Akdha ff **//Ek Vivaah Aisa Bhi//** TH 5 (uptd chap 22 part 1,2)pg113 - Page 99

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Amazing chapter Avika😃

Originally posted by: SUSHlovesJOJA

Eagerly waiting for next chapter akka... I have no words to describe this amazing chapter... very enjoyable chapter...😊

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Chapter 14

awesome chappy avi👏👏

Thank u so much payu 😳

I loved jalal's gesture, "Ok now I can sleep peacefully after knowing that you are ok"😊

How sweet ur jalal is❤️

I am afraid of diabetes😆😆

Hehehe payu i already warned u dear 😆

Enjoyed mirza and sukany's nok-jok😉

But The best part was hosh scenes at a venue🤣

Hosh 🤣 im glad u liked his part dear

very well written ⭐️⭐️⭐️

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Chapter 15( part 1 and part2 )

Loved their journey and mirza's antics too😆

Thanks payu 😉

Jalal can't take his eyes off jo

Hmm side effects of love 😉

So hosh can't live without mirza now so he took the entire team at hotel😆😆

Lol payu hoshiyaar realky irked mirza to the core

Poor boy his all plans were flopped 😆

I am loving his scenes avi😆😆

Hehe payu i tried my best to make his scenes funny and im glad everyone liked it 😳

Rahim scene was nice and I so loved the flashback. She realized he fulfilled his promise❤️

Flashback scene oh yess even i liked that part ,i added that one in the last minute 😉

That caught u sir was 🤣🤣

Hosh again 😆

Sukanya knows how to take revenge😆😆

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Chapter 16(Part1)

My heart skipped a beat but thank god jo was fine but after that jalal's outburst.

I love this angry jalal❤️

Why to worry when im there payu 😉😆 hehehe the accident part was a sort of shock treatment for jalal to realise his feelings for jo 😉

The part where jalal realized his actual feelings for jo was very well written avi👏👏👏

Aww thanks payu ,i was very scared when i posted that chapter but after seeing the huge response i was like 😲my reaction 😆

I loved each dialogue and the way u made him realise his love for her⭐️⭐️⭐️

Im so glad u liked it dear

Flashback Part was lovely and when jalal came back and saw tears in her eyes aww❤️❤️

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Last scene was so so cute. He confessed in front of her Princess. I was thinking may be jo was listening to his talks too but didn't pretend😆

Princess and her papa's secret payu .. how can i let it go out 😉😆

I enjoyed this chapter avi😃

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Chapter 16 (Part 2)

I loved the title avika😆

Lol i forgot what was the title payu but since u liked it i asume accha hi hoga 😳

So half mission is accompalished and finally with the help of ice cream jalal was succeeded in manofying his angry wife😉

She is so easy to get manofied haina 😆

umm.. again saree but this tym I loved their embarassing moment😆😆

Jalal is always there with a saree ,poor girl kare bhi toh kya kare 😆

Rahim dancing with jo and jalal was feeling jealous.. aww Poor husband😆❤️

Jealous jalal that too for rahim 😆 this is the most craziest part i think 😆

Finally he got the chance to dance with her. Loved their dance and song avi but but but...

Again this is my fav song and I planned to use this in coming chapters but u used it before😆

Hehehe again i stoled ur song haan 😆

Btw I am loving this story😉❤️

Really ?? Thanks yaara 🤗

Originally posted by: meeramiss18

Akka such an amazing lovely update

vry cutely expressed jo's feelings

their cute gestures lil fights were fun to read

jus loved it akka

thnks fr the pm

I'm eagerly waiting for the confession part

plz update soon akka

love u

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Hey Mauli... 🤗 jahnu 🤗 happy tears pooled in my eyes seeing u here jahnu 😊😳
Did I ever tell you how I sneak read your story the moment I see your PM? I didn't right!! But yeah I do.. I read like and run away without commenting.

Hehehe u never told me this secret of urs jahnu 😆 but thanks dear ,i know ur very busy but still u manage to read and hit like on every update .

For, I fear people hound me for my laziness to update.

Do we have any other choice other than hounding ?? 😡😡

Your Jodha, Jalal, Mirza, Shivani, Mr.& Mrs Maina, Mr & Mrs. Hamida, Abdul, Salima, including Hosh are such a sweet characters.

