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kousani

@kousani

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: avika444
Happy birthday in advance geetu
Hame party chahiye kal
We want an os from u
Pls pls pretty pls :-) :-)

Happy birthday geeta...nd we want a treat in d form of a jl's dream😆

Harshu it is wonderfully written... Loved d concept nd d twist dat u gv to it...will b waiting for sm more such creations from u👍🏼

Edited by kousani - 9 years ago

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aswinpaul

@aswinmaja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Congratulations for ur very very first os it's very nice one yes u have to think about write a ss or ff eagerly waiting for ur own ss or ff update soon thanks for pm

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hemakeerti

@hemakeerti

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Geet... its your birthday?? 😲
Glad I'm not late to party... My heartiest wishes to you on your special Day!! Have a great Birthday and May you find your Jalal soon..

Let the party BEGIN!! 🥳🤪🥳🤪
🥳🤪

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meera

@meeramiss18

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Wow harshu akka

it was lovely os

beautifully written

plz continue writing akka

Happy birthday Geetu akka

hav a blast

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Savindi Abhisheka

@Savi.23

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

beautiful OS dr..congrats for ur first ever OS and keep writging more and more..

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Kalgi22

@Kalgi22

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Happy Birthday Geetu Darling... Yeah may you find your soulmate very soon. 😃

Harshu.. You've saved Jo's painting😆 Different thought. What to say. It's a great start. 👏👏

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melovesja

@melovesja

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Lovely os dear you are always best at description so today but best part is twist which you given to this with beautiful imagination. he falling for her and see her face to start his day 😉 superb attempt dear wish to read more from you.

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SUGANYA.S

@Suganya.S

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Harshu 😲

Nayi writer-e-Os ka hamara pranaab 😃 U know wat , i more than pleased to see all ur writings and wat more to say i m loving to read it again after a long time 😳 I really loved ur description even in the daily threads back some time before , and now i can see u have evolved to move - the next step of writing OS 👏 Loved ur perception more than , it was in the show 👍🏼 Hope u continue to pen down more 👍🏼👏 And Geeta , Once Again my birthday wishes di 🥳