Akdha OS:That Night In Your Love

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Surochita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: sonyakdha
Awesome os suro 👏
Aww naughty jallu 😳 and shy jo 😛
Nd thanx 4 posting rev 😊

Thanks Trupti 😛

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Surochita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: jojaparijat
Suro...OS IS AWESOME👏..GOT GOOSEBUMPS EEHILE READING IT.☺️
I was imagining #Akdha from that EID WALA SCENE.

Rev thank you for two reasons 1stly for posting n 2ndly for liking it..

My writing more OS depends upon how many GM convos we are gonna have 😆.. So feed me with ideas we should have GM convos often 😆

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Surochita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: diya2291
Awesome Os Suro
Thanks Rev For Posting Os

shehensha aap iss samay ..🤣 lol i guess you obbessed with JA cvs n writer woh bhi yeh line hamesha use karte the

hume lajja ati hai.. yeh jodha ka ya suro ka dialogue hai...haha,,you said same line to me yesterday😉😉

"Humse ab aur Yeh bardast nehi ho raha, Hume aap abhi chiye " hayee jalal and his naughty moods always on...!!!! 😳

sharmili jodha and naughty jalal always awesome

plzz continue with hamam suro

Thanks Diya..

Basically you know I was or rather am irritated with that dialogue Uff what can a husband do in his wife's room.. Idiot CVS🤪

Aap nehi Sathik pahechana Diya Sa Yeh lajja ati hai humari hi vakya hai 🤣

Jalal ka naughty mood is always on.. Uske bagair hum bore ho jate🤣

Hamam Indu ki speciality hai use Bol 🤣 Aaj kal use hi Hamam ke sapne ate hai 😎🥳🤣

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Surochita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: swetiii
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Thank you Swetii😊

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Surochita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: indudolai
Suro wat an os...hayee...naughty jalal and blush blush jodha.☺️...all d tym I imagined our akdha (parijat) in this os...suro hats off.👏...I want nxt part also. ...hehe
Hamam ke agey bhi likh...i have low imagination power🤣

Tera imagination power low hai 🤣 kuch bhi 😆 agar aisa hai toh Emran Hasmi ko bhi kiss karna nehi ata 🤣

Vaise bhi Hamam is your speciality so you can write the next part 😲

Thank you so much for liking it though 😃 actually this os is inspired by PariJat only 🤣

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: lovespari
Awesome updt dear...totally loved it.
natughty ja n shy jo n sweet romance...lovely
do write more dear..

Thank you so much.. I will definitely try to write more 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: aswin2134ja
Very nice one but i don't know hindi so little sad

Thank you so much for liking it.. I will try to give English translation also from the next time 😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

nice os .jalal always spellbound by her beauty.

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preet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Omg suro u wrote an OS wowww
hmphh and I don't know it yesterday only I got to know
its just too good I always tell u to write often but u never listen fabulous loved it while reading was imagining all scenes hahaaa

thanks rev for posting love you

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INDU

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: surochitadutta

Tera imagination power low hai 🤣 kuch bhi 😆 agar aisa hai toh Emran Hasmi ko bhi kiss karna nehi ata 🤣

Vaise bhi Hamam is your speciality so you can write the next part 😲

Thank you so much for liking it though 😃 actually this os is inspired by PariJat only 🤣

haww 😲😲😲

jhoot bole kawa katte😆😆😭

sab unhi se toh inspiration lete h all this gutter started wid them... 😉😆😆