Akdha ff **//Ek Vivaah Aisa Bhi//** TH 5 (uptd chap 22 part 1,2)pg113 - Page 98

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Hello dearie 🤗 hello payu 🤗 phew finally i reached ur comments 😉

Oh god payu ur commenting from chap 10

Itna stress ??

Chapter 10

Lovely chapter avika❤️ thank u dear 😊

I am glad that maham's out😆 and u wrote singh family's restlessness and excitement very well and how much they missed jo😊 lol dont be hapoy dear she will come back soon 😆

so girl was excited to go at her home whilst her husband was restless😆 Liked it😉 u really liked it 😉😆

Their eyes talk

I really loved it❤️❤️ they know each other so well that every part of their bodies is capable of speaking unsaid words 😉😆 i know bahut zyada ho gaya 😆

Yep the pain was different. That time friends were parting but now a couple was parting for.. ummm.. 5-6 hrs??😆looonnnggg hours right 😉😆

Liked maina's enquiry mode😆 It's very natural. we all did the same and u penned it really well dear⭐️

Glad u here this from one of the best writers 😳😳

Abdul's character was nice and and and here comes hoshiyar.do dont like hoshiyaar or what 😆

I was laughing at 1 avika.. I just loved that office scene. I was amazed to read that because I didn't expect comic content in this story🤣 life gets too boring without comedy right and same goes with ffs ,so here i am showcasing my comedy skills 😆

well done girl👏👏

Thanks dear

So jo was angry on jalal.. Something something was going on😛😛

Haina??😆 who know it was something something or everything 😉😆

Originally posted by: ajuswa19pm

di it was so

beautiful

loving it 😳

Originally posted by: AnnSoosan

Awesome di👏

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: taaniroyal

reswa

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Chapter 11

I just loved this rasam avi❤️

U loved this rasam payu and what about our jajo haan?? 😆

It was an interesting read😉

😉😉

He understood that she's angry and knew that she had added something in his food still he had it😛

Ofcourse he know her very well payu

Aww ur jalal is so sweet. I can't take this much sweetness😆

I know payal he is too sweet to take 😆 diabetes ka khatra hai 😆🤣

Anyways finally both patched up and they cleared everything about baby too that jalal was happy with her and their child😊

Everything is soughted out 😉

Lovely chapter it was⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Chapter 12

Nice chapter😊

Thanks payu 😊

Car scene was nice and office scene where jalal was scared of hoshiyar was so hilarious😆😆

Glad u liked the office part dear ,hoshu is scaring the hell out of jalal 😆

aww that canteen part,bf-gf thing. It's so amusing and lovely avika❤️❤️

Rahim and his girlfriend 😆 kids these days r too fast right 😉😆

Salima glared at his son that he's addressing her as his gf🤣

Hehehe payu imagine a five year kid introducing his girlfriend to his mother 😲 this will be my reaction 😆

our Jo-ja too used to address each other like that😆

Finally that hospital part😛😛

Couple was embarassed to hear physical relationship word from doctor😆

Ab doctor ko kya pata what kind of strange relationship they share 😆

Now I am asking u avi. is it possible btw them??

If No then I won't read next chapters 😆

Why should i answer ?? U say is it possible between them 😉😆

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

Amazing update avika akka I enjoyed reading it... rakshu 🤗 thank u dear ,glad u enjoyed the update 😛

I was in other world reading this update. ... akdhas world right 😉

Jodha jalal have amazing moment between them...

Nd there self talk was so cute. ... happy that u liked this part dear

Jalal learnt to make only jodha's favourite food... so sweet...

One item is more than enough for him rakshu otherwise jodha will make a good use of his cooking skills 😆

They had a lovely night nd beautiful moment between them...

Romance under the sky 😉

Jalal finally though he will confess to jodha... all d best for that jalal... oh yes he badly needs it now 😆

Nd d office nd hospital part was wow jalal care so much for jodha...he is always a caring person rakshu 😳

Nw jodha also accept his baby with ful heart... nd started with d fight for baby... all things r soughted now 😊

Waiting for next update akka...

Update soon. ...

Nd thanks for pm. ...

Originally posted by: 155pari

Amazing update avika dii!!!

jo so much in love with ja..

their fights are way too cute!

ja always admiring jo...😃

jo again at ja's office...

their baby's heartbeats...

jo got emotional...

lovely!!

update soon!

thanx for the pm...😃

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Chapter 13-part 1 and part 2

Nice chapters.

Loved their kiss❤️😆

that wasnt a full fledged kiss payu but still im happy u liked it dear 😳

and the song too😊

I was thinking from a long time to use this song but it will take time so never mind u used it before me😆😆

Ur saying as if i have the copyright of that song payu 😆😆

So we came to know the reason of maham's hatred for hindus😒 poor her haina 😔

I liked mirza taking side of jo and shouting on maham😆 i guess almost all liked this part

Ohk so one more love story is on the way. Loved jalal's dialogue maham will get a minor attack when she came to know that her son is falling for a hindu girl🤣

Hhehe payu maham will deffo get a heart attack if she doesnt change her attitude by that time

I am enjoying this story😊

Well done avi⭐️⭐️