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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#251

Sorry for not replying individual reply...

Thanks for the lovely comments dears...

Love u all..

CHAPTER 34.3:

Jodha goes inside..

Jodha: sorry dad.. I should not shout on u.. I am really sorry. Bends her head in front of him..

Bhar: jodha come here..

Jodha goes near him..sits beside Bhar..

Bhar: holds jodha hands jodha will u forgive ur dad.. I am so sorry beta.. I talked with u rudely.. plz forgive me jodha..plz..

Jodha hugs Bhar dad..plz.. don't say like that.. I am sorry.. I should not shout at u.. I am really sorry..I didn't do any mistake dad..plz..accept me as ur daughter..plz...dad.. cries hugging her dad.. after a long time she hugged her father.. she can't able to control her crying..

Bhar: breaks the hug..& wipes jodha tears & says. Jodha.. I know.. I realized my mistake.. but thank god... it's not late.. I got u back.. all thanks to jalal.. he make me realize how much important u are for me.. I love u beta.. I am so sorry..

Jodha thinks.. just in one day.. how did u do jalal??

But hugs her father tightly.. plz don't dad don't leave me again..I can't take it.. I missed u a lot..

Bhar: never Jodhu.. my princess.. I will be there with u always. I missed u too beta...

Maina & jalal are really happy for Bhar & jodha..

Maina thanks jalal..

Family hug.. jodha with her mother & father..

She is happy..

Bhar calls jalal also..

Both maina & Bhar thanks jalal for giving their daughter back..

Bhar: let's go home.. I want to see my grandson.. where is he jodha??

Jodha: I send him to the school dad.. we will go..

After few formalities in hospital.. the 4 goes to jalal house..

Jodha was smiling happily.. after a long time.. jalal also happy looking at her...

Finally jodha got some happiness. .

& jalal tooo...

Bhar was fine.. he was very happy after seeing salim..

He pampered salim alot.

Salim also adjusted soon with maina & Bhar...

Jalal had a double bedroom flat..

So maina & Bhar adjusted in salim room..

Jalal was in thinking.. usually he sleeps on hall.. but now uncle & aunty are there if he sleep in hall .. they will understand & starts questions.. so he is thinking what to do..

Jodha also thinks same.. at least she wants to tell her parents that they are happy..should I call him or not?? What to do??

Finally decides to call him inside...

After dinner...

Jodha: jalal u go & sleep in OUR room.. I will come in a while..

Makes a eye signal to him.. stress on the word OUR..

Jalal understands her.. again dance...oh god.. what is this.. today I got lottery.. first she hug me.. then sleeping in same room.. oh god. Someone pinch me hard plz..he pinches himself.. oouch... it hurts.. happily goes to their room...

Precap:

Jodha: jallalll...

Jalal: yeah yeah..tell me..

Jodha: ... ( I will fill this blank in update)

Jalal: oh god.. how she knows it.

Jodha: will u stop thinking.. & tell me answer..

Jalal: hmmm.. yeah..in a low voice..

Jodha: better bit loud..Mr jalal..

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divya joshi

@divyaJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#252

Awesome dii..
loved it..
jalal want to do dance haha..
me too..hehe..
precap..??lets wait..

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#253

Wow because of jo parents ja got entry to Room . .. is another shock awaiting for us? ????..I guess she will ask about job nd company details...continue soon nd do pm

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#254

Happy wala update😃

So JoJa acting like normal couple in front of Maina and Bharmal..whatever,it was Jallu's lucky day😆

I think precap is abt the car and he following her daily to office..am I right?

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#255

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

u many times used this word and u urself don't know its meaning😆

I knew someone would ask the meaning and Payal,u did it😆

Honestly,difficult to explain the meaning😆

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#256

Wow superb update lakshmi akka. ..

Finally father nd daughter r back together. ...

That was so emotional akka...

Nd it was so good to see d family huge. ...

Jalal is lovely hubby what to see his wife all was happy nd getting her happiness one by one...

Nd I expected something like this would have happened for jodha to take this step to call jalal to 'they' room... in my guess was right. ...

I person is more happy then everyone that is samil her is happy with his entire family which he missed from 3 years. ...

Good precap akka waiting for d blank nd d update soon...

Nd thanks for pm. ...

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#257

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr

I knew someone would ask the meaning and Payal,u did it😆
Honestly,difficult to explain the meaning😆

U know what does it mean bindu??

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#258

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Hahaha...
I.know Telugu meaning payu...
But exact word in English I don't know...
In Hindi it can be same like vaise...
Like vaise hi...
( Hindi word payu)
I hope I gave proper meaning.. Hahaha I😆

Ok vaise he😆

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Avika444

@avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#259

Aww bangaram na nammakaanni vammu chesavu

After reading precap in previous update i thought jo gave entry in the room as she started trusting him

but no she gave him entry becoz of her parents

anyways something is better than nothing right

so finally a very happy chapter

jo got her father back ,jalal is happy to see her happy

Loved the update bangaram

Now coming to precap ...

whats there in the blank

Waiting for it

update soon

thanks for pm

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#260

Lovely chapter laksh😊

So finally they all patched up and jo's happy and seeing her happy our jallu was happy too😃😃

I am happy for salim.. he got a complete family now😊

Indeed it was a very lucky day for jalal😆

I was laughing at the last part.. 😆😆 u wrote "Again dance"🤣

I hope this dance will not stop once he get inside a room and she confront him for a job and company😆

I thought she will allow him to sleep in a room happily but no.. she allowed him only for her parents.. why do i get the feeling that from now on he will sleep in THEIR room only 😉😆

Precap was damn interesting..with each chapter this story is getting very interesting dear😊

I love this story and ofcourse the writer of this story❤️😆

Thanks for the pm dear🤗

Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago