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Neetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#431

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Di u didn't unres till now

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Posted: 9 years ago

#432

And you did not post your chapter till now 😡

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#433

Originally posted by: Monucute

Umm di m very bad for writing romance😛

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Neetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#434

...Chapter - 42...

"Jodha..." he shouted again while loosening his tie... But again no response made him furious... He immediately went upstairs and opened his room...
What he saw there shook out him to the core..!!

*****

Horror swept across his features seeing the horrible site in front of him... His insides got clenched in worry after watching the distraught condition of the room... Fear gripped his heart, sensing the peace before the storm...

He swiftly moved inside and saw HER !! Her condition was more tormented than that of room... She was sitting there on floor, seems like even the single last drop of life has been taken out from her... Keeping her head at the edge of the bed and gazing outside in the oblivion...

He rushed to her... And sat on his knee in front of her... Cupped her face "Jo... What happened? What have you done??" no response... "Jodha... Say something jaan..." again no response... He holds her tightly from shoulder and shook her hardly... But instead of coming in senses her chilled body falls on his chest... His conscience got alarmed in fear watching her awful condition...

She is looking like a corpse... Only her slow heart beats were the proof that she is living, Jalal immediately took the glass of water which is kept on the side table and sprinkled some on her face...

Jodha slowly blinked her eyes, her little gesture made him calm down a little... As soon as she came in her senses, a blur image of her husband can be seen by her swollen reddish orbs... Slowly and slowly the picture got clear and as she confirmed where she is, she put all her remaining might and wrapped her arms around his well built torso as tight as she can...

He doesn't know what had happened to his wife... But the thing he knows that something drastic had happened, else Jodha is a hard nut to crack... She had bear with his tortures and didn't even uttered a single word, but the Jodha who is now in front of him is a whole different personality irrespective of her usual self...

Jalal too reprocriated and wounded his arms around her petite fragile form... A serene silence engulfed the room, only the tick tock of the clock can be heard in the room...

Jalal felt wetness on his shirt where his wife's head rested right on his heart... No sound is coming just silent weeping, that's what she is doing... He pressed her more inside himself, His own orbs washed with moisture seeing his beloved in misery... Any how he tried to detach himself from her, but his wife is too stubborn to leave him... She snuggled more into his embrace, Jalal understood the gravity of situation but it is important for him to know the matter that forced his wife into such miserable condition...

He again tried to come out of her grasp "jo..."and he holds her from shoulder to bring her out of his warm embrace... But she didn't buzzed "no... Jalal please..." came a hoarse shaky voice...

"ok fine... Shhh... Bas" he ruffled her disheveled hairs... And picked her in his arms, looks around to find a suitable place for sitting... But whole room is a great mess, there's not enough space to place foot let alone sitting... She comfortably placed her face in his crook of neck...

He made his way outside the room and goes towards guest room...

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Gently placing on her the bed, but Jodha didn't left his shirt... His brows got furrowed in confusion, he too sat beside her, again his wife shift in his embrace now sitting on his lap and rested her head over his shoulder...

"jo... What happened?? Say something..." But she remained silent... Her silent treatment is getting on his nerves now, his frustration and his bearing power is giving up now... Fear to helplessness, helplessness to frustration and frustration to anger... Her silence, his worries, her condition, his helplessness... All this factors are taking a toll on his mind and anger started bubbling up to unimaginable heights...

Jalal tries his best to control his anger but after a lot of insistence when she didn't uttered a single word just sobs... The volcano of anger busted out with double force...

"Jodha..!!! What the hell is your problem???" he shouted aloud, while forcefully detaching his wife from his warm embrace...

Jodha showed no signs of fear... She just stared him with red puffy flowing eyes... Jalal sighed deeply and cupped her face...

"bolo naa jaan... I can't see you like this... Nahi dekh sakta... Pleaseee bolo naa..." He said with uttered helplessness and close his eyes...

"J..Ja..Jalal..." His face lighten up hearing the voice for which he was carving from last 1 hour...

He sifted more closer... "haa bolo naa jaan..." He said hoping that now she will share her grief with him...

"J...Ja..Jalal... Vo... Vo... Da...dad...dadi..." She tried hard to say with her painful throat, as she is crying since noon, but at the place of words only sobs and wails came out...

"haa... Say Jodha... Bolo..." He curiously asked while rubbing her tears away...

