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futus

@futus

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#811

Heyy dear, Read the first 4chapters of your story and liked it very much..will be reaading the remaining chapters after my exams...hope u understand 😳 Liked the concept very much as I have read a few comments.Thanks for giving this story And also want to thank payal dii for suggesting me to read this story 😛

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#812

That was a thrilling read 😲😆

I so loved this chapter dear👏👏

Both were so furious😆

He knew that jo will come for salim. Don't want to say anything regarding this.😒😡

Good she slapped him⭐️⭐️

but but but I was so eagerly waiting for this chapter and only one update today😭😭

That's ok😛

will wait.. Thanks for the pm dear😃

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#813

Awesome update sissy 😃

Aww so jalal still loves her 😃 but

his little angry on her for hiding his son from him

Aww How can you think like this jalal bhaiya 😡

Jodhu did right 😆 Aur maro thapad 😆 hehe

Ohoo he got tears in his eyes 😭

and he hugged jodha 😃

Umm i think jallu bhai apko salim le jane nhi dega didi 😊

continue soon

thanks for pm

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#814

u 😃

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#815

Fantastic chappy akka

Jalal's n Jo's feelings r true

But why can't she understands his love for her

Jo reaction on his statements is awesome

Update soon

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#816

Originally posted by: futus
Heyy dear, Read the first 4chapters of your story and liked it very much..will be reaading the remaining chapters after my exams...hope u understand 😳 Liked the concept very much as I have read a few comments.Thanks for giving this story And also want to thank payal dii for suggesting me to read this story 😛

😊

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#817

Is he playing with jo feelings. ...Wil they depart again. ..continue soon nd do pm

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swetiii

@swetiii

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#818

awsum
jalal got really angry
hehe

finally they talked
it hurted him so much when again & again jo saying that he ra**d her

ufff
jalal b na
phir garbad kar diya

hope she gets cool
& accept him

update asap di

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#819

I expected this slapping session in this update and I'm happy she did.
Don't know whom to support.. Jo is definitely not wrong and Jalal is still facing the consequences of past.
Loved Jalal's love and concern for his son.
Update next part today itself pls 😳

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divya joshi

@divyaJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#820

This is soo amazing update..
how can jalal say those words yaar..
jodha did ryt thing..slap..I also want to give him one..
but he love her truly..oh he hug her..wrong time p ending dii..
waiting for nxt chppy..

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