Akdha ss: Beyond innocence chapter6 Updated on pg1 (21/11/2016)

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Avika444

@avika444

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Yayyy I'm second 😆
Awesome prologue payal
Oops sorry first of all congo for new story 😳
As I said above its superb prologue
Jajo r not married na ,I think so
Jo loves him but she is not sure of jalal's feelings
Hmm interesting and BTW who is this Robby??
Continue soon dear
Love u for new story , u r one of the best writers dear
Will wait for cs and chapter 😊
Thanks for pm :-) :-)

Edited by avika444 - 9 years ago

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aswinpaul

@aswinmaja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Congratulations for new story very nice prologue it's look like it's going to be very hot ff update first chapter soon pm me make it fast don't be late one more time congrats

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aswinpaul

@aswinmaja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Update the character sketch soon make it fast pm me don't know be late

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Geetbaala

@Geetbaala

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Congrats For new story Payu🥳

Surprised to see new ss... Ahem Ahem Prologue😉

Continue soon and give updates.

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Dani

@erning_w

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Congraaattz for your new story Payal 🤗

☺️Prologue

Very hot interesting dear

But it's like their both had a some problem.

Revealed soon Payal

With update fast 😳

Continue soon soon and soon dear..

And Please don't take a long time

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

interesting prologue...pls update first chapi soon nd do pm

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

congrats for new story payal...
prologue was super hot nd nice...
update 1st chapter soon dear...

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futus

@futus

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

nice title dear...by the prologue the story seems dark n passionate. update soon n plss pm me next time... 😃

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: avika444
Yayyy I'm second 😆
Awesome prologue payal
Oops sorry first of all congo for new story 😳
As I said above its superb prologue
Jajo r not married na ,I think so
Jo loves him but she is not sure of jalal's feelings
Hmm interesting and BTW who is this Robby??
Continue soon dear
Love u for new story , u r one of the best writers dear
Will wait for cs and chapter 😊
Thanks for pm :-) :-)

Thankyou so much avika🤗

Love u 2 dearie😃

And one of the best writers😲

Omg avika but it means a lot to hear such words from u😊