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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#801

Originally posted by: 1357raksha
Amazing update lakshmi akka. ...
But im totally confused on my thought of this update both jodha nd jalal r right at there places...
Jodha lost everything becoz of jalal 1 mistake...
Nd her words for him by this point of view is right...
But jalal was nt like other men wh use her and leave her to face problems but he was a men he went to accept his mistake nd ready to take up any punishment...
From this point of view v can say jodha did wrong by hiding salim from jalal... he has all d right to be angry on her but also he says I love jodha nd salim a lot...
I think jalal is ignoring jodha nw to show her he felt when he got to knw his son dont knw him... nd did nt knw at all about his son...
But loved jalal nd salim moment nd they r happy nw...
Nd jodha also realised it what she was doing...
What is this nw akka jalal angry is talking a turn nw his is taking salima away for jodha...
Im desperately waiting for next part akka...
Thanks for pm. ...

Thanks raksha for the wonderful review...

U are true both are correct in their places...

But unfortunately both are wrong at their places...

Jodha faced the worst because of Jalal...

Even Jalal life also become hell after that incident..

Guilty was eating him...

& he missed his son... It's not easy for him to do that...

Once may be Jodha should try to tell him about his son.,,

But even Jodha is also correct in her place,,

How can she believe him after that painful incident...

Destiny was Like that for them...

If they are mean to begether they will patch up...

Or else God will decide...

Always believe in faith...

Today it must be wrong but after few days it may be right...

Time heals everything...

We are just players God already decided our fate...

Thanks a lot for the lovely comment dear...

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#802

Originally posted by: divyadaya13
Nice update. Will not comment on jalals high handed behaviour. I am confused. He dosent want to be separated from boh jodha and his kid, so he is behaving like this. Pls update soon.

Thanks divya...

I will update soon buddy..

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#803

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh
OMG Ja is angry on Jo and taking Salim with him😲
What will Jo do now?
U love to jeep a suspense at the end, we r anxious to read next chappy...

Thanks rahi...

Sorry for that...but I want u people to stick this story...Hahahha

I will update soon buddy..

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#804

Originally posted by: heemasomani
I will be reading this story after my exams pls pm me whenever your update

Thanks dear...

But will u ply send me buddy request...

So that I can send u pm...

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#805

Originally posted by: avika444
Nice chapter bangaram
Jalal is angry on jo for hiding about salim's existence and i think he is right from his pov and jo is right from her pov.
whatever happened with jo after that she can never trust jalal again and im with her in this but jalal is also right yaar .
he has every right to know about his son though he doesnt deserve but then yes being his biological parent he has right on salim.
and i know whatever he said im sure he said out of frustration ,he doesnt really mean to separate jodha and salim .
hope everything gets fine soon
thanks for pm ra

Thanks Avi bangaram...

U are true Avi,...

Both are correct...

Both are wrong...

If we think according to Jodha she is correct...

But if we take about Jalal he is also correct...poor guy away from his love & his son...

At least Jodha have her son...

Jalal don't have anyone...alone for 3 years...😭

I will update soon bangaram...

Thanks for the lovely comment...

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#806

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Yes he should apologize rather than being angry on her😡😡
She could abort this child but she sacrificed her happiness and gave birth to her child.
May be he realized this in next chapter
Waiting dear😊
n love u 2..🤗
btw congrats for getting 40+ likes on last chapter😛

Thanks for that Payal...

But credit goes to Payal..

Because of u I got 40+ likes...

Biggg thanks to u...🤗

He will understand in next chapter...

Love u dear...❤️

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Anamika sharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#807

Awsome chaptr dear

thnks for pm

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jasmine87

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Posted: 9 years ago

#808

Very beautiful story..read all the updates in one go.

update soon the next chapter,pm me also.

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#809

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Thanks for that Payal...
But credit goes to Payal..
Because of u I got 40+ likes...
Biggg thanks to u...🤗
He will understand in next chapter...
Love u dear...❤️

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Don't say thanks but Update soon plz😆

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#810

Thanks to all for the lovely comments...

Payal thanks for promoting my story.. because of u I got 40+ likes.. special thanks payal...

Thanks avika for supporting me...

Thanks to all..

Love u all..

If anybody wants pm plz send buddy request ...

I will update tomorrow again...

