Akdha SS 'Promise' Part-7 on pg 86 - Page 22

Originally posted by: pinamanenikavya

Sacch mein sad os hey

Update soon

I know yr
I will update soon

Originally posted by: melovesja

Very touchy writing. Revelation of their past wasso emotional .

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thanks dear for liking it

Originally posted by: Kit_Kat

Such a sweet emotional update
Joja meet was so sweet and cute
Nice part

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Originally posted by: deepa_chauhan

Heart touching update..
So emotionl ..
Diary part was well written..bt so heart wrenching yet heart touching.. 😭
Fantastic work sherry...

thanks deepu
ya ddiary part is mine fav
😊

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

😭😭😭

Why Jodha why????🥺

Why u left the man midway in the journey of life who was by your side since childhood???😡😭😭

How will he manage everything? With whom will he stay in his entire life?😭

It's heart wrenching to read the diary and the flashbacks...😭you wrote it so well!👏

Don't make Jodha to return by any chance (by converting this sequence into dream.) The essence will be lost.😒

[One correction if you don't mind.🤓 Correct the spelling of diary.😛I think u have made a silly mistake.😳(don't mind please...😕)

Update soon...

thanks for liking it stuti
don't a worry I won't make Jo's death as dream
and sorry for mistake its keyboards mistake and also hadn't rechecked itit
I will update soon

Originally posted by: sho123

thanks for liking it stuti
don't a worry I won't make Jo's death as dream
and sorry for mistake its keyboards mistake and also hadn't rechecked itit
I will update soon

and i wont mind at all thanks for telling me my mistake

Originally posted by: kajalparijat

Beautiful update sherry
each n every word said by jalal reflected his pain :(
his jo left him alone to handle everything 😭
the diary part was damn emotional ...
Their first meeting, growing friendship, realisation of love...
But she broke her promise 😭
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continue soon

thanks kaju for liking it
ya I know its damn emotional and she do break her promise
but it has to happen
I will continue soon

Originally posted by: Geetanjali1993

Very emotional update.
beautifully depicted the emotional state if ja.
continue soon nd thanx for pm.

thanks geetanjali for liking itit
I will continue soon 😛

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam

The flashback was nice- both Jo n Ja emotional. A sad story😔

But you killed Jo😭

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thanks for liking it dear and killing Jo was demand of my story

Originally posted by: KanJmaskis

Very emotional one sherry

Soo much pain he is suffering nicely described it

thanks kanchan for liking it 😛