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Posted: 9 years ago
Geet I noticed you are reading this story😊
Love you dearie🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the lovely comments dears...
Love u all..


CHAPTER 35:

Jalal happily goes to their room..
Sleeps in bed..
Wow.. today I will sleep with Sonu..oh god.. Will I get sleep today.. I think I will die with happiness...he was smiling & blushing like a idiot... he sleeps on the bed...

Jodha cames to room..

Jalal pretend to sleep..but jodha knows he didn't sleep at all..

She coughs.. to alert him..but he didn't move..

Jodha calls him jalal...jalal...

But still he didn't move..

Jodha: bit louder.. jalalll...
I know u are not sleeping..get up now..

Jalal yawns & gets up.. what jodha??
Do u want anything..Sleep na.. y u are disturbing me..

Jodha: really.. I want to ask u something.. Will u plz answer..

Jalal: yes..thinks in mind... i feel something chang in ur voice today..not like old.. u are commanding me like a wife.. i loved this change in u Sonu...

Jodha: jallalll...

Jalal: yeah yeah..tell me..

Jodha: where do u work?? In my office??

Jalal: oh god.. how she knows it??

Jodha: will u stop thinking.. & tell me answer..

Jalal: hmmm.. yeah..in a low voice..

Jodha: better bit loud..Mr jalal..

Jalal: yes. Jodha.

Jodha: y u didn't tell me??

Jalal: u didn't asked me..so I didn't said..

Jodha: really.. u know na.. I am working in ur office. U saw me daily.. don't u have mouth to say that we are working in Same office.. u know about me that where I work... so can't u tell about u..

Jalal: I don't know about ur office jodha.. u didn't said me. So I didn't said to u..

Jodha: oh.. really.. if I tell or not u will surely know about my office.. my whereabouts... I know about u jalal.. u won't leave me like that... I know u will definitely looks for my safety.. that's y I didn't tell u...but u should have to tell me na... y u didn't tell me?? As a wife I have rights to know where u work.
. Looks at him angrily..

Jalal: smiles.. feels very happy.. starts dancing again... till today he thought that she is not noticing him...but no.. he is wrong
.she observed every action of him.. she liked his caring.. he wants to grab & hug her. But didn't have that dare to do that..he loved when she said as a wife I have the rights... wow.. she accepted me as her husband..smiles dreamily... blushes very badly..
He have a dimple on his right cheek..

Jodha observed his dimple..
Now y u are giving me that dimple smile???

Jalal clean bowled.. oh god...save me today.. how can I control now.. she observed my dimple.. how cute u are looking Sonu... I love u Sonu..

Jodha got frustrating with his long silence.. shouts.. again..jalalll..

Jalal: yeah..Sonu..I mean jodha.. tell Me.

Jodha: here I am shouting.. give the answer damn it..

Jalal: I am sorry jodha.. I thought of informing u.. sorry.. between how u know about me ?? I mean how u got this information?? Is ur chamcha brother(karthik) told u..

Jodha: yesterday when we went hospital na..in hurry u told me to come near parking.. which is our office parking.. u have Audi q3.. there the car is Verna.. u thought that I won't observe u much.. I remember ur old car..Verna.. first we met na.. I still remember that day.. I asked karthik Annayya.. he told me everything..that u park it in his garage.. u take that only few times.. & what u wanted me to lie jalal about the car.. ?? I enquired.. jodha here..don't eastimate jodha.. ok.. Don't u dare to lie.. I hate lies...

Jalal: u still remember our first meeting..

Jodha: yes..y not.. I remember.. meeting in coffee shop. That's it.. jodha stopped.. everything came back to her..

Jalal understood her situation..
To avoid further discussion..

Jalal: jodha u are really genius..u must try in cbi.. criminal will be die with ur questions.. u have criminal brain jodha.. really I sware.. u enquired.. wow.. great job.. I must say.. u are really become police officer( with smile)

Jodha: with angry face.. thanks.. if u plz move.. I wanted to sleep..

Jalal: to where??

Jodha: floor...

Jalal: nooo...


Precap:
Jalal slowly gets up come near jodha..
Jodha didn't sleep.. she was really scared.. y he is coming to near my bed.. but still didn't open her eyes.. oh god...save me...



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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing chapter👏👏
In the whole chapter I was smiling and laughing like an idiot or like this jalal😆😆
why was he pretending to sleep?? and she observed his dimple smile❤️
I am loving this jalal laksh and how cute he was looking while blushing
So she's his wife😉 and I loved her dialogues that she knows him.. her jalal😊❤️
Precap was interesting too😉
update soon dearie.. PLZ😛

Thanks for the pm😊
Love ya❤️
Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
WOW just loved this chappy awaiting next what? same room and all😳
Jo observes Ja carefully
Dimple smile of Ja and Jo angry on him
Good progress 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
as guessed jo enquiringly about ja job & commanding rights of wife.. ja super happy...precap so funny poor girl scared of ja action
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nyc updatee yr ... oh jalal sleep on floor uff
Updateee
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update sissy 😃
Hehe poor jalal bhai 😆 dance karing 😉😆
Karlo karlo 😆
Hehe Wow ur too smart jodha didi 😉😆
hehe Haain he will sleep on the floor 😕😆
continue soon
thanks for pm
Mein aa gai 😳
Big hug to you sissy 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome chappy
Happy Jalal
Detectove Jodha
Precap is nice
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
oh dii rhis is soo funny update..
i mean jidha is like enquiry officer..haha nd jalal isa criminal..
what a suprb interogation..
amazing..jalal ajkl zyada hi dance karne laga h..karle din abhi tre..haha
precap..vry intetesting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update lakshmi akka. ..
I way jalal was blushing from what ever happened to him today... his dimple smile was so cute. ...
Jodha was acting like a typical wife nd d way she told she should knw about here hubby where about was lovely ... nd she also kne jalal will nt leave her until he feels she is safe...
Nd d car part was cute...
Haha nw jalal should sleep on floor haha...
Update soon akka. ..
Nd thanks for pm. ...

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