Akdha OS:That Night In Your Love

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Written by friend Surochita Dutta.😊



It was late in the evening when a young lady came inside her royal chamber which was shimmering because of the silver rays of the moon. She stood infront of the mirror and started to undo her jewelleries which were adoring her being.

On the other side of the palace a young man was returning to his chamber when a light breeze kissed his face.He stopped n inhaled the fragrance which was brought by the breeze.A smile appear appeared on his lips with a hint of blush on his cheeks. He started walking in the direction of the breeze n entered a royal chamber.

His breath got stuck in his throat, his heart skipped a beat as soon as his eyes caught the sight which was infront of him And he was staring at her without a blink.

Her back was completely bare by now as the last bottoms of he. Low back blouse was opened by her. She was about to move when she felt two hands on her back. Chills ran down her veins and her breathing become uneven as he came very close to her and whisperd softly

"Aaj aap ke noor ke samne chand ka noor bhi pheeka par chuka hai Jodha Begam. " With that he placed a passionate kiss on her shoulder.

Jodha lowered her eyes n shyly asked " Sahensha aap yeha is samay ?"

Jalal who was busy rubbing his hands on her bare back just smiled and replied " Kiyun Hum aap ke paas nehi asakte hai kiya? "

Jalal's hands were nothing less than a sweet torture for her, so she tried to move away from there. Jalal swiftly caught her waist And brought her closer to him And sensually whisperd in her ears "Humare dill main Aag Jala kar use bujhaye bin jana toh toh insanity hai Jodha Begam "

Jalal again Whisperd " Abhi tak toh humne aap ka chahera bhi nehi dekha Jodha phir bhi Aapne Hume madhosh kar diya hai, najane aap ka chahera dekhne ke baad humari kiya halat hogi " With it he bit her earlobe n smooched there.

Jodha who was by now Completely lost in Jalal came back to her senses with the bite and said unwillingly "Aap bhi na Sahensha jab dekho tab humare saath..."

Before she could complete her sentence smooched her cheek n said "Aap ke saath kiya Jodha Begam? Aisa Kiya karte hai hum aap ke saath? " and grinned.

Jodha got a bit irritated and said " Kitne nirlajj hai aap. "

Jalal mischievously asked " Kiyun humne kiya kiya hai Jodha Begam, hum ne toh bas aap se Ek masum sa sawal Poocha hai "

Jodha turned and gave him a deadly glare. As soon as she turned to face him Jalal was again awestruck by her beauty, even without any jewellery she was looking nothing less than a celestial nymph specially made for him. He moved closer and said " Jodha kitni fursat se banaya hai us Khuda ne tumhe. " and kissed her forehead.


Jodha looked in his eyes and saw undiluted love and desire for her. She placed her little hand on his eyes and shyly said " Aap aise humari taraf na dekha kijiye Hume Lajja ati hai ".

Jalal smiled and removed her hands from his eyes and said "Kiyun aap ko Acha nehi lagta jab hum aapko aise dekhte hai? "

Jodha could not answer his question neither could she meet his eyes So she hid herself in the broad chest of her husband.

Jalal smiled and embraced her back passionate passionately. After a while Jalal broke the hug and said in an undertone "Humse ab aur Yeh bardast nehi ho raha, Hume aap abhi chiye "


Jodha was shocked to here it she nervously replied " Aap bhi na Sahensha chodiye Hume, Hume snan karni hai phir Ammi Jaan se bhi milna hai "

Jalal thought for a second and replied " Ummm aapko nahane jana hai Ummm thik hai toh phir hum bhi aap ke saath chalte hai "

Before Jodha could say anything he crushed his lips on hers and lifted her and walked towards the Hamam...

Now rest is left for you people to imagine 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Friends I have tried to write an OS.. Hope you will enjoy reading it.. Joote chappals are also allowed 😆
Thanks Rev for posting it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: surochitadutta

Hi Friends I have tried to write an OS.. Hope you will enjoy reading it.. Joote chappals are also allowed 😆

Thanks Rev for posting it.



Well done My friend !

No Chappals, only ...

PS : Suro, your innocence is coming out finally ! 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@ Revs

Hi Revs, Thanks for Posting 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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kitne nirlajj hain our naughty shahenshah... hayee tooo awesum Suro luv it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome os 😃
superb buddy 😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: harrybird



Well done My friend !

No Chappals, only ...

PS : Suro, your innocence is coming out finally ! 😉



Thank you Anji 🤗

Anji when I have a teacher like you then my innocence has to come out na 😆 and with the help of three experience innocent people My innocence is overflowing these days 🤣

And moreover there were more innocence in my previous OS 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anisha222

kitne nirlajj hain our naughty shahenshah... hayee tooo awesum Suro luv it


Thanks Ani 🤗. I agree kitne nirlajj hain Sahensha 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: k294

Wow!bang on OS suro 👏👏👏.Really enjoyed reading it,haay akdha are so romantic about them now by reading your os.Thnks rev for posting 😊😊



Thank you Ketki 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mamtasingla

awesome os 😃

superb buddy 😳😳


Thank you Mamta 🤗

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