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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Prii1994..



That sounds better... 😊
But when r u planning to END Secrets of Heart????
It's going great, but don't you think it's been too long????


Why would you even ask someone when are they going to end their story... If you won't like it then please don't read it. But don't by so rude to ask someone to end their story.
The secrets of heart is going great from the start till now, I really don't want it to end. I am really attached to it. And I'm sure others are too. But if you don't like it..then don't read it please..but don't ask for its ending.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2

7 month later

A taxi stop in emergency gate at one hospital and heavy pregnant jodha come out with the help of her best friend, nurses come to help them.

" help nurse my friend on labor . . her water already break " reva told the nurse

" ok don't worry . . we will take her right awat to delivery room while waiting for her doctor " reply nurse, then she push wheelchair where jodha sit and reva following from behind, jodha feel another strong and pain contraction.

" owwhhh it's hurttt " screams jodha

" hang on jodha . . . be strong . . . " reva give her support, they became best friends since they work together as waitress and decide to rent apartement so they can share the cost, reva feel happy to have jodha in her life, reva working and study in the same time and jodha always support her and she even help her with her paperwork, she is very smart but for her kids jodha decide to quit her study and saving her money to give a better life for them, but jodha do her hobby now, she like to write a fictional so reva encourage her to try to make a novel and she just finish her first novel script and without her knowledge reva send it to famous publisher company in mumbai and she hope there will be a good news because jodha now have twins and she will need work really hard to raise them, reva waiting for her at the lounge while jodha in battle with her life to deliver her twins sons to the world.

Inside delivery room her doctor just come, she is a kind old woman and she is smile looking at jodha.

" wow this twins are not patient to come to this world " dr pooja tease jodha and jodha along with nurses chuckled

" ooh yeah doctor . . they are really impatient " said jodha, another contraction hit her " ahhh . . shit .. it's hurt " curse jodha

" yes jodha it's must be hurt . . now come on . . take a deep breath sweety and then push as hard as you can " told dr pooja and jodha prepare herself to do as she said, she take a deep breath and push.

" aahhh " screams jodha while she push as hard as she can, meanwhile at ritz carlton ballroom where a big fund raiser held jalal feel something wrong with him, he feel suffocate and he feel his heart really hurt and his head very dizzy.

" jalal . . are you ok ? " ask ismail, he notice that jalal's face look very pale, he know since that fatal accident jalal sometimes got this sympthoms, not only lost some of his memory permanent from the caused of head injury and trauma.

Jalal loosen up a bit his tie " I don't know what happen ismail but I feel really hurt everywhere . . my head spinning like roller coaster, and sometimes I heard a vocei calling my name, I feel like I've heard that voice somewhere but damn I can't remember where " said jalal in angry.

Ismail hold jalal's shoulder " don't worry jalal . . I know this is not easy and make you frustrated sometimes but you must patient " ismail try to make him relax, he know that it's not easy for jalal to be vulberable like this, when he wake up from coma he got amnesia, he even don't know who is he and after surgery he get better but still there are no memory, it's like his memory wipe wipe out from his mind including what he was doin after he left his family eight month a go and he still do theraphy to gain back his memory.

Jalal touch his forehead, it's like his head about to explode and suddenly he hears babies crying " you hear that ? " ask jalal to ismail

" hear what ? " ismail feel confuse

" that sound . . the sound of crying babies " reply jalal

Ismail look at jalal with worry and concern " jalal there is no such thing sound here . . . are you sure that you are ok ? "

" I don't know ismail it's like I've become crazy . . there are lot voices and sounds in my head . . I hear a woman cried out in pain and babies crying " said jalal

Ismail really worry now " come on jalal we'll go home now . . you are not doin well and your face really pale . . let's leave before you pass out here " suggest ismail and jalal just nod because he is confuse what is happening to himself, then without make everyone in fund raiser suspicious ismail and jalal leave quietly, jalal feel extreme headache and one of his ears hurt too, ismail give him medicine and with obey jalal take that medicine " how are you feel now ? " ask ismail

" still got headache and my one of my ear really hurt . . . even a little sound very loud to me " reply jalal

" hang on there big guy as soon as we arrive at home you must rest and sleep " said ismail

" you think I will able to gain my memory back ? shit I want to know hat is happening to me that day " said jalal

" yes jalal I believe you will remember everything and no matter how long it will take you must patient and don't give up " said ismail

" I wont give ismail . . I want to know who the hell is trying to kill me " said jalal with angry, untill now police don't have a lead who is try to kill jalal.

