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Hiii frnds... for d 1st time m here with akdha os actually this will b again dedicated for geetu as i hv mentioned it in my retro thread in d morning...for her bdy this is my surprise for her...geets hope u will like my surprise my os somehow i have managed to write hope u will luv it...and wishing u once again a v happy bday...god bless u...frnds...i must say hats off to all d wondefull writers on our forum u ppl manage to write so beautifully i really got nervous and m still nervous abt it...its d most difficult task to write...so u ppl rock...and ya m v much thankful to payal for d helping in proof reading and correcting it secondly d banner credit goes to her and also d title so payu thnxx alot dear... đ¤ đ âď¸ this os is based on our show JODHA KABAR on that scene where jalal gets d painting of jodha done from tabassum but he burns it but i have changed it totally and i have given different ending acc to me...hope ppl wil like it... đ
Jalaluddin Mohammad, the shenshah of Hindustan who only knew to expand his empire and wanted to rule over entire Hindustan, brought up under d guidance of maham and his khan baba who only taught him that sipahi ke seene me dil nahi hota hai...aur jis sipahi ke pass dil ho wo kamzoor hota hai so it was difficult for him to believe that he did had a heart which was waiting for his owner to recognize it and declare openly his feelings
Jodha, registan ka gulab a kind hearted or more appropriate word to describe her would be gurl with a golden heart jalal had heard lots about her from his soldiers her valour beauty and whenever he heard her name jodhaaa jalal used to feel a pull an unknown connection to this princess as if he knew her from ages and so he was v much eager to meet this gulab and yeah y not when destiny wanted these two individuals to come together and b soul mates and create history and so was ready to play a cupid so jalal would definitely get a success...
Amer had all together different story to tell and y not u had gangaur fest celebration going on and rite from d subjects till d king himself drenched in d colors of d fest...celebrations were at its peak...with ladies children all njoying and amer was looking beautiful not less than a bride with d diyas litted giving a feeling as if d sun had pledged never to set in amer...keenly observing all the fest celebration one person had totally forgotten about himself being in enemy's region and that was none other than jalal himself he looked charming dashing and handsome as ever in rajput getup giving a clear view of his biceps and his warrior body clutched to d outfit making him look drool worthy...finally his wish was fulfilled by his fate and got to see his future soul mate jodhaaa...rajkumari jodha ki savari padhar rahi hai...hearing d announcement his face brighten up like a glowing bulb...making him luk all the way more handsome if anyone knew that he is d shenshah ppl would b in shock to see him blushing as it was difficult to see this rare view...and he rushed to see her sitting on d palki and my my he was lost in her beauty words were not ready to escape his throat as if he was dumbstruck all d words of soldiers were ringing in his mind...
he dint knew what this unknown feeling was as he believed he dint had a heart so what could it be and so having got frustrated with d war between his mind and heart he finally gave it a name as infatuation an attraction towards her being a shenshah he had got all what he wanted he never lsot anything be it a war or anything he wished for and so to make jodha his forever wasn't any difficult task for him and destiny too had blessed him...as if d fate had done a written agreement with him...
He had got d chance to see her reflection in water when she was letting d diyas flow in water her serene beautiful glowing face was making him all d way more crazy for her...but he had one main job to be accomplished as he had come to find out d weaknesses of amer so that it would help him in war in d midst of all these abdul who had come in search of his shenshah in disguise of an astrologer was caught red handed and put up in prison and in order ro rescue him jalal had to go in disguise as a rajput soldier and this was d time when jodha had managed to keep sword on his neck...
he was successful in rescuing abdul but he could not forget that jodha a princess of a merely small state had guts to keep d sword on shenshah himself before whom no one had d guts to see thru his eyes let alone stand in front of him although he was smittened by her beauty and fieriness but d sword on his neck dint go well with him that's it his male ego was badly hurt and just to satisfy his ego he decided whatever be d reason jodha will b a winning trophy in his harem...but he was unknown to d fact that d same person whom he wanted to make her his winning trophy will become his need to live his life his soul mate his love life...
gustaki maaf huzoor mohtrma tabassum aapse mulakat ki ijazat chahti hai saying a guard brought him to d present from his beautiful flashbacks of amer...aane do une were d words escaped from jalal's mouth with a royal attitude...jalal wanted to make this gorgeous looking princess painting and so tabassum was summoned and she with her soft voice shenshah ko adab... farmayiye huzoor bayan kijiye woh chehra jalal couldn't wait to start her describing and started as if he had become a shayar a poet and d words flowed like...heerni jaise hai aankhe uski chaukani chanchal... ghane lambe bal... beeghe hue hoth... haath aage aur usme shamsheer ankhon me ghussa zeher bhari nighayen...
