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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: krishna...
loved it

update fast

Thank U so much😃

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Rani1965

@Rani1965

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Good to hear from you again. Happy to know that you are fine. I would like to thank your friend Preet, for encouraging you to write again. I really love this story of yours.
By the way, the update was awesome. I really can't wait to know how Jalal, Rukaiya and the others will react when Radha makes her grand entrance.
Really eagerly waiting for your next update and thank you for the PM.

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IshqHaiWoEhsaas

@IshqHaiWoEhsaas

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Hi Bhavi di... First of all... a biggg sorry for being this late... really sorry di...😔

And thank you sooo much for coming back and updating your story... 👏

Yesterday night I read chapter 11 again, and then 12, to get back the same effect of continuation. And once I started reading, I didn't want to stop. I started at 11 at night and ended at 2...😆

For your writing, I have only one word. Your writing is purely magical di! Simply Magical! 👏⭐️ We can so easily connect with your characters and their emotions! You have so wonderfully, so well expressed the confusion in both AkDha's hearts. ⭐️

And my god! How well you deal with human emotions! Really amazing di. 👏 This story of yours is truly a masterpiece. ⭐️

Just heard the ghazal you have used in the previous chapter. Loved it! It is really mesmerizing. ❤️

Just one request... it is really heart - wrenching to see my AkDha in so much pain! 😭 I hope everything gets fine soon... if not very soon. 😳😃

Hoping that since the next chapter is Jealous Jalal... my Jo will be spared for some tome at least from her pain. I mean of course the pain would be there, but let her taste victory also for some time at least.

Waiting for the next chapter eagerly. Please update soon.

And take care! Get fit and fine soon di... and give us lovely chapters! 😃😉😆

Edited by -AkDha.Lover- - 9 years ago

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mansi345

@mansi345

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#164

wow, superb update

thanks for the pm

nd please update the next chapter soon

Edited by mansi345 - 9 years ago

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atoshi chanda

@atoshi.chanda06

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#165

first of all welcome back after many days. i was eagerly waiting for the update of this ff and your other ff...i hope ur health is better now...take care of ur self... and i hope now we will get regular update...
coming to the update,awesome update as ever... 👏 but I thought something was missing. .that was may be jalal and radha was not on any scene together...
but next is coming the jealous jalal...hope we will get to more and more interaction between the duo...it will be super duper hit...can't seem to wait...thank u for pm and update soon...

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Shravani bhattacharya

@ISHANI222

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#166

afterall, you are back...love you so much

thank you for the beautiful chapter

and dont take this much time to update...👏

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karishma.s

@karishma.s

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Just read the new chapter. I'm sorry i did not know that you had a surgery and were not feeling well. I was wondering where u vanished for six months. Hope your health is ok and nice to see u here again . Loved the chapter and can't wait for jealous jalal

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Shambhavi

@lazyshambhavi

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Diii...

I feel so elated now🥳

You replied to my comments

This is such a heart warming gesture from your side.😃

U reply to everyone's comments

You are a super⭐️

Main toh jabra fan ho gayi😃😃

Thank you so muchhh...😛

Love you

🤗🤗🤗

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Lakshmi

@redime

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: karishma.s
Just read the new chapter. I'm sorry i did not know that you had a surgery and were not feeling well. I was wondering where u vanished for six months. Hope your health is ok and nice to see u here again . Loved the chapter and can't wait for jealous jalal

Not just 6 months di was missing for more than a year

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rachana999

@rachana999

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#170

Hi bhavini...

How r u ? Hope u r doing fine .

I am glad to see u back , hopefully in good health.

As far as update is concerned.. I felt it is short ...but ok.. atleast u r back ..

as usual.. I liked the way u portray the emotions 👏 ...disappointed bcoz no ja-jo...

pls give the nxt update ASAP... waiting to see the reactn of ja on seeing jo...

luv u...take care

rachana 😊