Akdha SS 'Promise' Part-7 on pg 86

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So here is the OS guys

At Hospital
A man is shouting at doctor is none other than jalal khan
Jalal: how dare u doctor to hide such a big thing from me ,I am her husband and father of child's dammit
Doc: I am sorry but its ur wife's wish and plead also to not let u know about her pregnancy complications.When she came here to collect her reports regarding her positivity I told her clearly that she should not continue her pregnancy as her womb is not that powerful to conceive a child but later when we get know about twins there is no hope left but she remained on her decision.
Its totally her decision I told her to talk with u but she neither allowed me not herself if u want to meet her u can as there is still some time in operation and its really less chance u can meet her after operation as u know why

Hearing this the shattered man moved towards the VIP room where his wife kept and waiting for her delivery.
Jalal open the rooms gate only to meet his betrayed eyes with her guilty eyes and silently sit beside her on her bed
After few seconds of silence jodha finally speaks
Jodha: I am sorry jalal I
Jalal: sorry is not enough Jo ,sorry is not just enough
how could u take such a big decision urself regarding our life.
Jodha: Bcoz I PROMISE u this gift
Jalal:But u also PROMISE me that u will always be with me never leave me ; saying this his last string of control got break and the shattered man started crying and to calm and compose him the guilty lady took him in get warm embrace
Jodha: who said I am leaving u I will always there beside u in ur every heart beat
U have to remain strong for our kids
Jalal: But how will I live I am not that strong Jo
I can't breath In the air in which u will not breath with me
Jodha: But u will breath jalal for me ,for us ,for our kids and most importantly for our PROMISE.
Jalal: but Jo how will I survive I just can't don't give me such punishment Jo please let me come with u Please
Jodha: remember We promised each other that our kids will not live an orphans life like us they will have parents to pamper and protect them,now u have to fulfill that promise for me jalal and ya when u will reach home u will get ur reason to survive and that's a PROMISE.Can u give me another PROMISE
Hearing this jalal remain silent and indicate no through his gestures
Seeing this jodha chukled a little
Jodha: don't u dare to marry again otherwise
Hearing her threat jalal passed a faint smile
Jalal: otherwise what will u do
Jodha: I will come as ghost and
But before she could complete her threat jalal crushed his lips with her they kissed like there is no tomorrow but there is truly no tomorrow
Jalal: how could think that I will marry or even think about any other girl,but still I PROMISE u Jo
Hearing this the sad face lighten up a little
There last romance got disturbed by sudden appearance of nurse and Ward boy
********************
Both love births caste last glace to each other before Jo entered operation
After two hours of operation jalal could heard screams of his first and then second baby
Before jalal could ask something
Doc:congrs its a boy and a girl
Ur wife is waiting she don't have much time
Hearing this he immediately entered in only to see his wife's last breath and words who is waiting for him while carrying both their babies in her hands and kissing them all over their faces or should I say showering her motherly love for the first and last time
Seeing this jalals heart pricked how much he waited for this moment but only if that time he could know he will get it with so much pain
They both again exchange their unspoken PROMISE and hugged,their first and last family hug
Jo took her last breth in her jalals arms with her last words "I love U "

So done guys joota chappals and tomatoes r welcome
I have divided it in two or three shots
Do hit like and do let me know how's it and please do comment



Index
Part-1 Above
Part-2 on pg 30
Part-3 on pg 47
Part-4 on pg 54

Part-5 on pg 60
Chapter-6 on pg 79
Chapter-7 on pg 86
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