"Jalal... Dadi... Dadi is... Dadi is no mo...more..." and her head dropped on his chest... While Jalal got numb to say or listen anything... Just one sentence of her was roaming in his mind... Soon his vision got blurry due to salty droplets that are threatening to fall down any moment... Though he had never stayed with Dadi for a longer time, but just for the small period when he stayed at her place because of some business meeting, she had fulfilled the void of that lady whom he called mother... She had showered him with so much of motherly love, that had forced him to believe in God again, that yes!! Almighty had made a beautiful relation of mother and child...

He clutched Jodha tightly for support... He doesn't have any might to support her, when this news has broken himself badly, very badly... Sounds of both's sobs echoed in the empty house...

*****

Eyes are hurting now due to excessive crying but the Crystal clear liquid is just not stopping from their eyes... It's 3 am now, Jalal immediately got up, While Jodha just stayed at her place, too numb to ask anything...
Jalal wiped his tears and called someone...

After a dozen of rings, the person picked up the phone...

"Hey Jalal, are you mad bro... It's 3 am now..." shubh shouted in his sleepy voice...

"Just do me a favor bro... Book two tickets for the first flight for Jaipur tomorrow... It's urgent..." Jalal said in a monotonous voice...

"Hey Jalal are you ok... I mean everything okay naa... This sudden trip???" shubh asked worried about his buddy...

"I can't tell you anything now, just do it please..."

"okay... But..."

"no... Ifs and buts shubh... Do as I say and yeah tomorrow give my leave sanction to boss..." and immediately cuts the call... He turned around, unable to see her like this, stormed out of the room...

*****

Jaipur

The taxi stopped in front of a house... Sounds of loud wails and sobbing, ambulance's siren, indicating that dead body of dadi has just brought from the hospital, gossiping of people, slow murmurs can be heard around...
Men are standing at a corner preparing to take the body to .. Women are sitting around the body covered with white shroud and are mourning over the lost...

Jalal came in his senses when he heard a thud sound beside him... Jodha got numb seeing her only family, her mother, her father, her friend, the one who played every damn person's role in her life, her DADI in that white shroud... Her legs gave up and she fell down on her knees...

*****

Jalal is watching his wife intensely, who had not shed even a single drop of tear... Just sitting motionless in front of the shroud...

The time came to take dadi for burning into ashes, to relieve her from the web of artificial world, to make her rest forever, to release her soul from this immortal body...

As soon as the 'Arthi' got up... Jodha stopped it...

"No...no dadi promised me that she will never leave her princess... Right dadi???" she asked looking at the dead body...

Hoping that, immediately her dadi will woke up and will hug her like every time she do when Jodha got upset...

But nothing happened... Onlookers felt pity for this young lady who was in a big shock... Some ladies came and detached her from the shroud... The men started to walk with the shroud on their shoulders... The tears which didn't marked their presence till now broke their barriers, the voice which was stuck in the throat came out...

"nahhiii... Nooo... Dadi aap ne bola tha you will not leave me like others... Daddiii"

With this she again fell down on ground crying miserably... Ladies who are holding her till now, sat with her and tried to console the broken doll in front of them...

Jalal closed his eyes, he can hear her loud sobbing and wailing from behind but he can't do anything... He can't even shed tears in front of others... At least she has a option to cry but he doesn't have any... Only in isolation, he can let his emotions to fall in disguise of tears...

****

Jodha was sitting in dadi's room, holding her favorite photos of dadi trying to feel her touch, her affection in this room...
Jalal came and called Jodha...

"Jodha let's go... Have some food, you have ate nothing since morning..."
She looked at him and nodded in a no... Jalal closed the door and sat beside her, Jodha rested her head on his shoulder...

He caresses her hairs, "eat something jo... I don't want you to fall ill..."
"Jalal... Really I don't feel like eating something..." She whispered...

"please... For my sake, eat some fruits at least..."
She just nodded

Jalal stood up and walked out, soon he came back with some sliced fruits and sat on bed... Took a slice and forwarded till her mouth, Jodha slowly ate it... After some time she too took a slice and forwarded it towards his mouth... He smiled weakly and ate it... Both have some fruits and Jodha soon got into deep slumber as she had not slept since yesterday... Jalal scooped her in arms and took her to guest room, where they were staying... As its late night, so nobody saw them... Jalal too got lost in world of dreams due to lack of sleep since yesterday...

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It had been a month since that unfortunately incident... But Jodha is unable to get out of her trauma... Jalal too felt miserable but just for his wife he let go of his own misery and concentrated on her happiness, which went missing after that awful day...

He tried various ways to make her happy, make her lively like before but she remains a soulless body... His patience are on the verge of giving up, slowly and slowly her tormented condition is breaking him from inside... He is going under an emotional breakdown... Though he smiles, laugh, crack lame jokes and tell sweet nothings to his wife, but only he knew... When she slept after taking some sleeping pills, he goes on terrace and cried his heart out... Only he knows how much it has took him to absorb his own tears and smile for her...

*****

Another month passed by, his anger started to build in, but after seeing her condition that anger got subsided into shimmer gloom... Only few months ago he thought God has given his share of happiness which as an individual he deserves...

But again this bloody destiny played another cruel game with his life... His innerself is shattering into millions, watching his source of happiness getting ruined... He so wanted to see that smile of her which vanished his every worry when he came back from work...

Now Jalal had enough of it... He straight away went to his room only to find his wife sitting with an expressionless face near window looking at the sky, seems like searching for a precious possession which she has lost few months ago...
Tears made their way like every time but this time he didn't wiped them off like other times... Today he just let his emotions to flow, today he wants to show her that how broken he is... Today he wants to know her, that her sadness is giving immense pain to his soul...

He goes and sit near her feet... Her eyes which were once his mirror to peek through her soul, are blank now... She is just watching him crying like a kid who was lost, keeping his head in her lap and sobbing miserably...
Between his hiccups, she can heard him say..

"jo... Talk to me naa... Bohot akela ho gya hu... I feel so lonely jaan... Bohot bura lagta hai tumhe ese dekh kar... I just can't take it anymore jo... Mar jaunga tumhare bina... I will kill myself... Bolo naa jo... M feeling so helpless jo, tell something naa... Give me my old jo back who smiles, who laugh... Who cares for me, who gets angry when I got late for work, who mock at me when I do something idiotic... Bolo naa... It's been whole 2 months, two bloody months, I m carving for you jo... Please naa... Don't do this to me ... Thak chuka hu seeing this gloomy Jodha... Where is my bundle of joy who always make me smile in worst of situations... Smile naa jo.."

He clutched her waist more tightly and snuggle more into her belly... His whole face has become red especially his nose due to heavy crying...

Crystal colored liquid didn't either stopped from her eyes... She kept her head on his back, let her feelings flow through her dew drops...

"Ja...ja..Jalal she was my only family Jalal... She promised me she will never leave me... Sh...She told me ... Tha...that ...whenever mujhe... Mujhe maa ki yaad aaye... Just go to her...Ann...and hug her... But she left me ja... Jalal... She left... She left me..."

*****

Precap:
Confessions of love and sins..!!

Edited by Monucute - 9 years ago

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Neetu

@NSKay

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Posted: 9 years ago

#435

Heya guys..🤗
Finally updated phew..!!
2387 words!!! Can't believe it!!!😲
M really sorry for late update
so how's it???
Thanks for your support guys..!!
Love you all❤️

Yours
Monu/ Neetu

Edited by Monucute - 9 years ago

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deepa111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#436

So emotional update.
Bt i really thankful to u that its not arth nowhere in the scence.
First i thought that ja saw arth n jo in some compromising pistion thatswhy he was hell shocked bt u changed the track unexpectedly
Bt j really felt very bad for both jo ja to loose her dadi who is only family for them now.
Jo totally shattered while ja heart wrench to see jo like this.
He felt do helpless n alone .
He missed her bubbly jo who speak with him freely fight with him angry on him.
He want her bck .finally his patience broke n break down in front of her.
Jo to open up with him after a long time.
Hope they shared their heart nd move on in their life with neq memories
U penned it down really well.eager for nxt update
update asap

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Geetbaala

@Geetbaala

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Posted: 9 years ago

#437

Res

Unres😳

Neetu come baby first I will give u tight hug 🤗

Howz u?

Finally u updated and bigger one.. 2500 words 😲👏

U changed the track completely.. But I like this track dear.. Humesha Jalal ko sunat rehta tha ya phir gussa karta tha..

I loved his caring side.. His love towards Jo.

It an emotional update... But loss of her only parent can't be filled by anybody.. Only time heals the loss ...with love and care of Jalal.

Neetu now dont go into vanavasam dear.. Update regularly.

Edited by Geetbaala - 9 years ago

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#438

Originally posted by: Monucute

Heya guys..🤗
Finally updated phew..!!
2387 words!!! Can't believe it!!!😲
M really sorry for late update
so how's it???
Thanks for your support guys..!!
Love you all❤️

Yours
Monu/ Neetu

2387 words!!!😲

Even I can't believe it neetu😆

will read tonight😉