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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#441

Res 😳

Unres😃

Neetu dear!!

This hug is for the long update and for deciding to give a happy ending😳.I was fed up with ur I'll try song😡😆

Very emotional update dear😭😭.

You've penned down their agony very well👏👏

My guess went terribly wrong🤣

I'm feeling bad for Jo and Jalal😭😭😭.Dadi was the only one they had

Jalal's condition is worse than Jo's as he needs to act strong for her and hide his pain.Poor Jallu😔😔

I always hated Jalal for his behavior,but now I just love him for being such a loving and caring hubby❤️❤️.

Two months have passed and still Jo is in trauma😲.The last part was touching with those dialogues,Jalal finally opened up.

Hope Jo understands his pain and tries to be normal again.

Precap is very interesting dear😳😳

Update sooon plsss,waitinggg

Edited by Bindu_nhbr - 9 years ago

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#442

Amazing update neetu nd it was to emotional to... ooo my god I was shocked after seeing d length of d update. .. loved it... ooo god I did nt expect this that dadi is no more... I have written it very well hw jodha is facing her emotions r different nd when come to jalal he is facing nd fitting with his emotions... hope jo come out of it soon I knw it is very difficult to bare d loos of the person u love the most... but she should come back to normal for jalal ... like d have jalal controlled his anger. .. nd d way he is taking care of jodha... update next part soon ... thanks for this update neetu...

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aswinpaul

@aswinmaja

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#443

Nice chapter update nest chapter soon make it fast pm me

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Ananya

@zuytre

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#444

Emotional update

U made me cry but loved jalal trying to support jo

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nikki

@natashathakur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#445

Superb chapter n update nxt sn dr

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Shatakshi

@Gupta.Shatakshi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#446

Awesome update
Pls continue soon
Thanks for pm

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#447

hey cutie wat u did am crying...its sooo emotional...its big lose for jj...both r suffering dadi died..full of emotional ... last part was best ever...the way ja confessed its superb...interesting precap continue soon nd do pm

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Priyanka

@..Prii1994..

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#448

Awww... Mera baby... 😊

You don't need to be sorry bacha...

I know you are feeling guilty for indirectly hurting me, but believe me it's not at all your fault bacha...

What ever happened with her, was not in anybody's hand... 😭

But the good part is, although slowly, but I am seeing the change in him...

I am sure, very soon would get my old bestie back... 😊

It's just a matter of time, n as he said, with me around, he'll soon get out of this trauma soon...

But I am so glad, at this point of situation, when I was so messed up seeing him shattered, you guyzzz never let me down and loose hope...

I love you bacha... ❤️

You did a superbbb job baby... Didn't I tell you, my bacha is so talented and good at words...

See, you rocked it... 👏

It really felt so hurt seeing Jodha and Jalal so shattered... 😔

The way Jalal cried in Jodha's lap, was so emotive that it pierced my heart zillion times... 😭

Edited by PRIAAMUNDHRA - 9 years ago

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#449

Great yet emotional update.😊

First I am happy seeing no compromising position and that was good , a good change in new track u r entering into.I felt sad for Dadi,😭 a big loss for the family.Jodha was totally devastated.
But I really felt very bad for both jodha and jalal to loose her dadi who is only family for them now.
and Jalal felt helpless and above all he was missing her chirpy Jodha.
Jodha opens up with him after a long time when he breaks down in front her.
Hope they shared their heart nd move on in their life with new memories
I loved that part dear👏

Edited by .ArshiHamesha. - 9 years ago