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rs_fun2

@rs_fun2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Hey Bhavini... U are back with a bang! 👍🏼 So good to see u all hale and hearty with ur great writing...

Now for the chapter, it was great... Loved the emotional turmoil the 2 are in and the revelation that they love each other even if it's not to each other...

Waiting eagerly for the next chapter... With Radha limping on her wounded legs, Surya trying to woo her and Radha trying to make Jalal jealous, Jalal ki band bajne wali hai... If you add the revelation that Radha is really Jodha, you have a perfect storm!

Please update soon and take care... 🤗

Btw, I like this raw Jalal more now than the romantic Jalal of Is it hate or love...

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maheshi

@amitaprasad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

first of all welcome back with a standing ovation with a big round applause...secondly do not ever doubt over ur writig skills.you are an amazing and flawless writer...coming on chappy it was fabulous...they way u describe jalal little victory over his emotions towards radha show how cunning he is? but he does not know in love ,there is no need of cunningness...radha turmoil about her feeling for him is well described...poor girl fallen for a man who have thousands of women already, God save her.can not wait to see a super jealous jalal.a big thanks for pm.my like button is not working.

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Jasmine Grewal

@jasminegrewal98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Thanks for the pm Bhavini! Im happy to hear ur health is much better now dear As for the update WOW JUST AMAZING I just really love this story ur doing a brilliant job, cant wait to c Jalal burning in jealousy over Jodha plz update soon!!!

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Aditi

@Phulchukki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

oh finally u r back..yipeee..as always an awesome update but I found it small although may be it's not. But yes if u r done with the next chappy then plz plz update it as fast as u could...u knw m also in my dreamy state now wondering what'll b jalal's reaction. Oh I seriously want to see him jealous.

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deepa111

@deepa111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

are di everyone like ja gettimg jealous as till now ja make her so jealous in his ego n then hurt her too nd top of that creature ruks fulfilled the left over mess by humilating her in front of all so its time for ja to taste his own medicine na

Edited by deepa_chauhan - 9 years ago

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Lakshmi

@redime

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Posted: 9 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: shahbhavini
I will start writing IS IT soon... may be a small chapter... Only reason I decided to put a hold on it...because I have bigger plan for... I have really big track in my mind ... which needs atleast 10 chapters. and I can't write two story at a time.

That's sounds great
But atleast start updating
Write 2 chapters of RKG and 1 of IS IT that is fine as well
But do write coz am addicted to is it

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Namita

@155pari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#147

OMG finally u updated dii!!

i was so eagerly waiting for this update...

jodha is punishing herself for falling in love with the king..

poor lady..

all set to make rukaiya jealous...

she's dressed in a outfit given by jalal..

you described her beauty in a truly amazing way..

i could actually imagine how jodha looks..

superb chapter!

update the next chapter asap!😊

can't wait anymore...

thanx for the pm..😊

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mamtasingla

@mamtasingla

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Posted: 9 years ago

#148

hey di...welcome back🤗

this forum misses you and your updates alot

i hope now u r fine and will regularly visit the forum

so sorry di, i know i m late but i m busy in something so couldnt able to read it

>now cming to update<

its just mind blowing update even though there is no jhalak of jealous jalal in this chapter

sometimes time unable to heal all the wounds and same applies in radha's condition

radha having very hard time in juggling btw her brain and heart

but radha find a good friend in reva which supported her like a sister😃

i really like their conversation, radha sharing her problem with reva

hamida-jalal sarcastic comments to each other but jalal brilliantly avoid the further conversation with MARIAM MAKHANI😉

shit...jalal missed the golden opportunity to see radha...poor him😛

on other hand, raja bharmal missing his laadli daughter😊

seems aacharya is a big fan of jalaluddin mohammad😕😆

radha in her best attire, aaj toh samjho jalal ki jaan gayi hi😲😛😆

raja surya vadan comes to meet radha( ab aayega asli maza) *evil laugh*

i started liking him..seems he is deeply in love with radha😳

everyone is shocked to know the purpose of his visit😉

i didnt understand one thing...surya said that jalal is not his enemy den why he is coming in agra😕 he is a true rajvanshi who believes in fair policy

and the way he reply to rukaiya...dil khush ho gaya😆

cant wait for every1's reaction on radha's entry

so pls di jaldi update kardo...u said na ki next update ready hai

continue soon and thnks 4 pm

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swriter

@swriter

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Posted: 9 years ago

#149

Hey di in reality jalal did something wrong with jodha in dark forest. Jis ka sapana jalal daily dekhata hain and moti ke saath kya huaa tha ?
And what is hidden motive of surya for coming agra?
Hey many more questions in my mind plz for these answers update soon

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Himani

@himani02

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Posted: 9 years ago

#150

Oh god finally u updated di... Chapii was awsome oh god radh in royal dresss wow nd jalal ohh god di..waiting for the jealous jalal i m sure he will get mesmerized by her beauty after seeing princess jodha...😃😃 nd rukiya will get jealous...

Edited by himani02 - 9 years ago

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