COLD HEART -AKDHA OS - Page 3

Originally posted by: k294

Harshu you should try to write one ff now as you r truely an amazing writer👏really loved reading your os.Thnks for d pm dr😊😊

if I get any idea I will try... 😉 thnx dear... 😛 ur welcum...

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Res 😉</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Will read Again!!😆</font>

unres soon... 😉 😆

Nice os harshu.. I liked it... Is this your first attempt? Then hats off. Writing is not that easy... U penned down neatly. Even i wished watching episode that he must not have burned it... Lovely os.. "bhaari shoku barethar "...keep writing if possible

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

unress

it ws not at all boring dii...in fact it ws superrbb...👏

ohh godd he wants to strt his with his jodha...

finnally the heartless ruler lost his heart to jodha...

amazing diii

n geettuu dii happy b'dayy in advance🥳

thnx ashu... 😳 ya jalal finally found his lost heart thru jodha... 😉

Originally posted by: madhutanu

Nice os harshu.. I liked it... Is this your first attempt? Then hats off. Writing is not that easy... U penned down neatly. Even i wished watching episode that he must not have burned it... Lovely os.. "bhaari shoku barethar "...keep writing if possible

thnx madhu...ya its my 1st attempt... 😃 m happy u liked it...ya if I get any idea will surely write it... 😃

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Mei bhi ress😃

Unressed harshu😉

This is really good one😳Good try harshu👍🏼

You successfully put your thoughts into words👏

Jalal in rajput attaire 😳

The way he eagerly turned back to get glimpse of Registan ka gulab

His feelings after seeing her😳Made her painting byTabssum😉

Here You didn't let him burn the painting😉😆

He kept it in his hojra .. his first view on every morning was her pnting❤️

Beautiful twist harshu... Loved ur version of story⭐️😳

Would like to read more from you😊

thnx shruthi... 😃 m happy u liked it... 😳 ya actually I dint like him burning d pic so tght y not chnge d climax ... 😆 😉 hmm if I get any idea would pen it dwn... 😃

Unresd Harshu😳

Awesome os harshu
Love it
Keep writing

wow..aj toh bada luckt day hai for us...we got the most awaited update and now ur OS

Wow harshu di
Wonderful os...
Now aapko ek ff ya ss likhni hai!!!
You have Amazing writing skills di...
Love you for this

Geet di...
Happy birthday!!!