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Posted: 9 years ago
Haila monu itna lamba chapter ,I'm really shocked, but thank u dear really :-) :-)
It was very emotional chapter
Poor jo lost her daadi, and u depicted their emotions very well.
U changed the storyline na , I like it, thank godthere is no arth between our akdha:-) :-)
I loved this caring side of jalal
Precap is interesting
Update soon dear
Thanks for pm:-) :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG Neetu..
Firstly.. thank you for the update dear
Superb update
And you really make me cry... 😭
It's too emotional
Eagerly waiting for precap
Plz continue soon
And thank's for the pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
OUTSTANDING update... emotional one ... must say you have great potential at writing neetu.. you mislead me with Jodha's traumatic condition..i thought something bad happened with her.. and Jalal in shocking state.. got relieved that ..it was Dadi's death..phew..Aww poor Jo .. she lost the only person who loved her unconditionally.. now Jodha's pain .. affecting Jalal.. for the good... U have written .. her tramatic state... brilliantly
👏 My eyes moist many a time reading this one..almost every time for Jo but this time for Jalal too.. he was mellowed.. truly feeling bad for him...
He can't her tears... he wants to see chirpy Jo.. back... he cried his heart out... poor baby..
Precap really really interesting..
Thanks for the arthfree update neetu😉
Loved reading this long update.. morethan 2300 words.. keep it up dear..
Love you my lil devil sissy 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really i was hell scared when I read last chapter... I thought u had some shocking things in ur mind for next chapter as u said u want tragic end... I thought very bad things... my god but I am very thankful to u,... u don't write what I had thought...😊😊 thanks dear ... I thought arth would have done something wrong wid jodha... my god bhagvan ka shukr he... ki aisa kuch nai huwa...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very emotional update very well written their pain at lost of their only family her dadima ,his worry for jo ,care and support to her. nicely saw his agony when he feel that lose his chirpy jowho is only life.
thanks for give this super turn to story and change your decision to happy ending
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Posted: 9 years ago
kya yaar
I was expecting an interesting and hot chapter but u gave emotional update😡
I can't see any signs of SR in this story now.. and from where that dadi come from that too at this time??😡😡😡


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Posted: 9 years ago
Btw u wrote this chapter beautifully😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Attention! Attention! Attention!😆

I really sucks at writing romance...

@payal di
Seriously di I do...

But yeah in next update confession would be there and maybe some joja moments😉

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Monucute

Attention! Attention! Attention!😆

I really sucks at writing romance...

@payal di
Seriously di I do...

But yeah in next update confession would be there and maybe some joja moments😉


ohk😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmacatty



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Now didu don't be mad at me
And please share your views about the update
M waiting 😃

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