AKDHA TS-JHEEL SI ANKHEIN-PART 2 UPDATED PG-16 - Page 16

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Awesome part Harshu😃

Originally posted by: melovesja

Awesomely knitted the story well written fair hustle bustle and both falling for each other at first sight PHELY NAJAR ME PHELA PYAR HO GAYA... Jalal's proposal and wholeheartedly acceptations You come up with cute ideas and hold us with your writing and at the end you always surprise us with as it is a dream or now its a fb . they are married but we can't get clue and curious to know about next that's the best part of your writing.

Originally posted by: 1357raksha

wow harshu akka superb update...
so d twist was jodha jalal where married nd he was painting jodha face... there meeting nd marriage everything was so cute... nd thanks for d pm akka...
nd really sorry for late reply. ...
plz write some more plz...

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

wow , such a lovely tale...😳

plzz keep on writing like this...😃

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Totally fabulousBeautiful imagination harshu👏enjoyed reading it😃

WOW!! Their first meeting ❤️!! At village's out side temple the greenery the surroundings... the atmosphere of fair ... beautifully explained ...falling of lotus from palki ... Jalal keeping it at his chest😳she too wants to see him again😳their yearning to see each other was..lovely .. Jalal painted their first meeting ..Jodha closing Jalal's eyes wow dear beautiful imagination😳. beautiful flash back ..❤️He proposed ... her father agreed nd They got married.. no one opposed ...smooth flow of story..keep writing more ... looking forward to read more of this story harshu🤗

Originally posted by: harshu27

thnx manasi... 😳 ya will write for sure... 😉