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swetiii

@swetiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#631

awsum
lived it
jalal was going naughty..
Jalal: really.. if i hug u accidentally.. u won't mind..??
🤣

and his cute antics
Jalal: oh god..looks at his hands.. my dear hands remember if u do any bad things u will be cut.. so better take care of ur self..kisses his hands..
oh god
hehe
& then going crazy when he got his bed back..
haha
he is supr cute

aww
jj having grt time
update asap di

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Titus

@Akdhalover6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#632

Nice chappy yaar finally jo trusted jalal and share bed with him
jalal holds her hand in sleeping and funny thing is she don't cut his hand as she warn him😃 😉
jalal,jodha and salim finally become happy
👏 overall its a nice chappy but too short...please dear in next chapter try to increase a lenth please...please ⭐️ 😊

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

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Posted: 9 years ago

#633

Nice chappy akka

Jalal is acting so cute

Update soon akka

Eagerly waiting for confession

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#634

Lovely Chapter laksh😊

I was quite worried before but while reading this chapter I was smiling broadly😃😆

I expected this only from jodha 😛and not a confession😆 I loved her answer that he had to manage with single hand.. Poor jalal🤣

Finally all is going well😊❤️

Jodha is a big food lover.. where as jalal loves jodha a lot..

>>> 🤣 I loved it laksh❤️😆

And i like that jalal started getting up late😛 Very nice jo😆

I enjoyed this chapter dear😃

Love you so much🤗

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#635

To ALL who were saying that I always comment first on this story,, see I am not commenting first since last 2 updates😆

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jasmine87

@jasmine87

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Posted: 9 years ago

#636

Nice Update...

jo threaten ja for his hands...🤣

thanks for pm.

update soon.

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#637

Cute update lakshmi akka. ...

Jodha is treating jalal this is very strong move in there relation. ...

Haha jalal was teasing jodha. ... nd she warned him that she will cut his hands. ...

Oo god jalal with out hand. ...

Good to knw they r seeping together. ...

Nd jo address ja as hubby...

Salim joja r cute family. ...

Update soon akka. ..

Nd thanks for pm. ...

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#638

Lovely update dii..
They both started sharing bed 😊 but not before jodha warning jalal not to roam in her area in sleep 😆
their relation is getting better day by day..
Salim is also back..
Jodha shared everything with vaishu and nancy and they both r genuinely happy for her..
Thanku for pm
continue soon
love u
take care

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#639

Thanks for the lovely comments..

Love you all..

CHAPTER 38.2:

Jalal took complete care of jodha in 1 month..

Sometimes he lifted her & sometime she walked with help of walker..

Jalal didn't went to office...

Both did work from home..

In this one month both got know each other more..

Jodha started cooking.. & jalal helped her..

They shared bed. They went out..

Jodha got to know more about jalal.. His likes for movies , his friends, his outings..But he didn't leave her in this month.. not even a single second..

Jalal got to know her love for food.. late night hungry, junk food, her hobbies, her tantrums, her fightings her love for music...

Everything they shared.. but they didn't shared the husband & wife relation..

Jodha still in confusion about her feelings.. she thought that he is friend only.. jalal didn't forced her to love him back..

Happy family..

After 1 month:

Jalal took her to the doctor..

Doctor: oh god.. the most difficult couple came.. how are u madam??

I hope u took good care..

Jodha: yes doctor..I am good & I think so I took care...

Doctor: May be ur not.. but I am damn sure u husband definitely did...

Jodha: hmmm... yes doctor..

In mind thanks jalal..

Doctor started removing cement plaster with using small saw..

Jodha was panicked seeing that..

Clutched jalal tightly.& hugged his waist tightly.. pushed her head more into jalal stomach..

Jalal hugged her back.. & he hold her shoulders.. pats her back.. he feels her silky hair.. the way she hold him.. he feels goosebumps in his stomach...

Jalal: it's ok.. jodha.. I am here na.. don't worry.. u can walk happily..

Doctor finished his job soon..

Jodha tried to put her leg on the floor but she felled down.

But didn't hit the ground.. jalal hold her securely...

Jalal: what the hell doctor.. she can't able to walk..

Doctor: sir... plz calm down.. her leg is in rest for 1 month.. how can she walk suddenly.. till today she had support for leg.. now it removed.. try to walk little distance madam.. in 1 week u can walk properly.. but don't stress much..she can eat anything..

Sir any more doubts??

Jalal: yeah.. he started again questions.. he talked with the doctor again for 20 minutes..

Jodha is waiting for jalal.

Jalal came & throwed the walker in the hospital itself..

Jalal: come let's go..

Jodha: but jalal.. I am feeling pain..

Give back my walker..

Jalal: no need.. I will help u.. I will take u to the car.. u can walk slowly.. I will help u till u can walk by ur own.. & lifts her to the car..

Jodha didn't Said anything.. & nods..snaked her hands around jalal neck..

Jalal helped her to normal again..

In 1 week she back to normal..

But jalal didn't allowed her to touch her vespa..

He wants to sell it but jodha denied.. so he kept it..

He always went with her where ever she wants to go.

Same office.. both goes & comes back in same car..

Jalal helped jodha to drive car..

She already know driving but driving in Hyderabad is toughest task.. he helped her..

Jodha damaged his beautiful black Audi.. she kept lot of dents & scratches.. but jalal didn't said anything..

His beautiful Audi was shaped out..

Like this 3 more months gone..

They sometimes hugged each other..but friendly hugs..

Jodha started feeling but confused about her feelings...she feels he is a best friend to her...

Life is happy..in this 3 months she forget about her past incidents.. she completely forgot about that aweful day.. she never went to her parents house without jalal.. she went with him & come back with him.. she can't able to stay without him.. even jalal didn't changed.. he loves her more & more..

Both souls connected to each other..life is going smoothly for the small family..

Salim , jodha & jalal happy & cute family..

Jalal sometimes talked with Hamida but he didn't went to his hometown neither Hamida didn't came to his home.. cold war is still going on.. but jalal loves her mother a lot.. he can't able to separate from her.. jodha don't mind with their talking...

Still jodha didn't talked with jalal family.. She is uncomfortable with them.. jalal didn't forced her to talk..

But after 3 months..

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#640

Aww Even doctor knew that jalal must had took good care of her❤️

ha ha poor doctor.. again jalal started his never ending question-answer round and scolded him as she was not able to walk😆 I think that doctor was more grateful than jo-ja that jo's fine now.🤣

But I really liked that jalal threw the walker in hospital😊

the way she hold him.. he feels goosebumps in his stomach...

>>> Are u sure only in stomach??🤣☺️

Aww after lots of dents he didn't say anything to her.. Now this is quite unbelievable😆😆

But this jalal is really very sweet⭐️⭐️ A PERFECT HUSBAND❤️

After 3 months..???? what???😆 Is jalal's family coming???😛

Thanks for the pm dear🤗

PS: She sometimes hugged him too.. That's nice😉

Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago