AKDHA TS-JHEEL SI ANKHEIN-PART 2 UPDATED PG-16

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Hiii frnds... m bk wid my thread to bore u all... na na not retro thread bt dis time m xperimenting on 2 SHORTS or may b 3 SHORTS depending on d flow of ideas but it would b 2 short so here it is...d title credit goes to geetu... thnx geetu for giving a wonderful title and also for proof reading... .hope u ppl will like it.. 😉








JHEEL SI ANKHEIN

It was early morning d sun rays were slowly trying to enter in a beautiful garden which had a small beautiful pond with cold breeze blowing carrying along with them d perfume of beautiful and fragrant roses and at d same time small water lilies were dancing to d beats of d cold breeze in d pond transforming to some fantasy land...

A young handsome looking man was njoying all this beautiful view from his balcony d breeze was ruffling his brown hair making it fall on his chiseled face enhancing his dashing look making him all d way more desirable...he was none other than d emperor of mughal sultanate shenshah Jalalludin Mohammad...he was njoying his early morning view from his balcony when d dancing lilies in his pond caught his attention and a smile adorned his lips making him remember someone...

Yeah someone that someone who had managed to enter his so called missing little heart and showed him its xistence...just by her thoughts his whole body had some electrifying sensations urging him to meet her now right now at that v moment but how but he knew d solution of d question and hence he rushed to his drawing room where he in his free time used to spend his time there with his paintings which was one of his fav hobby...

His emotions just started flowing into his brush and started painting her large beautiful doe shaped eyes which could xpress millions of emotions in one go...those brown eyes which were haunting him in his dreams ...giving him sleepless nights...

Those were d same eyes which he had got glimpse of and made him fall head over heels for her...which made him wonder if d eyes could attract anyone like a honey bee's attraction for d fragrant flowers then what effects would d owner have on him...

SO HERE M WID MY 1ST PART I KNW ITS SHORT ONE...BUT WILL GIVE NXT UPDATE A LONG ONE PROVIDED I GET MAIZIMUM LIKES AND COMMENTS...OTHERWISE I WILL STOP HERE ONLY WILL DROP D IDEA OF CONTINUING IT...SO FRNDS..U PPL HAVE TO DECIDE WHETHER I SHOULD CONTINUE OR NOT... 😆 😉 AND SILENT READERS PLZ DO HIT LIKES AND COMMENT ON IT... 😉

frnds banner credit goes to shagun... 😉 thnx dear fr a lovely banner... 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Harshu diii ..😆 Awesome start ...but too short ... Seems like jalal didnt met with jodha yet ... Continue soon 😃
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Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

Harshu diii ..😆Awesome start ...but too short ... Seems like jalal didnt met with jodha yet ... Continue soon😃


thnx priyanka...I knw its short whch I kept on purpose 😆 😉 u will have to wait whether he ahs met her or not...?its suspense... 😆 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshu27


thnx priyanka...I knw its short whch I kept on purpose 😆 😉 u will have to wait whether he ahs met her or not...?its suspense... 😆 😉

ya ya .. Ajkal suspense m hi chod rhe h story ...😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res😉
Unres😊

Congrats Harshu🥳 for second step... OS to TS 😳
Our full time chemist turned to Writer
Beautiful start dear... I really liked the way u described the morning with Jalal's features.
He had fallen for the jheel Si Ankhein😉 now wants to see her whole beauty... If eyes has the power to make him fall head over heels...what if he sees her full picture😆
Continue soon dear... Even u didn't let me know the next part... Curious to read further. It's my pleasure dear to help u...😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

ya ya .. Ajkal suspense m hi chod rhe h story ...😕


😆 suspense me toh hi maza hai... 😉 let me get good response so dat I cn continue... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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waiting... 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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osam update and also nice title
update next part asap
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Originally posted by: harshu27


waiting... 😉


Will try to come in after noon or else in evening😊
Have class now then lab😕
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Originally posted by: smartex

osam update and also nice title
update next part asap


thnx a lot...will update soon... 😃

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