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wen will u update janki?
Sure mamu
Originally posted by: mamtasingla
wen will u update janki?
it means u will update in 2-3 days😃
Now i m sitting front of laptop and working on it 😉
Note-> My dear lovely folks it is my 30th Chapter of this ff. I hope you all will like and love it... So enjoying reading 😃
Chapter- 30
{When moti and jodha reached at gate of guest room... sudden jodha's feet stopped...after thinking something...}
Jodha( in dim voice)-> " moti please changed your Dupptta with me..."
{Hearing it from her friend moti got shock... She looked toward jodha with question full eyes... but jodha was not in mood to answer her... So swiftly she exchanged her duppta with moti without her permission... moti could not do anything... Her mind was not working now... firstly this "KHEER" drama and now she exchanged her dupptta with her... But other side careless friend did not bother her and swiftly stepped in guest room... jalal was laying on bad silently but his heart was restless... He did not understand what was happing to his heart... His put his right hand on his heart...}
Jalal( confusingly)-> " what is happing to you... why are you behaving like this... When your love near you... then you behave like this but now...
{He put his head on bed headboard and start to looking toward roof... his eyes was filled up with pain and sadness...past memories started to flash in his mind one by one like movie... These memories brought tear in his eyes and at same time smile on his lips... Tears for separation and smile for those happy and peaceful moments...}
Jalal( taking deep breath)-> " where are you jaan my heart badly miss you... I know I broke your heart and trust badly... but it is truth that I love you very much jaan and I can't live any more without you... Whole world use to call your jalal heartless and cruel shahensha... Ya I am... ya I am... Before you I was heartless cruel man... Because I did not find my heart and I also believed it that I had no emotions and sentiments... But when you stepped in my life I felt like my dead heart started to beat... I felt like my colorless life filled up with many bright colors... First time in my life I wanted to live like as jalal not shahensha but..."
{ he could not hold his pain anymore and closed his eyes tightly to avoiding his tears... sudden a sweet musing hit his ears... which enough to pushed him out from his sweet memory land... This sound of anklet forced him to get up and sit on the bed...}
" I know...i know... I know this sound before... I know..." screamed his heart
{As this sound of anklet was coming near to him... as his heart was beating fast... He did not understand why was his heart telling him that he know this sound... it was belong to it...many emotions and thoughts were coming in and out in his mind... sudden a group of women entered in his room... They were putting veil on their face... One woman who was escorting by them holding a middle sized bowl... jalal was curiously looking toward them... woman hand over that bowl to near one and signaled to her to put it on night stand... reva silently walked toward bed and put bowl on night stand and after finishing her work she again occupied her place back... jalal was silent viewer of this sudden movement of his room. He could not understand that what was going on in his room and who were these women...? And what were they doing in his room... he was confusingly looking toward those women... Sudden their leader speak and her voice enough to stop his heart beat...}
Jodha( politely)-> " you saved my nephew then how can I able to say thank to it... but to show my respect toward your deed... I am cooked kheer for you I hope you will love it..."
{ but other side listener was looking toward her with frozen eyes... his eyes had popped out with shock... his heart had seemed to stopped... his mind could not believe this what was he hearing... other side seeing no response from receiver jodha tried to see toward unknown guest through the veil but thanks to her friend's duppatta and its color which was very dark and thick so she could not get proper view of her unknown guest... Jodha understood that her unknown and injured guest want some time alone and also he badly need rest so she thought right to leave him alone at that time... so she without disturbing him she silently moved out from room... other side jalal was still lost in jodha's voice he was trying to hold his consciousness to catch up reality... sudden a word which was written on his dead heart slipped out as whispered from his mouth...}
" Chanddd"
{ and it was enough to brought a shine in his emotionless eyes and wetting his dry lips with happy and peaceful smile... his almost dead heart started beating fast... he again focused his eyes toward cause of it... But empty place was enough to wipe his happy smile from his lips... He swiftly got up from bed without caring his body pain... and within next moment he realized his mistake when his whole body winced out from pain... but that time he was not caring anything ... his eyes wanted to see its desire person... he only wanted to meet and hugged her...he roamed his eyes in whole room but no one was there... in frustration jalal moved his fingers in his brown hair... and closed his eyes tightly to controlling his disappointment... after opened his eyes he took a deep unsatisfied breath and looked toward roof... he quietly moved toward his bed and sat on it... now his head was resting on headboard of bed... Sadness was Cleary visible on his face after few minutes sudden something hit his mind... And after thinking it his sadness flying away anywhere and hopeful smile occupied its place...}
" I LOVE YOU JAAN... I LOVE YOU... AND NOW I WILL NOT LET YOU GO AWAY FROM ME" broke out these some words from jalal's mouth which came out from his heart..."