CHAPTER 22:

Jodha pov

Oh god.. he is taking salim with him.. which I don't want.. jodha go with him.. nothing will happen.. I want my son.. I have to say that to him.. I have to talk with him.. runs to catch them..

End of pov.

Jalal pov:

Jalal sees her.. he know she will come.. I just wanted to show u the feeling of missing our loved ones... how can I leave u alone here Sonu?? I will never leave u... till 2 hours back I am ready to accept the future that ur marriage with someone..but now I won't & I can't accept ur marriage...I will make u realize what actually feels when we miss our loved ones...but if u really want to marry someone then me & my son will be go away from u...& I want to ask a lot of things to u.. y u hided salim from me..I will give answers to ur questions also Sonu.

End of pov.

Jodha gets in to the car..takes salim from jalal..sits in the front seat..

Jalal didn't said any word..

In the car salim slepts hugging jodha..

Again jodha tried to talk but jalal stopped her..

Soon they reached jalal home..

fastly Jalal unbuckeled his seat belt.. came to jodha side.. opens door & took salim in his hands..moves towards the house..

The same house where jodha lost everything..

Jodha stands in front of the door..

Jalal: looks at her staring & says ..I won't touch u.. if u want to me to touch also..I won't touch u..now get in.

Its like a command more than requesting..

Jodha silently enters..stands near the sofa & I want to talk w...

Jalal cuts her.. wait.. salim is sleeping.. I will make sleep him on the bed & come.. u can sit..

Jodha quietly sits on the sofa..

Jalal gently places salim on the bed..switch on the ac & covers with his blanket.. keeps pillow barriers for security...kisses him on the forehead..close the door & came out..

Jodha stands up looking jalal..

Jodha: do u have time now..? Can I talk???

Jalal: y u didn't inform me about my son???

Jodha: y should I tell to u??? Who told u its ur son..

Jalal: he is my son.. my blood.. how dare u.. u didn't inform me anything about him.. I too have equal rights on him.. u kept him away from me for damn 3 years..

Jodha: y should I tell to u..u ra**d me.. & now u are expecting me to say about my son..

Jalal: can't u forgot... I am accepting all...but u don't have rights to separate me from my son.. at least u should inform me.. can't u understand my love for u?? How many times I told u I LOVE U ani.. are u deaf or what?? I loved u sooo much.. open ur eyes see my love.. y u behave like this.. what's ur problem?? Y u hate me?? Y u don't want share ur life with me... give me one reason..I will never ask u to love me back..

Jodha: u ra**d me.. that's y I hate you...

Jalal: feels a stab on his heart while listening to jodha.. look jodha I did a mistake..which I can't rectify now.. I will accept whatever punishment u will give for me...this 3 years are hell for me.. I never forget u.. I purchased this house only for u.. this house has so many memories related to u..only just for u..I love u jodha.. plz.. accept me.. I will never do wrong again..believe me plz... can't u plz forget the past & move on.. y u are so stubborn??? Plz give me one chance to prove...

I am truly madly love u jodha.. can't u see in my eyes?? At least once try to see it.. I never forget u.. u are there with me everyday every moment...u are my life Sonu...give Me a chance...plz...

Jodha: I can't.. how can I..?? I hate u..

Jalal: then y u came again in my life?? Now I got to know about my son..& y u came to meet me.. y u show salim to me now?? at least I am happy with ur memories.. but y u came now..??

Jodha: my marriage fixed with abhi.. so I...

Jalal: cuts her before saying...& says.. good to hear that miss jodha.. go & marry ur abhi.. now I understood y u came to meet me..Thanks miss jodha.. u didn't left my son in streets.. Thanks a lot for not making my son as orphan.. Thanks a lot jodha.. now plz go & marry ur abhi & live happily... I have my son with me.. I am happy for that... & I can...

Jodha gave a tight slap to jalal..

How dare u say that..?? How can u think like this?? If I don't want him I may abort him but I didn't..see Mr jalal I came here to say no this marriage.. I met u because my mom wants to meet u once.. now I hate u completely totally...

Good bye jalal..I am taking my son with me..he is only one for me.. never come to my life again..Poor my mother thinking about my marriage with u.. here u are saying this words..I hate u jalal..I hate u..

Jalal gets tears with this grabs jodha & hugs her tightly...

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