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Originally posted by: avika444

Oh my god ...what is this ? I mean i thought Jalal seroisly loved Jodha ...but what a monster he is ...he destroyed an innocent girls life ...@Red ...where u said ,its real story ...i really feel bad for the girl...poor thing had to go through so much at a mere age of 14 ...distusting man 🤢

Coming to chap now ...

I liked the beginning ...Bharmal and Jodha's convo ...where bharmal says all the sweet words yo his daughter and this Maham ...🤬 she doesnt want Jodha to marry Jalal ,instead she wants to hook her nephew woth Jodha ...wait a minute ...Maham knows about Jalal and his plan?? Does that mean Maham ,vasu ,Amber and Jalal all r ploying against Jodha ??? But why ??

And here comes the disgusting part ...never in my dreams thought Jalal could do something like this ...Even Amber was helping him ...shame on this girl...Jalal destroyed Jodha's life...now she will never be able to trust on any man .

Continue soon dear

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: swetiii

what the
did that really happen
Jalal raped Jodha
chiii
poor Jodha
she loved that devil
such a disgusting person
it was all planned
Jalal amber & vasu
disgusting bas***ds
update asap soru
waiting...

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

Ohh my 😲 what the hell was that??
How can jalal commit such a brutal sin??
It was all planned 😲
GOSH!! I hate him like anything 😡
Bloody b****** i wish he rots in hell 😡
thanks for pm
Aur yar kyu tu hamesha jodha ko suffer karvati h? Women are not born to bear PAIN and DISGUST.

Originally posted by: Annasabu

Awesome

Originally posted by: lolo91

hi soru baby sorry for reading your update that late i dont have an excuse for it but i know u will understand and now am sure i cant wait for next

this was my reaction reading your chapter😲

jalal raped jodha like an animal and that multi times😭 means he killed her 😭 that is the worst sin can a boy do 😭

i am so worried about jodha now ..i wish i can take her in my arms and cry 😭 you opened a painful subject and i am so proud of you ..i really do 👏

i just can imagine our jalal an animal 😡 but we will see how the story goes 😊

please soru update next part soon and dont discontinue it 😡

i am really sad about that its true story and unfortunatly rape is every where and in every country and even children suffer from it

its stories of milion of girls who dies every day a breath enter there lungs😭

hating there bodies that still feels the claws of that animal

and blaming them selves on there own pain😭

then the community looking at them as if they are the criminals

like blaming a pray and leaving the hunter

thanks for pm soru

Originally posted by: swetiii

are u going to update spru 😃

Originally posted by: melovesja

It was shocking and too painful but you done it well and touched the most ugly face of society were girls got most hurting and painful shock from their loved once.

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Originally posted by: duhasaad

I'm out of words

you are writing a very real life story

tears took over my eyes when I read the last chapter 😭

the problem that most of the girls are facing now is written in a very touched way 👏

you are adorable buddy 👍🏼

you can touch anybody heart with your words

I can say that your story need to be worldly story

I seriously raise my hands up and clap so hard for your writing 👏👏

love you love the way you write and love your feelings ❤️

Originally posted by: divyaJA

suprb update