and he was stopped as tabassum was surprised to see d face it was none other than rajkumari jodha letting his guards down jalal with a broad smile on his handsome face asked her tum kaise jaanti ho amer ki shehzaadi ko and tabassum with hesitation spoke up huzoor me ek funkar hoon har riyasat me aati jaati hoon ek baar amer jaane ka mouka mila tha aur us waqt hume amer ki shehzaadi jodha ki tasveer banana ka mouka mila... jalal's face started glowing more and anyone could figure out that d shenshah was blushing on hearing d name of his priceless possession soon to be...jalal was v much pleased with tabassum and gave her more money then she must have ever got ... his job was accomplished of making d painting of jodha looking at d pic he felt as if d princess was glaring at him he could easily see d hatred for him thru her large doe shaped xpressive eyes with long lashes...but at that particular time he only wanted to feel her beauty and was tempted by her angry glares to pull her by her waist in his arms and hug her tightly and kiss those rosy lips till eternity her angry pic also dint bothered him to think about his decision y he wanted to marry her... no hatred or anything was meant to b his obstacle between them...he was satisfied with his unknown hidden feeling which he couldn't name it
he accomplished his task of making d painting but now what to do with this painting just to satisfy his ego he had got d painting done ..but this question kept ringing in his mind...his mind was provoking him to burn d pic making him remember his insult done by jodha by keeping d sword on his neck but his heart wanted to keep this pic close to his heart it was a war waged between his mind and heart and finally this time his heart was successful in making him listen its words and he decided to keep this painting close to his heart in his hojra in such a way that morning when he wakes up and opens his eyes first thing he should b able to see is her painting as a good omen so that he has a good start of his day
d painting was placed in such a way that d morning rays of d sun was falling on d painting giving a more glow on d pic and making it look like a real one...jalal was v much happy thou he hadn't yet even reached his goal of marrying this epitome of beauty but still destiny was in favor of him and true he did succeed in marrying that beautiful princess and jalal found his lost heart thru jodha ...they were two different individuals belonging to different religions brought up in different environment and becoming soul mates... silently making a love story which was spoken thru d ages and lived and continued to b remembered by all till d eternity...
phewww finally m done with it...waiting for ur responses ppl...i knw its boring...so plzzz bear me...but good and bad both d comments r wlelcomed ...waiting ... đ đł
Jalaluddin Mohammad, the shenshah of Hindustan who only knew to expand his empire and wanted to rule over entire Hindustan, brought up under d guidance of maham and his khan baba who only taught him that sipahi ke seene me dil nahi hota hai...aur jis sipahi ke pass dil ho wo kamzoor hota hai so it was difficult for him to believe that he did had a heart which was waiting for his owner to recognize it and declare openly his feelings
Jodha, registan ka gulab a kind hearted or more appropriate word to describe her would be gurl with a golden heart jalal had heard lots about her from his soldiers her valour beauty and whenever he heard her name jodhaaa jalal used to feel a pull an unknown connection to this princess as if he knew her from ages and so he was v much eager to meet this gulab and yeah y not when destiny wanted these two individuals to come together and b soul mates and create history and so was ready to play a cupid so jalal would definitely get a success...
Amer had all together different story to tell and y not u had gangaur fest celebration going on and rite from d subjects till d king himself drenched in d colors of d fest...celebrations were at its peak...with ladies children all njoying and amer was looking beautiful not less than a bride with d diyas litted giving a feeling as if d sun had pledged never to set in amer...keenly observing all the fest celebration one person had totally forgotten about himself being in enemy's region and that was none other than jalal himself he looked charming dashing and handsome as ever in rajput getup giving a clear view of his biceps and his warrior body clutched to d outfit making him look drool worthy...finally his wish was fulfilled by his fate and got to see his future soul mate jodhaaa...rajkumari jodha ki savari padhar rahi hai...hearing d announcement his face brighten up like a glowing bulb...making him luk all the way more handsome if anyone knew that he is d shenshah ppl would b in shock to see him blushing as it was difficult to see this rare view...and he rushed to see her sitting on d palki and my my he was lost in her beauty words were not ready to escape his throat as if he was dumbstruck all d words of soldiers were ringing in his mind...
he dint knew what this unknown feeling was as he believed he dint had a heart so what could it be and so having got frustrated with d war between his mind and heart he finally gave it a name as infatuation an attraction towards her being a shenshah he had got all what he wanted he never lsot anything be it a war or anything he wished for and so to make jodha his forever wasn't any difficult task for him and destiny too had blessed him...as if d fate had done a written agreement with him...
