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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 10 years ago

#171

Awesome update Ndi👏

Waiting for the next part,thnx for the pm😃

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 10 years ago

#172

hey ndii...wonderful chap dear..
jst loved it.
loved ja jo mrng talk. he is vry sweetly handlng hr.
loved mirza n bobby bonding n ther talk r vry funny...much needed.gud tht u invlvd bobby also
thy made a gud pair...hehehe.
jalal is planning evrythng vry smuthly n prfctly.
ohh...maham saw the gift n she is curious abut it hope she nt creat any prblm.
wow...new entry salima n shareef nice n if u wnt u cn mk a entry of one more villan abumali also..
hehe only if u wnt.
now this pace of story was nice bcuz previously it was going smoothly but speedly also n i was thinking tht do u wnt to cmplt this story soon bcuz if its go lik tht it will end soon but nw its fine. i m sorry if i say anythng wrng or anythng u dnt like...sorry again.
waiting fr nxt chap updt soon dear
n thanks fr pm 🤗

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swriter

@swriter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#173

Awesome chapter buddy i liked bobby and mirja's bonding.now i m eagerly waiting for next chapter plz update soon

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Ndi81

@Ndi81

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#174

Originally posted by: lovespari
hey ndii...wonderful chap dear..
jst loved it.
loved ja jo mrng talk. he is vry sweetly handlng hr.
loved mirza n bobby bonding n ther talk r vry funny...much needed.gud tht u invlvd bobby also
thy made a gud pair...hehehe.
jalal is planning evrythng vry smuthly n prfctly.
ohh...maham saw the gift n she is curious abut it hope she nt creat any prblm.
wow...new entry salima n shareef nice n if u wnt u cn mk a entry of one more villan abumali also..
hehe only if u wnt.
now this pace of story was nice bcuz previously it was going smoothly but speedly also n i was thinking tht do u wnt to cmplt this story soon bcuz if its go lik tht it will end soon but nw its fine. i m sorry if i say anythng wrng or anythng u dnt like...sorry again.
waiting fr nxt chap updt soon dear
n thanks fr pm 🤗

hahahhaa thank you for your comment ... im welcoming to critics and advices so no worry ... yes i got very fast pace in the last 3 chapter but no plan to end it soon .. 😉

im glad everyones likes bobby mirza bonding hihihi they are soo adorable .. im glad in the final moment i make bobby main character hahaa

will consider to put abu mali as one villain because he is in y mind too and i already had the image of his character only need to fit in to which chapter