Akdha ff **//Ek vivaah aisa bhi //** THREAD 1( closed ) - Page 91

Originally posted by: SUSHlovesJOJA

Really an extra ordinary narration, mind blowing imagination... I really very thankful to you aavika for ur precious pm... love you darling... please aise hi next chapters ko bhi pm karna please...😊

Originally posted by: avika444

Hi nidhi

Update will be up max by tomorrow dear😉

Originally posted by: harshu27

wow awsum avi...I simply loved d update 👏 😳 splly d collage of parijat was fab 👏 😉 👏 loved joja's cute banter and jalal is truly caring person...jo is really lucky 2 hav him ad a hubby 2 😉 u have penned dwn so beautifully... 👏 😛 waiting fr ur nxt update... 😉

Originally posted by: lovespari

really 😛 wow dii...eagrly waiting 😃

Originally posted by: melovesja

Superb update. joja care for each other and accept their family with new relation and hamida 's gesture was lovely. she whole heartedly welcome jo as her dil and say its her home . jo complete all rituals and make gajjar ka halwa and ja's teasing was very sweet.room dack was embarrassing for both but in that scan jo understand her changed relationship with jalal nicely written her visit to memory lane when they are friends. Beautifully saw jalal's changing feelings he is unknown to it but feel some change.he can't bear her tears and love his antics to make jo happy.thanks for pm. I like jalal's gift it was beautiful edits.

Originally posted by: shruthikarthik

Ress

Unress 😳

Congrats Avika 67 likes 🥳eppudu 72 like 😉😆

Superb chapter aviks .. everything was just perfect... Ur story progressing at right pace.. loved each and every bit of the update bangaram...👏 Thank u bangaram 😃😳 I'm really really happy to hear this from u ra 😳

They got married according to islamic rituals.. they saw each other after the nikah.. in mirror.. beautiful.. loved it.😳 Nishu help chesindi ,inka Google Anna unnaru ga 😉😆

Jodha crying after her parents left.. So nice of hamida consoling her bahu.. lovely gesture..liked maina's words to Jo..😭 Mummy gurthuvacchindi kada 😳

Jalal can't see jodha's tears... his antics r so cute.. he bring back her missing smile on her beautiful face..he achieved his goal..😆 He is still child from his HEART 😉😆 anduke inta cute and naughty 😆

Aaj raat yahi bitaani hai kya...what's in Jalal's mind.. sheriff banda hai naa 😉 hawww don't take him wrong ,they can't spend the night outside na ,isiliye he said that ,of course with little mischief 😉😆 otherwise banda is very decent 😆

Jodha entering in Jalal's/their room...her emotions and uneasiness..she remembering their childhood days... JJ's awkwardness in sharing the same room...U described very well avika👏 thanks ra ,I'm glad u liked that part 😳

His gift on FN was a good choice..beautiful college of their childhood pics..lovely one..loved their morning convo...Jo back to her gabbar mood ..ordered Jalal to share same bed.. he he.. Eppudokappudu ravali kada 😆

Yummy.. gazar ki halwaa .. me too love it... Jalal ko bhi achha lagi😳

He didn't know when she learnt cooking... U didn't know many things abot Jo..virgin jallu miyaa 😉 I too love gajar ka halwa ,yup he don't know many things about her, he was in abroad na and Jo changed a lot in those three years 😉

Jalal's gift for walima green saree .. hmmm y not a daimond😉 daimond only for suku 😡 why not for jodha 😡😆 ho 😲 inta amulyamaina gift icchadu kada , collage ,daani mundu diamond ring entha ?😆

Finally,Jalal falling for beautiful Jo.😳.smitten with her beauty in green saree.😃. hoping soon he understand what the unknown feeling that surprised him.. His gaze n compliment made jodha blush😳 so sweet is just like icing on the cake 😛 he will be the first one to understand his feelings 😆

Continue soon darling .. ..❤️ Will continue soon ra

Originally posted by: mushat

Avikadii 🤗nishu 🤗
sorry for late reply koi Baat nahi 😉 I know the reason 😉
aab what to do ?kuch mat karo 😆
aap aise dreamy update doge to aisa hi hoga na ..saara blame mere update par
your jalal is so sweet caring 😊 heheh arnav ko bhul jao and mere jalal ko try karo 😉😆
you ll make me fall for this jalal for sure 😉 trying my best so that u can forget ur arnav 😆
lovely update.. Thanks dear 😳
and the gift was so good and his reason behind this gift ..lovely gift HAINA ?? Iske peeche bade paapad belne pade
he is missing his gabbar badly ..hmm 😊
hope everything becomes normal soon .and humein romantic moments v mile 🤣
continue soon hmm don't worry ,romantic moments bhi milenge dear 😉
and dii I told u to remove that sada hua pic from the collage. Hehehe haan u told me ,par I din't get any other pic 😆 isiliye adjust karlo na 🤣

