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futus

@futus

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Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: ndi.anggraeni81

thanks a lot buddy

but why didn't u pm me...?? 😭

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Ndi81

@Ndi81

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Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: futus
but why didn't u pm me...?? 😭

ooh man .. i missed you ... sorry buddy ...

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meera

@meeramiss18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#143

Res dear

will cmnt aftet reading

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RamSiyaRam

@RamSiyaRam

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#144

story is going very well, great work. so now salima will be the target and attention on her? sharif is not sharif, hahhaha

it would be nice to have some humour to break the sad emotions. jodha relative can be added for support and someone for bakshi too

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Ndi81

@Ndi81

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Posted: 10 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam
story is going very well, great work. so now salima will be the target and attention on her? sharif is not sharif, hahhaha
it would be nice to have some humour to break the sad emotions. jodha relative can be added for support and someone for bakshi too

ok note it .. thank you buddy ... ooh i already have someone for bhaksi hahahha

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aswinpaul

@aswinmaja

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Very nice chapter all are super especially Mirza and Bobby are super i think adham try to snach jodha eagerly waiting for nest chapter pm me thanks for pm

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Ndi81

@Ndi81

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Posted: 10 years ago

#147

Originally posted by: aswin2134ja
Very nice chapter all are super especially Mirza and Bobby are super i think adham try to snach jodha eagerly waiting for nest chapter pm me thanks for pm

welcome buddy ... yes i love mirza bobby bonding too haha at first he was just a side character but then i was like why not make him main character too .. jalal have abdul as bff and i want mirza have that too hihihi bobby mirza very cute

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iinfiq

@iinfiq

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Of course I love your writing style!!

The way you add humor between mirza and bobby is sooo funny.

You know dear, the way you describe everything, the way you delivered the dialogue, make me feel like I watch them, not just read them and of course feel the emotion! It's so live!

I very much like your plot, keep it that buddy..don't take them too rush.

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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#149

Awesome chapter ndi
I just loved it
Maham anga and her useless son ,good for nothing souls ,I choose them to avoid hehehe
Oh wow jallu took Jo to his penthouse house and he is determined to gift her new moblie
Sounds romantic :-) :-)
I loved Bobby and murza convo ,that's was really funny
Yayy he is dumping rukku for jodha
Really excited yaar
Ahem ahem did he call her "love u sweetheart" oh wow
Superb ending dear
Continue soon
Thanks for pm❤️