{Now his eyes were shining with new determination and hope... and his lips were enjoying this type of smile fully and was not in mood to leave it earlier...}
{ jodha's room}
" I did not like his gesture... You were talking with him and he was looking toward you like fool...Moti Shooked her head in disappointment
{ jodha looked toward her childhood friend through the mirror who was busying in combing her long beautiful hairs... seeing her friend's cute gesture and pure love toward her ... a love and proud full smile appeared on her lips.
Jodha(with rolling her eyes in fake serious tone} -> " motiii... Don't talk like this about our guest you know "guest is symbol of god and what our parents are taught to us that we must respect to our guest because if we does not do it then our family and motherland's reputation will completely destroy and no one will want to take a single visit to our home and they will spread bad rumors about our culture and behavior...(turning toward moti) by the way he saved my little naughty nephew so we must respectful for his bravery full work ok... So Now don't use your little mind in other useless things please order your hands to work fast..."
{Saying it she turned her face again toward mirror... moti nodded her head like obedient child and engrossed in her work... but her mind was Cleary saying to her like something was wrong with this unknown guest... but that time she did not know... What was it... after finished her work... moti put duppatta on jodha's head... jodha felt like moti's body was working there but her mind was lost somewhere...}
Jodha( holding moti's hand and looking toward her through mirror )-> " what happened moti...? where are you lost... is your health ok na...?"
{Her worried friend's voice broke her thought process and pushed her into reality... Seeing jodha's worried face moti gave to her a assuring smile...}
Moti( camly)-> " no jodha nothing happened to me I am all right... But..."
{ Saying it she paused little. She could not decide that should she tell to jodha about her weird feeling for this unknown new guest or not... Seeing again lost moti somewhere jodha swiftly turned toward her and held her both hands with hers...}
Jodha( softly)-> " what happened moti...? Will you not tell your best childhood friend cum sister...?
Moti( with little smile in serious tone)-> " jodha i...i..i don't know I am right or not... But I don't know why my heart telling me... it is something wrong with that man when you was talking with him... he was looking to you like blankly means he got high shock after listening you... i...i...I felt something strange...( shrugging her shoulders) I don't know but ..."
Jodha (squeezing her both hand with smile)-> " hey my dear moti ... is not like this that you are thinking very much about that unknown guest... Relax he is only our guest who saved sumant so (slapping moti's forehead lightly) so don't make any pressure on your little brain and give me something testy and eatable because my children are super hungry and want to something( wetting her soft rosy lips with her tong) something spicy and yummy..."
{Seeing her friend's antic moti chuckled... and with nodding her head she swiftly walked out from there for kitchen to bringing something tasty or yummy for three naughty children...}
{Guest room}
{A restless man was sitting on his bed silently with holding his restless heart... he have to find out truth about that sweet soothing known voice which belong to him and his heart could not mistake about recognize it... but he could not thinking right and suitable way to find out truth... he very well knew that he was not in agra and there was his blood thirsty enemies place so he have to very careful before taking any step... Still he was losing in his thought world... Sudden security guard announced Sumant's arrival which forced jalal to come out from his thought land... Sumant slowly entered in jalal's room... Seeing his savior awaking he literally ran toward him and stood near the bed. Sumant was looking toward jalal with praising eyes... The way he was fought with mad angry bull... Now he had become sumant's biggest ideal and he was his biggest fan and admirer... jalal also looked toward him with curiosity...}
Jalal( smiling face)-> " how are you little brave
warrior..."
{ saying it jalal signaled to him for sitting on bed . sseing his gesture sumants's face became shine with happy smile and without wasting any more second he rode on bed.}
jalal ( making him comfortable for chit chat with little sumant )-> " hmmm tell me how are you ? is you not got any wound on your body my little warrior...?"
{ hearing little warrior word for him from jalal's mouth sumant felt very proud and a big grin appeared on his face automatically.}
Sumant( happily)-> " no I am absolutely fine and you are one who injured badly in saving me... then tell me big brave warrior how are you and if your wounds are not paining so much na..."
