JA FF 'The Secret Of Hearts' Thread 1 ( Closed ) - Page 16

Originally posted by: iinfiq

Of course I love your writing style!!

The way you add humor between mirza and bobby is sooo funny.

You know dear, the way you describe everything, the way you delivered the dialogue, make me feel like I watch them, not just read them and of course feel the emotion! It's so live!

I very much like your plot, keep it that buddy..don't take them too rush.

Originally posted by: avika444

Awesome chapter ndi
I just loved it
Maham anga and her useless son ,good for nothing souls ,I choose them to avoid hehehe
Oh wow jallu took Jo to his penthouse house and he is determined to gift her new moblie
Sounds romantic :-) :-)
I loved Bobby and murza convo ,that's was really funny
Yayy he is dumping rukku for jodha
Really excited yaar
Ahem ahem did he call her "love u sweetheart" oh wow
Superb ending dear
Continue soon
Thanks for pm❤️

Amazing update ndi

Originally posted by: meeramiss18

Amazing update ndi

Jalal wants to see jo so he bought a mob for her

Juhi was shocked when she hears jalal coming to her house for dinner

same is the case wid mothi

mirza and bobby were funny guys

maham wants adham to be back to his original position

finally Jalal will get rid of ruks

and hi sweet talks with jo was vry cute

really njoyed and loved dis update

waiting for nxt part dear

thnks for the pm dear

Hey Ndi..awesome chappy dear👏

Awesome update dear it was lovly to read about joja morning talk... I d bond bobby mirza... is nice...
also bond b/w jalal abdul mirza... is so lovely. ...
juhi nd jodha bond like a mother nd daughter...
jo nd moti friendship is so good...
ooo even salima has a part... jalal was right she should be strong nd come back ...
update next part soon nd do pm...

wow dear lafz nahi mere pass aap itni acchi writer ho har pal aapki update ka intezar rehta hai i loved your jalal kitna pyar karta hai jodha ko plzz di update soon eagerly waiting.

awesome ff ndi

Originally posted by: .AKDHASWARA.

awesome ff ndi

loved every bit of it read all chapters

you are a amazing writer

do pm me when u update

Originally posted by: Geetbaala

Hey Ndi..awesome chappy dear👏

Bobby and Mirza are very cute characters..

I felt so happy for Jodha.

Both moti and Juhi aunty were happy for Jo.

And loved his surprise for Jo.

Aww..Maham came to know about the phone..in future will she create any rift BTW these love birds?

This Adham is good for nothing character.. Always gets his position coz of his mother's recommend.

Oh wow salima will enter along with Shareef..interesting.

Thanks for the pm dear.

Continue soon..waiting for next chappy.