Akdha SS 'Promise' Part-7 on pg 86 - Page 35

Originally posted by: 155pari

lovely update buddy!

again a touching one...

ja reading her diary emotionally!

loved it!😊

thanks namu 😃 😳

Originally posted by: wanita

jodha slapped jalal...it must be hurt...but he was cured by jodhas answer yess for his proposal..thanx for update n pm sherry...update again soon..

Thanks tesa 😃

So here is next chappi
Recap- Jo's diary
'It was my best birthday baby finally we both confessed
our feelings to each other
U know baby my mama mami refused to ur ammi and
abbus relation but ur abbu stand their like a pillar for
me when they were accusing me and after a hot
conversation ur abbu declared that he will marry me
and he took me with him with a PROMISE that he will
always stand like a pillar for me
Jalal:How can I not Jo
I was and I always want to stand like a pillar for u
But its u who not letted me complete my PROMISE

Chapter-4

Diary continues
Jalal flip the next page and seeing the date a smile creep on his face as its their wedding date and also lovers day means Valentine day 14th February

Jo's diary
U know baby that day was double happiness for me as that day was ur abbus and ammis wedding day and also the first official Valentine's together but whole day we can't meet each other but we started our Valentine together by wishing each other

Reading this a big smile comes on jalals face
Jalal:Yes jodha that was most beautiful day of our life ;saying this he again drown in pasts memories
Flashback
Jodha lying on bed with hands covered of mehandi was smiling thinking about tomorrow but suddenly she felt some noise in her room
Jodha:Who is this?;saying this she get up from bed and start heading towards balcony from where the sound was coming but suddenly a strong grip hold her arm and pull her towards himself Jodha:Ah;cried but before she could scream more a hand stopped her from screaming
Jalal:Hi Jo its me
why r u screaming ;said while taking her in the light of moon
Seeing his face clearly jodha took sign of relief
After jalal remove his hand from her mouth
Jodha:Its u
u scared me
what r u doing here
Jalal:I am sorry to scare u jo
I am here to wish my best friend cum would be wife Valentine
Jodha:Oh
That's why u came then say and go
Jalal:What say and go
I will not get anything like kiss something
Jodha:No u wont as i am really tired and not in mood of giving u anything; said while moving towards bed but jalal again hold her
Jalal:K if u won't give
I will take
Jodha:Jalal U na tomorrow is the most important day of our life
plzleave na ;said while realising from his grip
Jalal:What if I won't leave ;said while taking a step towards her
Jodha:Then I will shout;said while taking a step behind
Jalal:Try it but nobody will come ;said while taking another step forward
With this jalals steps continued forward and jodhas backward until her back hitted the wall and with this jalal placed her both arm between the wall like a cage
Jodha:Pl..z jal..al le.t me go ;said with shaky voice
Jalal:No I won't ;said with a smirk and start decreasing the distance
Jodha:Don't come near me
Otherwise my mehandi will get spoiled;said with a pleading look
Hearing this jalal realized that jodhas hands r full of mehandi
Jalal:Oh ya I forgot about it completely
Let me see ;said while taking her soft hands in his
Jodha:How's it
Jalal:Beautiful just like my Jo
U must wrote my name in it
Right?
Jodha:Ya I told the designer to hide ur name in it
Jalal:So let me find out;saying this he was about to start searching but jodha immediately withdraws her hand
Jalal:What happen
why u suddenly pull ur hands
Jodha:Bcoz u can't find ur name now ;said with shy
Jalal:And why;asked with confused look
Jodha:Bcoz that mehandi designer said u have to find out ur name on our wedding n..;said but stopped in her tracks out of shyness
Taking the hint
Jalal:I don't understand Jo
on our wedding n..? means ;asked with a smirk
Seeing his smirk jodha immediately hides herself in his broad chest
Jalal:I am waiting for ur answer;said while touchng her chin and turning her face up
Jodha:U always enjoy teasing me
I won't talk with u ;said with a pout
Jalal:Plz don't that Jo
otherwise
Jodha:Otherwise what ha;asked while giving what can u do look
Jalal:I will kiss u;said with a naughty smile
Before jodha could say something the clock stuck 12:00
Seeing this
Jalal &Jodha :Happy Valentine Day ;said together while hugging each other tightly and of course with a passionate kiss
Flashback ends
Jalal:I still remember even u refuse to kiss but ends up giving in ;thought with a chuckle

Jo's diary
U know baby your ammi abbu was really something that night we got so lost in each others talk that we slept late and waked up late next morning dye to which our haldi ceremony got late too but alas everything went on smoothly and finally our wedding time came
Reading this an emotional smile appears on jalals lips

Flashback
Jalal and all were waiting for bride a suddenly all hears sound of Payals chum chum and all start glacing towards stairs and here comes the most beautiful bride in red and orange heavy lehenga with matching jewellery and perfect make up
Seeing jodha jalals heart skipped a beat and only a word escape from his mouth
Jalal:Mashallah;saying this he keep staring jodha
Abdul:u can close ur mouth jalal stop drooling upon my sister she is only urs don't worry;said while closing his mouth
Hearing this all starts laughing making jalal embarrassed more
Jalal held jodhas hand firmly when she reached the last step
A long tear escaped from her beautiful eyes and fall on his hand only then he realized that jodhas EYES r filled with tears
He immediately cups her face lovingly
Jalal:What happen Jo
why r u crying
Jodha:Seeing ur love for me
Jalal:Means;asked with confused look
Jodha:Why u brought my moms wedding lehenga for me
why
Jalal:Bcoz i PROMISED u that i will always keep u happy
besides we need ur mom and dads blessings too
now plz don't ask me how i brought it from ur mama mami
I can do anything for ur happiness
Hearing this jodha gave him an understanding look
Abdul:If u don't mind guys can we move to mandap to start wedding as panditji is waiting for u
With this both headed towards mandap and wedding rituals begins firstly Abdul did kanyadan of jodha
Abdul:Take care of my sis;said with a fake threatening tone
Jalal:I PROMISE
after this jodha and jalal took vows along with seven pheras then jalal tied manglastura around her neck and at last filled her mang with vermilion
With this both completed marriage in Indian way
Now both moved towards their respective rooms to change in Muslim attire
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Like before jalal again got mermireized by the beauty that was standing in front of him in that green muslim wedding lehenga but along with happiness there was a confused look on his face
Jalal:Why u wore ammis wedding attire
plz dont tell me u do that bcoz i brought ur moms
But jodha stops him saying further by placing her finger on his lips
Jodha:I did it bcoz I too PROMISED to give u all happiness
Besides we need ammi abbus blessings too na;said with an asuuring look
jalal:But how did u get it
Jodha:with atgah uncles help;saying this she gave atgah a thanking look
Jalal: thank u uncle

Atgah:No need
Now let's go to complete ur second wedding;said with teasing look
On this both jodha and jalal sits on their respective places behind curtains and completes their muslim wedding with saying Qubool hai and with an unspoken PROMISE of always being together
Flashback ends
Jalal:why Jo why we PROMISE we will Always together but see here I am all alone ;saying this he continued reading

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Thaks for pm and update Sherry.

Cute update dear I always enjoy read it but end up to sad becom I knw jodha is no more ...

Superb update for perfect valenties

Happy Valentine Day
awesome update...
Jalal very naughty.
Mami and Ami weeding clothes...so beautiful..
sweet happy memories...
but Jodha no more...so sad...

a very cute part sherry

trully amazing one...
loved it...
thnks 4 d pm..

Nice Update ,but a bit sad😭

Thnx for the PM