{ seeing his dialog back fired on him... jalal chuckled...}
Jalal( in fake serious tone)-> " ya little warrior big warrior is also fine only some wounds is remembering our dear bull maharaj..."
{Hearing his comment sumants broke out in giggles... jalal also pinched his cheeks... Sumant saw his strong muscles... Seeing sumant looking somewhere jalal followed his gaze and found him looking toward his dole-sole...}
Jalal( raising his right eyebrow )-> " What are you looking?... hmmm"
Sumant ( in dreamy voice )-> " I want to become great warrior like you In future..."
Jalal (patting his left cheek with his right hand)-> " of course dear... You will surely become a great and powerful warrior in future more than me..."
{ hearing his comment for him sumant stood up on bed and told proudly...}
Sumant (proudly)-> " and I will save my motherland from cruel evil monster " Mugal shahensha jalalluddin Muhammad" ..."
{Hearing it jalal shockingly looked toward him but next moments he felt his situation and place... So he composed himself... It was true that these rajvanshi warrior was always used to attract him and always he loved to fight with them because they all were popular not only for his strong fighting skill but also popular for their strict rule and regulations... In short if they were his biggest enemy but it was also true that he was biggest fan and admirer of then... he always put a soft and respectful corner in his heart means unfound or dead heart...}
Jalal (with smile face)-> " of course dear now jalalluddin Muhammad should fear to his future..."
{Hearing it sumant broke out in loud giggle... but sudden his eyes caught something...}
Sumant (indicating toward night stand)-> " what is this...?
{ jalal looked toward his indication...}
Jalal -> " woo... It is kheer... your buaa( aunt) brought for me..."
Sumant( excitedly )-> " wow kheer I love kheer..."
{But sudden remembering that it was only for jalal so he felt little embarrassment for his behavior... Understanding what sumant was thinking jalal with big smile...}
"Can you like to join me to finishing this delicious sweet desert..."
{ hearing his offer sumant happily accepted it... jalal ordered to maid to bring one other bowl and spoon... within next moment jalal served kheer in both bowls and without wasting any second sumant started to savoring that delicious sweet... and jalal also was feeling happy in his heart to see his happy face... but as he put first spoon in his mouth... His eyes opened widely... how could he forget that magical taste which was still alive on his tong... And unknowingly a name came out from his mouth as whisper...}
"Chanddd..."
Sumant( shockingly)-> " hmmm Chanda... who is chanda...?
{ his words brought back to jalal in reality...}
Jalal -> " noth...nothing..."
{Gulped his saliva to controlling his emotion because now he was deadly sure that sumant's aunt was his Chanda... But still he was confused little because his chanda was daughter of royal Hakim of Ranthambore and sumant belong to royal family of amer so his aunt also belong to it then how could it possible to they both lady was same... now jalal's mind was not working... But his heart was telling that she was his chanda ... his love... so for his heart's peace... He have to find out hidden truth..."
{ sumant shacking his shoulder...}
" where are you losing friend ... and why are you not eating your kheer... Eat it buaasaa made it very delicious..."
{ hearing him sudden one idea his jalal's mind and without wasting any second he followed it...}
Jalal( in soft pleading tone}-> " hey friend can you meet me to your buaasaa...?"
Sumant (shockingly)-> " why...?
Jalal-> " hmmm... why...aaa... I want to say thank to her for this delicious kheer... so can you take me to your buaasaa..."
{ after thinking some time ...}
Sumant( happily nodding his head)-> " okkk..."
{And saying it he again engrossed in his eating session... other side jalal was feeling nervousness and happiness at same time...}
{ shahi vaidhya came and checked his wounds and announced that his wounds were healing speedily and in some days he will become absolutely fine... Same time jalal asked his permission for his little walk outside of room because now he had gotten bore as laying on bed... Vaidhya ji gave permission to him happily for it... After it sumant took this responsibility on his little shoulders and raja bharmal happily gave it to him...}
{ Amer royal garden}
{ jalal was sitting on a royal bench with sumant... in short time sumant had become close friend of jalal and he shared many personal things to with him which he did not share even with his parents... Sudden jalal heard a chuckle which interrupted their talking session he turned and try to look toward to find out its owners... Sudden sumant happily screamed Jodha buaasaa and jalal looked toward that side where sumant was looking and this scene was enough opening his eyes widely and breaking his heart in many pieces...}
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