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Posted: 9 years ago
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*% TU JAANE NA %*

He just watched her retreating figure from a distance... He don't want to drag her to hell, just for a simple mistakes of her... That is she falls in 'LOVE' with him... He just can't destroy her life for being his, he can't be so selfish to make her away from her happiness...

Kaise bataayein
Kyun tujhko chahe
Yaara bataa na paaye

He anyhow maintained a straight face in front of her... But soon she steped out of the gate, he fall down on his knees broken badly... He so wanted to tell her that how much she matters to him... How much he loves her... But alas he can't...
He goes towards his room and watched himself in the mirror... He smiles while crystal clear liquid flowing down his cheeks...
He remembers her saying
"Jalal... Your eyes speaks... When you yourself fails to express..." she has said when he was worried about informing her his inconvenience to their relationship...


Baatein dilon ki dekho jo baaki
Aake tujhe samjaayein
Tu jaane na aa.. Tu jaane na..
Tu jaane na aa.. Tu jaane na..

He came to kitchen, It's the place where they had shared their first kiss... He don't know how he has lost his control and he is glad that he has lost... Else he would have been the world's biggest fool... He remembers how red her cheeks has gone after that... How they had seen dreams for their future... But today he himself shattered it by his own hands...


Milke bhi hum na mile.. Tum se na jaane kyun
Meelon ke hai faasle.. Tum se na jaane kyun
Anjaane hai silsiley.. Tum se na jaane kyun
Sapne hai, palkon tale.. Tum se na jaane kyun


He admires their life size photo, that was hanging on the wall of hall magnificently... Its their wedding photograph... He is caressing her smiling innocent face..

Kaise bataayein
Kyun tujhko chahe
Yaara bataa na paaye aa.. Aa.. Aa..
Baatein dilon ki dekho jo baaki
Aake tujhe samjaayein
Tu jaane na aa.. Tu jaane na..
Tu jaane na aa.. Tu jaane na..


Today he has realized his love for her... He is on cloud nine today... He is buying flowers for her, her favorite roses... And came out of shop...
"You are so beautiful... But she is more than you... And she is mine..." He proudly mocked the flowers... With an impish grin he sat inside his car...


He ignited the engine, today he can't wait to confess his love for his lady love... The buzz of his mobile caught his attention... He without looking at the caller picked it up...
His world came crashing down after hearing the other end... He came to know that he is suffering from the fatal disease called 'cancer'... He thrashed that roses in garbage bin and rod off to house with a heavy heart...


Oo ooo...
Aaa aa..
Nigahon mein dekho, meri jo hai bas gaya
Woh hai milta tumse hubahu
After that day he had left no stone unturned in distancing himself from her... He doesn't want to hurt her... But knowingly he has hurt her to no extent... Though it has pained him more than her but he is adamant to make her away from him...


O oo..
Jaane teri aankhein thi ya, baatein thi wajah
Hue tum jo dil ki aarzoo
Tum paas ho ke bhi, tum aas ho ke bhi
Ehsaas ho ke bhi, apne nahi
Aise hain humko gile.. Tumse na jaane kyun
Meelon ke hain faasle.. Tum se na jaane kyun
Tu jaane na aa.. Tu jaane na..
Tu jaane na aa.. Tu jaane na..


He reminisce that day when he had taken her on a romantic date but their oh-so-lovely-neighbours... Mr and Mrs Sharma has eaten their brains, till he doesn't made an excuse to come out... Then he tried to propose her in the car... But to his bad luck she became so tired that she slept... And he was in no mood to disturb the sleeping beauty...
Then he planned to propose on her birthday, but that unfortunate news came before it...


Hoo..oo jaane na, jaane na, jaane na..
Aaa aa aa.. Tu jaane na
Khayalon mein lakhon baatein
Yun toh keh gaya
Bola kuch na tere saamne

After that he had searched her best friend, surya, who love her... He came to know about him in a party where they accidentally met him... Jodha just casually talked him... But Jalal has seen something more than friendship in his eyes... That day he has felt jealous and proud to have a precious gem like her...


O oo..
Hue na be-gaane bhi tum hoke aur ke
Dekho tum na mere hi bane
Afsos hota hai, dil bhi yeh rota hai

Sapne sanjota hai, pagla hua soche yeh
Hum the mile, tumse na jaane kyun
Meelon ke hain faasle.. Tum se na jaane kyun
Anjaane hai silsaley.. Tum se na jaane kyun
Sapne hai, palkon tale.. Tum se na jaane kyun


He came out of his dream land ... When he felt his phone vibrates in his pocket... He picked it up...
His handsome face got adored with a pure genuine heartfelt smile escaped his lips...
It states that due to hospital staff's carelessness his file got changed with a cancer patient and he is fit and fine...
His happiness crossed all boundaries today... He immediately took his car keys and headed towards his destination... His love... His Jodha... His life...


Oo ooo...
Kaise bataayein
Kyun tujhko chahe
Yaara bataa na paaye
Baatein dilon ki dekho jo baaki
Aake tujhe samjaayein
Tu jaane na aa.. Tu jaane na..
Tu jaane na aa.. Tu jaane na..
Tu jaane na aa.. Tu jaane na..
Tu jaane na aa.. Tu jaane na..
Tu jaane na aa.. Tu jaane na...


~The End~




*****
Surprise!!!!
Geet didu this one is for you...
Happy birthday in advance!!!🥳
So how's it???
Sorry di agar accha nahi lage to sorry!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow..one more OS for Geet di😃
Awesome as always Neetu🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb os as usual NEETU
Wow geetu another os for u
Party hard dear
Love u so so much
Happy happy birthday in advance :-) :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow its Awesome my devil sissy👏
Loved loved loved it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
wow...superb os 😃
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#6
That was really really sweet... just like u my baby...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loved it
happy birth day in advance
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its beautiful... But he can it be end??????????
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Posted: 9 years ago
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such a sweet os dear...
n ysss tht song made it perfect...😃



geetuu diii look an anothr gift fr u...
again a v happy birthday diii😃
Edited by Ashvneet2399 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh neethu..very emotional dr..beautiful os..i also hv this consept on my mind since long and u fullfill it..thank u darling🤗and tks for the pm..love u❤️

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