Akdha SS 'Promise' Part-7 on pg 86 - Page 54

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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update. U r making me cry with each flash back..continue soon nd do pm
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Hi guys so here is next chappi of my this story

Recap- Jodha:Don't u dare to say my jalal stupid

He is best and i am most lucky to have him;said while again throwing herself in his warm hug

Chapter-7
To lighten up the mood
Jalal:So now can we complete our romantic task;asked while making pattern on jodhas almost bare back Reading his intentions jodha immediately breaks the hug and give him a little push
Jodha:Jalal!!said while placing both hands on her hips
Jalal:What;replies making innocent face
Jodha:Thank U;said while kissing jalals lips lightly
with this jodha runs away from there leaving jalal behind touching his lips and smiling seeing her jo smiling brightly
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Jalal:Can i know come in;asked 15th time while knocking the door of their bed room
Jodha:Ya just five minutes; gives same reply
Jalal:U r saying this from last 45 minutes
U said u want to change alone here so i got ready in other room but still u r not ready

Jodha:Ya i know just five minutes pka;gives same reply again
Jalal:Plz Jo Its 8:30 already all must be waiting for me and ur bhai will surely put whole blame on me for being late;said with a pout
Jodha:I know baba i will manage bhai no need to pout;said while giggling and opening the door
The moment jodha opens door jalals breath stucked in his throat with mouth open seeing his jodha who was looking like apsra in golden maroon color saree and black color border with neck blouse whose back is surviving only with two strings with a little makeup touch on her cheeks and eye shadow and a little eye liner around her doe eyes,light cherry color lipgloss on lips matching her cheeks color ,long heavy earrings of golden color and lastly her beautiful manglsutra

Jodha:Say something jalal how iam looking
i am nervous;asked while adjusting her paluu again
On this jalal still remains statue while holding breath
Jodha:Plz say fast na we r getting late all must be waiting; asked while placing hand on his shoulder
only her touch that took him back to reality
Jalal:Lets forget about party and let just;without completing his sentence jalal pulls jodha towards himself and kiss her lips
This unexpected kiss shock jodha first but then she slowly start responding while placing her arms around his neck and pulling jalal towards herself more
both passionate kiss got disturb by unexpected voice
Atgah:Jalal jodha;called from downstairs
due to this both have to break the kiss but before leaving downstairs
Jalal:U r looking breath taking as u took my breath away
Hearing such beautiful compliment from her hubby cum besty jodha start Blushing
With this both heads towards downstairs
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At peninsula hotel
The moment new wedded couple entered lights went off and one single spot light falls on them with shower of Rose petals
Jodha:Wow
whats this
Jalal:A royal welcome for a Royal couple and most beautiful girl;replies with proud smile
Jodha:Oh really;said while blushing
With this both moves further in and lights went on
Abdul:So finally u both came;said while approaching towards jodha jalal with a heavy bouquet
Jalal:I think so
What u think ;said while taking Abdul in hug
Abdul:I also think so;while breaking the hug
Jalal:This bouquet for me;said while trying to hold bouquet
Abdul:Who said this is for u
this is not for late comers
this beautiful bouquet of red roses is for my beautiful lil sis
Jalal:Not fair buddy;said with fake disappointed look
Jodha:Thank u bhai and thank u for such a beautiful welcome;while holding bouquet
Abdul: Anything for my lil sis
Jodha:And bhai its me who made both of us late not jalal so plz;said with sad and guilty tone
Abdul:Hi little one i know we were just pulling each others leg like always so plz dont sad;while taking her in brotherly hug
Jalal:Yup jo u know na how we both like to tease each other
So dont sad as we both can't take it;said while joining the hug
Jodha:I am gonna faint;said in low voice
hearing this both jalal and Abdul breaks the hug
Jalal & Abdul: Why what happened
should i get u something or call doctor; said both all in one go
Seeing their panic faces and same words jodha start laughing
On which both gives her confused look
Jodha:U both r right u both cant change gets panic on small things i am completely alright
this time i was teasing u both; Saying jodha again start laughing and this time Abdul and jalal too joins her
Their laughing section receives a halt with other friends voices
Rukiyya:Seems like this three r enjoying with us;companied while moving towards trio
Surya:You have any doubt but its not new u see ruks as they always do that
forgets us;said while agreeing with rukiyya
Salima:Hi why u r teasing this trio especially jalal and jodha its there day and u can tease abdul as much as u can;says while jalal jodha protecting and winking towards Abdul
Abdul:If u guys r done with ur bak bak u can congratulate newly couple
Salima:That we will do Abdul if u will give some space;saying this she push Abdul a little and hugs both jalal jodha together
Salima:Hi congrs you both
Jalal & Jodha:Thanks salima;says while breaking the hug
Salima:Sorry I can't come to ur wedding due to such a short notice
Rukiyya:We should not apologize salima its they who married within two days and didn't wait for our arrival
surya:Yup and informed us a day before it and they know very well that we just can't come leaving our new jobs or business
Jodha at least u could wait for us
Hearing her friends complaint jodha felt guilty
Jodha:I am sorry guys its bcoZ of me jalal hurriedly arranged for marriage
i am sorry;said while lowering her face
Jalal:We married as we want to and i married so hurriedly as i don't want to loose jo
and Have u all through this party to talk about ur complains
If yes then me and jo should leave;said with full angry tone
Seeing jalals angry
Rukiyya:i am sorry jalal jodha we were just playing around
plZ forgive us;said with pleading eyes
Surya:sorry jalal jodha we go a little long
On this jodha puts her arm around jalal and signals him to forget it
Jalal:K;forgives with fake smile
Rukiyya:Congrs guys
May u have a beautiful life a head; said while hugging jalal and jodha individually
Jalal:Thanks ruks;with recovering smile
Jodha:Thank u ruks;said while giving her best smile
Surya:Congrs buddies;said while hugging both individually
Jalal & Jodha:Thanks surya;said together
With this all friends comes forward and greets and wishes Newly wedded couple
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Salima:As now everything has given their gifts and greetings Now its turn of our gangs special gift
Abdul:Yup it's from all of us
Rukiyya:Means me Abdul salima
Surya:And me
Jalal:Hi me also don't forget that; says while raising hand from his royal sofa while holding jodhas hand from other hand
Abdul:Ya ya u too have a little contribution in it
Happy now
Jalal:Super happy;said while showing him his signature smile
Rukiyya:Lights off
With lights off and projector plays which shows a scenario of jalal jodhas beautiful journey from school to CLG including marriage pics too
First pic jalal and jodha hugging a Teddy and kissing its cheeks
Jalal:U remember this pic;asked in low tone
Jodha:How can i forget it was our first gift for each other
Jalal:Which we bought with our pocket moneys;said while placing arm around her shoulder
Second pic jalal running after rabbit and jodha jumping while clapping her hands
Jodha:U remember this one
Jalal:How can i ever forget it as that rabbit made me run after him for one hour; said with faked sad face
Jodha:U were really looking cute in that pic more than rabbit
Jalal:U were looking cutest while jumping and laughing;said while caressing her cheeks on which jodha blushes and smile shyly
third pic jalal jodha standing outside class as punishment while passing smile to each other
Jalal:This punishment was best punishment
Jodha:Can punishment become best
Jalal:Ofcourse as u were company me as that day i forgot to do my homework and u
Jodha:And me too join u in that punishment by laying about my homework; said showing him her all white teeth
Jalal:U were crazy
Jodha:But not more than u but ya for u;said while winking towards jalal
Fourth pic jodha with full face covering with colors pouting looking away from jalal while jalal downing ups and downs
Jodha:For this one i am still angry with u
Jalal:R u
Jodha:Na;said while laughing a little
Jalal:Thank god i thought i again have to do ups and downs in front of all but that day was not my fault it was by mistake jo i want to put whole color on Abdul but u came up on wrong Time and i missed my original target; said while making puppy face
Jodha:I knew it that time to but want to tease u so play around u see; said while winking towards him
Jalal:Oh really wiffy i will see how u will play when we will in bed
Hearing this jodhas cheeks turns into crimson red

