~Revenge~ Thread-5 (THREAD CLOSED) - Page 42

Originally posted by: Monucute

Umm di m very bad for writing romance😛

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Originally posted by: Prachi0409

Kabse i am seeing updating

End mein update chota sa nikalta hai

Update fast nahi to gabbar aajayega;)

Originally posted by: avika444

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Neetu..why was Jalal shocked.
I think Jo has decorated the room and waiting to surprise him 😉 😆 😆

Originally posted by: cuty1997

awesome update monu

jalal start understanding jodha

but what he see??

thanks for pm me

update soon

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr

Neetu..why was Jalal shocked.
I think Jo has decorated the room and waiting to surprise him 😉 😆 😆

Originally posted by: vjctpt378

Arey yaar Wat a endin ...so excited pls update soon

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Originally posted by: RSlovesJA

hey cutie ur ending this ff😭...y tragic end ma both suffered alot in their past pls unite them...jo loved him unconditionally he is her first love ... same with jalal he wanted to take revenge so married her but his feelings nd emotions changed hom gor good so dont separate jj ... life we cant see relationship lets atleast deam about it with beloved jj name ... its a request...

Originally posted by: melovesja

you very well written their pain, feeling, possessiveness, pure and unconditional love of jo and jalal 's love as his life depend on her its your decision about end but I thought of some happy surprise and whole life they gone through pain only so they may deserve togetherness alive.