Sweet characters 😆 be alert of diabetes jahnu 😉😆

. The story is refreshing, your narration takes it to a next level. I like the sweetness you weave into every scene.

I cant beleive my eyes jahnu ,i mean mallika e writer is saying this ?

Wow

Jalal is definitely the most wanted husband for any woman!!

Haan he is the best but not more than pbd and njapa jalal 😉

Accepting Jodha along with her setbacks depicts how much he loved her. Actions speak better than words and Jalal is a man of action.

@green well said bangaram 😳

I empathize with Jodha. She's a darling, she deserves her share of love. And Jalal has more than needed to offer.

Every girl deserves her share of love jahnu and i will be happy if any man resembles our fan fiction jalal's . Which is close to impossible

Waiting for the lovely couple to speak their hearts out!! I appreciate your regular updates. Something message for me to take back home... 😉😆
Dont say that bangaram !!u do update whenever u get time right and beleive me they r worth waiting
Hearty congratulations on the success of your story!! Please keep writing!!

Thank u so much jahnu ,will try my best to improve myself ra 😳

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Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

Hii dii 🤗 !! Uff ! Kitne time k baad mai yahaa pdhaari hu !

Hi chota packet 🤗 hmm woh toh hai tum bahut dino baad aayi ho 😕

Okk sabse pehle too veryyy sorry ..kaan pakad k bade waala sorry !! Hehe no need to say sorry dear

I know u r busy right now 1

Ab mu j ye too yaad nahi k maine konse chapter se res kr rakha h too iss liye m starting from the latest chapter , i hope u don't mind ! Off course , you don't haina 😉 🤣

ashu 🤣 its ok dear ,i wont mind 😉

Okk now cming to the chapter !! 😳

Ye sab kya ho ra h mere piche se ?? Story itni aage bd gayi 😲 kissing n all 😉 off course i meant by the cheeks dii 🤣 ! Hehehe ashu i was shocked at first !!i thought maine kab kisses de diya ?? 😆 then yaad aaya cheek kiss 😉😉

The chapter was soo mesmerizing .

Thanks ashu 😳

Joja together in the balcony haaye !

Chandni raat mein ye sb kya chalu h 😉😆 ! Dii...all the while I was like !!

Hmm chandi raat mein romance chal raha hai ashu 😉😉

Jo aaj kl lgta h kuch zyaada hi carrots khane lg gayi h 😆 tbi to cheeks hamesha red rehti h 😉 ! Yeh carrots ka nahi jalal ka asar hai ashu 😉😆

Orr ye jalal ...ye to h hi padaiyishi besharam ...but cute waala besharam 😳 ! Hehehe besharm log cute bhi hote hai abhi pata chala ashu 😆

O my god ...he cooked her fav. Dish for her ! Now wt could b more surprising than this 😳 !

Ek na ek din toh hona hi tha ashu ,use jo ka chef toh banna hi tha ,aaj muhurat nikal gaya 😆

"Pyaar hua ,

Ikraar hua h Pyaar se fir kyu darta h dil,

Kehta h dil rasta mushkil maaloom nahi h kahaa manzil "

One of my fav song ashu 😉

Pyaar to ho gya , bss ikraar baaki h , fir b dil darta h ikraar karne se , rasta mushkil lagta h k kahi pyaar paane k raaste mein dosti naa toot jaaye !😡 😳

@pink sahi kaha ashu 😳😉

Dii that song haayee !!

Finally ...finally budhu ko samaj aa gayi ...yaayy finally he is gonna confess...

He cant hold it more ashu 😆

M just soo damn excited dii !

N tht hospital scene ...

Soo touching , the way u expressed Jo's feelings , jalal's excitement , his love for his princess ...touched me to the core of my heart ! Im glad u liked the hospital part ashu 😳

I really don't know wt should i say about him , he is such a gem!

He is indeed a gem who could be find only is fan fiction world 😆

Just love him !!

Jalal , sleeping like an innocent baby ! I can imagine !

let me do it for u ashu imagine kar liya !!

Cute lag raha hai ashu 😉😆

N now m lost in his innocence !

Please please update doo naa !

Wait ni ho ra confession k liye !!

Just sooo excited!

Thanks fr the pm !

Itni excitment ashu 😆 will try and update soon dear

Will try to unress the previous chaptrs soon dii !

Originally posted by: futus

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