b sooon.

Love you 🤗 !

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#390

Originally posted by: ketaki1
Thank god you updated..
Coming to the chapter...
the expression when jalal saw radha👏
Surya noticed that radha have feeling for jalal...i really felt bad for him...he is in love with her...
Jalal's anger was the best expression... and radha felt bad...

Surya is really in love with her, his heart will break for sure

"How dare you touch my woman? PUT HER DOWN IMMEDIATELY..."-this line got me chilled..🤪

😆 ME TOO

Poor marium makani...she is so shocked to see jalal's behavior ..

For her Saltant comes first... she is worried what will happen... how it will end?

I am not rejecting you King Surya Vadan, I really do like you. There's nothing wrong with you, any girl would die to marry you, but I just do not want to marry a KING"- did jalal just miss the point where she said that she really do like surya??

Jalal does knows that she likes him... but he also knows that she loves him😉

Jalal ordered radha to meet him in half an hour...interesting...

😳 U will know that in next chapter

But what I really enjoyed is rukaiya's reaction...both surya and jalal is fighting for radha...poor her..and on the top of it she got insulted by jalal in front of everyone... that to for insulting radha...he did made a point to her..

This Jalal is very different... He doesn't tolerate anyone's arrogance... and that is what bothering him the most when Radha defy him.

Surya want to take her with him...jalal wont allow it...let's see how you will plan out the rest of the story..

This story is kind of difficult one...

King Surya, you have no idea what is going to happen to you if she agrees to your proposal. Just pray for your good health that she doesn't fall in your lap otherwise, even god won't be able to save you from me- this is the best sentence!!! i got goosebumps reading it..👍🏼
😳

do keep it up...
Just on problem...I thought the chapter was short...do try post long chapter...

Chapter was about 8000 plus words... 😆 not small

I know you are very busy...but what can I say I am addicted to your writing...

Aww Love U sweet heart... Thank U so so much for all this update request... 😃

I am eagerly waiting for jalal and radha convo...please update soon di...

I will try my best😳

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