Fifth pic both jodha jalal diving in a lake together while showing tongue towards camera joining their other gang whi already in lake

Abdul:bcoz of u jalal that day we all go wet at home
Jalal:Pleasure all mine;while smirking towards others
Jodha:That picnic was really awsm and u were really bad as u pushed all one by one in lake
Jalal:Ya what to do guys that day was it was too hot so to refresh u all i did that to help u but here u all r still complaining
On this all just shake their heads and continue watching further

Sixth pic jalal jodha taking selfie while showing their red tongues and holding ice creams in hands
Jalal:U know that was best treat I ever got
ur first salary treat
Jodha:U asked only for ice cream and i want to do more as u always did more for me
Jalal:That was one of sweetest moment of my life so i want to celebrate it with more Sweetness;while kissing knuckles of her hand
Jodha:And that selfie was sweet and funny really;said while pointing towards screen
Seventh pic Jalal jodha all in a group pic in their graduation farewell
Rukiyya:That's one of my fav
Salima:My too
Surya:My three
Jalal:What about u Abdul
Abdul:U have doubt
Jalal:Na;saying this both do HiFi
while again diverting his attention towards jodha
Jalal:In that white saree u were looking like a fairy
Jodha:And u was looking Prince charming in that black suit with white shirt;said while adjusting his tie
With this PIC movie continue
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Done guys and this one is special dedicated to hemu as she asked for its update hundred times
love u hemu
hope u all like it
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Posted: 9 years ago

unres
beautiful chappy sherry
loved it
from start to end
pic movie is amazing
n relishing their memories
update soon sherry

thanks hemu to remind her that many times
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_P


unres
beautiful chappy sherry
loved it
from start to end
pic movie is amazing
n relishing their memories
update soon sherry

thanks hemu to remind her that many times


Thanks for the pm too
Edited by Kavya_P - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
I totally love it
waiting for next update
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice chapter cherry di.thanx fr pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely chapter dear
I loved it
Pics nd relishing their memories r simply superb
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh god.. Its marvellous chappy cutie pie...
I lovef it very much...
Heee Ja want to continue but jo run away...
5 min kar kar ke 45 min laga diya Jo ne.. My poor ja...
Ja is shocked to see jo ravishing body n het sharee...
Ja kiss passionately n did not want to go party..
But Atgah kabab main haddi..
Ja is hell angry with complains ...
Wow u beautifully described each n every pic..
Lag raha tha ki jaise main khud dekh rahi hu...
Alk r enjoying to see the pics...
Hatt off to u ...
Love u n muhh.
Thank for pm cutie pie
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ohhh so cute of you cherry
Love you more ❤️
Thanks for update
Edited by Rajat_loverr - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Love the story dear!!! Awh I'm so sad that Jodha had to die but still I love this different idea and want to see how Jalal learns to live with his babies and keeps his promise to Jodha! The flashbacks are just too cute, great job update soon and thanks for pm😃

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