Originally posted by: Phulchukki

Nice update. Sweet and simple one. thnx for d pm and update soon 😊

Originally posted by: lovespari

Avikka dii... Nidhi 🤗
frst congratulation fr ur pages crossing century...congrts dii...n its nothing dii its desrve more n will gt it... Thank u so much dear , hope so 😉😆
ok now cuming to updt...its awesome dii...fantastic amazing...simply superb loved it. Glad u loved the chapter dear 😊
so now finally ja jo mrry to both religion n officially hubby n wify...hehe...luvd ur describtion of muslim wedding its beautyful...n sweet prt was sumthing...dnt knw but feel bad fr ja but undrstnd jo also...its nt tht she nvr feed ja bfr but now aftr mrrge sumthing changd btwn thm n thts jo feel..but luv ja...he is so undrstnding.. Aww u r also understanding nishu, u understood jodha's plight so easily 😳
bidaayi prt was emotinl one...but loves ur line of maina...its beautyful dii..aww..ja cnt see jo crying n feel sting in his heart n tht y he leaves...beautyful loved it. Thanks dear , everyone liked maina's lines 😊
loved jo n hamida prt...its really beautyful to see ther bonding as if lik thy r nt mil n dil but mother daughtr pair...its beautyful n her wrds fr consoling jo was superb..luv the lines" cnt see tears in ur eyes"...dii lik shw in ur story also no one cn see tears in jo eye espclly ja...hehe..but nice.hamida's character is the same as shown in jodha Akbar dear, and jalal hehe he is my creation 😆
aww...ja he so sweet again he made jo smile with his antics...hehe...lucky jo...beautyful.
grih pravsh..nice describd dii...n thn aftr hamida tk jo to her new room whic is nt new fr jo but now she feel strng n she gt nervous...but hamida made hr relax by saying its jst ritual...h dii i really love this hamida she is so loving caring n undrstndng mil..hope evryone gt lik her mil...she is simply amazing...wish the same dear, in ja also hamida ws like this only 😳
jo was feeling uncomfrtable n then ja cum n he also feel the same...the room whr thy spnd too much tim was now suddnly strt feeling awkwrd ther...beautyful description of ther innr turmoil n thr emotion...but love ja concern fr jo ther n the Gift a beautyful collage with beautyful memmories of thr childhood...loved it...dii collage was really beautyful...luvd it.n loves jo line "hw cn he be so selfless" true n beautyful...n ther frst hug aftr mrrge...n ja he will nvr chnge "i m always bst"...hehe...but loves ja lines fr mking hr relax n nt to feel uncomfrtble due to this mrrge...beautyfu.thanks dear 😳
aww...ja sleep on couch n jo😳 on bed...he is so caring.he is very sweet dear 😉
mrning prt was really beautyful n u describd its vry well..lik it.n whn jo said ja to sleep more n he ask hw she knw n whn she said the reason...n hw innocently ja appologise fr no mistk...biut jo cut him n say tht she is wrry fr him...is beautyful dii...dii he was really sweet cute innocent person...aww...dii i m telling i will bcum crazy soon bcz aftr evry chap i m falling fr this ja again n again...he is so sweet he nvr think abut him only thinkng abut jo comfrt n wrry abut her...aww loved it.aww I'm really happy dear, yup jalal is selfless here par Jo is no less. She will also support him in each and every step 😊
jo mk ghajr ka halwa...yummy i also love it my muma md super tasty gajar ka halwa...hehe..n ja was so shockd with this new hunnar of his friend cum begum...hehe...live his reaction.
walimma party guest r arriving but our ja was only waiting fr his gabbar...bcz he wnt to see tht hw his choice luks on jo...lik his desperation..n whn he cnt hold himslf he go to chck jo himslf...hehe...n whn he gt the reason fr her late he cnt stop her love..she was so embarrsd n he was laughing...vry bad ja...hehe. Hehehe he laughed yaar imagining her condition,
ja was totally mesmerized by her beauty n frgt to blink...hehe...a new feeling is frming inside him...aww...n he complimnt jo n jo was all amazd gtting cmmplimnt fr him frsr time...oh luv ther reaction...beautyful...wow...ja hs strt his journy on the path of love n now waiting fr jo to strt...hmm they started their journey but need some time to reach 😉
anothr beautyful chap dii...dii did u swear tht u will giv only beautyful updts n mk us fall fr ur story... I'm trying my best nidhi,its u guys who r making this story successful. Thanks a lot dear 😊
aftr evry chap..
eagrly waiting fr nxt updt...
updt soon n thanks fr pm.will update soon darling
luv u dii ❤️

Originally posted by: cuty1997

awesome update dii thank u krinu 😊

as always i am late and sorry for that 😳😆 it's OK dear 😉

dii all pics are superb thanks again 😳

and chappy really you very nicely written

jalal's all gifts nice glad u liked the chapter and gift 😳

finally jalal start feel something different for jodha

dii i can't wait for next chappy and their second night and on same bed

>>>>hehehe excited for their second night haan 😉 zyada se zyada kya karenge? So jayenge re bas aur kya 😆

thanks for pm me

update soon will update soon 😊