" don't worry jalal . . we will find whoever did that to you " reply ismail

Jalal try to remember something but he couldn't remember " shit . . ismail my heart tell me that there is something important that I need to remember but my f**king brain couldn't work properly " said jalal in frustration

" patient jalal . . you still have intense theraphy and we will try to find your lost memory " said ismail "i know that it's like a torture when you can't remember what is been happening in our life " he add.

" yes ismail we will do that . . I want to get back my memory because I can feel that there is something important in those missing memory " said jalal, he will do whatever it takes to get back his memory, ismail just holding jalal's shoulder and give him strength and support.

A tears fall on jodha's cheeks when she watch nurse cleaning up her sond, her twin sons.

" they are very handsome jodha . . . " praise dr pooja

Jodha smile with proud " yes dr pooja they are indeed cute and handsome "

" already got name for your handsome sons ? " ask dr pooja

Jodha nod " hassan and hussain " she said with proud

" oowh that is the beautiful name " praise dr pooja , then nurse come to jodha and put one baby first so jodha can give them their first breastfeeding, there are amazing feeling in her heart when her sons drink her milk for the first time, jodha feel a strong bond with them and she promise eventhough no father on their lives she will become a mother and a father for them, she don't have problem to be a single parents, she will do anything for her sons happiness and she will make sure they have a better live.

Reva waiting jodha at patient room, she just got amazing news and she can't wait to tell jodha about this, she can't believe that this is happening, she will this is twins luck because when they born their mother got a jackpot, the door open and nurser come with hospital bed and she see jodha there, she looks exhausted but happy and glowing, after the nurses leave reva kiss jodha's cheeks.

" congratulation jodha . . . you are a mother now " said reva and jodha smile with big and happy.

" thank you reva . . I woldn't make it without you . . thank you for always be there for me " reply jodha, she is really bless to have best friend like reva, she is been her strength to hold on in her weak phrase.

" same jodha . . you too always be there for me whenever I need you " said reva and they smile " hmmm jodha I must to confess about something " jodha looking at reva with confuse and curious.

" what you want to confess reva ? " ask jodha

Reva look nervous " hmm jodha actually without your approval I send your novel scripts to one famous publisher " she said

Jodha try to understand whe reve just said " are you said what I think you just said ? " ask jodha

Reva nod " yes . . I'm sorry jodha but your novel are amazing and it such a waste just to keep it . . and I can't help my self to help you sent it . . . "

" damn reva . . why don't you tell me first " said jodha with angry

" I'm so sorry but if I didn't do that you will never sent your amazing novel to publisher " reply reva

" that is because I feel my novel not good enough reva and . . . . . "

" they said your novel are amazing and they are very sure that it will become phenomenon . . . . . "

" wait wait wait . . . who is they ? " ask jodha

" mr jamal sheikh . . he is chief editor at megamind publishing " reply reva

Jodha totally confuse now " reva you better tell me the whole story because I'm totally confuse " said jodha

" ok two months a go I've sent your novel scrips to megamind publishing company and today when you are in labor I've got call from mr jamal sheikh, the chief editor from that company and he said that your novel are amazing and he want it to be publish through megamind, he said your novel will become phenomenon and it will famous world wide " reva explain everything to jodha.

Jodha can't believe something like this happen to her " you are not kidding right ? " ask jodha suspicious

" no silly . . how can I make a joke about something important like that " reply reva

Jodha just realize what this is all mean to her " oooh my God . . reva . . if this is true then I . . . I will . . . " jodha lost her words and she just close her mouth in shock and excited.