He had got d chance to see her reflection in water when she was letting d diyas flow in water her serene beautiful glowing face was making him all d way more crazy for her...but he had one main job to be accomplished as he had come to find out d weaknesses of amer so that it would help him in war in d midst of all these abdul who had come in search of his shenshah in disguise of an astrologer was caught red handed and put up in prison and in order ro rescue him jalal had to go in disguise as a rajput soldier and this was d time when jodha had managed to keep sword on his neck...
he was successful in rescuing abdul but he could not forget that jodha a princess of a merely small state had guts to keep d sword on shenshah himself before whom no one had d guts to see thru his eyes let alone stand in front of him although he was smittened by her beauty and fieriness but d sword on his neck dint go well with him that's it his male ego was badly hurt and just to satisfy his ego he decided whatever be d reason jodha will b a winning trophy in his harem...but he was unknown to d fact that d same person whom he wanted to make her his winning trophy will become his need to live his life his soul mate his love life...
gustaki maaf huzoor mohtrma tabassum aapse mulakat ki ijazat chahti hai saying a guard brought him to d present from his beautiful flashbacks of amer...aane do une were d words escaped from jalal's mouth with a royal attitude...jalal wanted to make this gorgeous looking princess painting and so tabassum was summoned and she with her soft voice shenshah ko adab... farmayiye huzoor bayan kijiye woh chehra jalal couldn't wait to start her describing and started as if he had become a shayar a poet and d words flowed like...heerni jaise hai aankhe uski chaukani chanchal... ghane lambe bal... beeghe hue hoth... haath aage aur usme shamsheer ankhon me ghussa zeher bhari nighayen...
and he was stopped as tabassum was surprised to see d face it was none other than rajkumari jodha letting his guards down jalal with a broad smile on his handsome face asked her tum kaise jaanti ho amer ki shehzaadi ko and tabassum with hesitation spoke up huzoor me ek funkar hoon har riyasat me aati jaati hoon ek baar amer jaane ka mouka mila tha aur us waqt hume amer ki shehzaadi jodha ki tasveer banana ka mouka mila... jalal's face started glowing more and anyone could figure out that d shenshah was blushing on hearing d name of his priceless possession soon to be...jalal was v much pleased with tabassum and gave her more money then she must have ever got ... his job was accomplished of making d painting of jodha looking at d pic he felt as if d princess was glaring at him he could easily see d hatred for him thru her large doe shaped xpressive eyes with long lashes...but at that particular time he only wanted to feel her beauty and was tempted by her angry glares to pull her by her waist in his arms and hug her tightly and kiss those rosy lips till eternity her angry pic also dint bothered him to think about his decision y he wanted to marry her... no hatred or anything was meant to b his obstacle between them...he was satisfied with his unknown hidden feeling which he couldn't name it
he accomplished his task of making d painting but now what to do with this painting just to satisfy his ego he had got d painting done ..but this question kept ringing in his mind...his mind was provoking him to burn d pic making him remember his insult done by jodha by keeping d sword on his neck but his heart wanted to keep this pic close to his heart it was a war waged between his mind and heart and finally this time his heart was successful in making him listen its words and he decided to keep this painting close to his heart in his hojra in such a way that morning when he wakes up and opens his eyes first thing he should b able to see is her painting as a good omen so that he has a good start of his day
d painting was placed in such a way that d morning rays of d sun was falling on d painting giving a more glow on d pic and making it look like a real one...jalal was v much happy thou he hadn't yet even reached his goal of marrying this epitome of beauty but still destiny was in favor of him and true he did succeed in marrying that beautiful princess and jalal found his lost heart thru jodha ...they were two different individuals belonging to different religions brought up in different environment and becoming soul mates... silently making a love story which was spoken thru d ages and lived and continued to b remembered by all till d eternity...
phewww finally m done with it...waiting for ur responses ppl...i knw its boring...so plzzz bear me...but good and bad both d comments r wlelcomed ...waiting ... đ đł
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