" that mean if your novel sell really good you could be rich jodha . . you can give your sons a better life " said reva

Jodha nod and look at reva with teary eyes " and this all because of you reva . . I'm sorry because I angry before . . . you are the one who make this happen "

" hey don't mention bout this . .compare to what you've done for me helping me study so I got good grade and university give me full scholarship . . what I've done to you is nothing . .and beside I think twins are lucky charm for you . . the publishing decide to publish your novel right when twins born " said reva

" you are right reva . . . God give me way to make a better life for my sons and to give them all my time, in absence of their father I must to be a mother and a father for them and if my fate to become a novelist then I can work from home and give my sons all my love and attention " reply jodha

" you are right . . . you are strong jodha . . and I believe you can raise twins alone . . don't think again that irresponsible husband of yours and his cruel family . . . show them that you are more than able to raise your own sons " reva still angry how jodha's husband leave her and never come back, jodha been though a lot because of him.

Jodha smile looking how rave very protective toward her and she can imagine she will overprotective over hassan hussain " forget about him reva I don't want to remember him in this very special day " said jodha, jodha been through hard life because of jalal, reva didn't know the detailed what was really happening after jalal left and how jodha must runaway and hide herself because her life in danger, the ironic things that she had no one to help, protect her and her babies that time, , jodha don't know who is try to kill her but since that day jodha can feel that her life and her babies life in danger and all proved when someone try to kill her by burning her house with her inside but jodha success runaway through the back door and only bring clothes she was wearing , so jodha hide until she think it safe, reva have no idea how jodha live her life when she was hiding from whoever want to kill her, but jodha better keep the darkest and scariest part of her life for herself, then nurses come and take hassan hussain, jodha and reva look amaze with those handsome babies, nurses then leave them alone.

" jodha carry them together and I will take a pic of you with them " suggest reva and jodha nod with happy, then reva help jodha to carry twins on her arms then with a big smile on her face jodha looking at camera and reva take couple pictures of her, she really happy looking jodha soo happy with big smile like that and she hope that she will always like that.

Meanwhile in his room jalal wake up in the middle of the night with bad headache and he keep listening a woman voice calling his name and sound of babies crying, jalal don't know what is wrong with him he come out from from bed but he loose his balance then the last thing he know that everything turn dark and he is fainted, a flash memory come in his mind then disappear jalal desperate want to know those missing memory but it seems he is too weak and he fall into darkness but he said something before he completely pass out.

" jodhaaa " he whispering and then darkness pull him in and jalal can't do anything to stop it from happening.

Happy Reading 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
awesome update
jalal lost his memory and try harder to remember everything
someone try to kill jodha😲
reva gives a great support to jodha like a true friend😊
update soon
thnks fr pm
Edited by mamtasingla - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
amazing chappy.
jalal lost his memory...
Edited by shalu1786 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Thanks for update and pm..dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
awsum chappi

wow
jo gave birth to her twins
reva is really an awsum frnd
oh ho
jo became a novelist

oh poor ja
being hated by jodha for no fault of his
he is so frustated about his memory loss

i think maham & adam tried to kill them all
so that all fortune will b if adham's

update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
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As guessed ja lost memory in acciden, I was wondering hw can he forget his life line. .jo gave birth to hh nd she is thinking ja cheated her. . Omg jo also survived from attempt. . Poor jj suffering without mistake. ..continue soon nd do pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Why is life so cruel with good people????
It's not just about a fiction, even reality sometimes is f**king hard than what one can expect!!!! 😡
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
jodha is pregnant nd she gave birth of twins..
jalal lost his memory..oh poor
its soo painfull...means someone try kill jo..
looking forward to read more nd more..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update ndi. ..
Poor jodha is suffering a lot... nd she think jalal left her...
Nd d babies born was support for her to smile in her life again...
Other side jalal is lost his memory but he can hear her call nd babies cry but he can't remember anything. ...
At last he said her name but I dont think her will remember it again. ...
Both r in very bad pain... update soon. ..
Nd thanks for pm. ..
Edited by 1357raksha - 9 years ago

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